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KAJAL

@foreverhers

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: raksbasu
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Ah! Such a cute reaction...
Thanks

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Anisha Singhal

@AnnyLaughaholic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Res! :*:*:*

Unrez 🤣

Eee 🤣 Yeh OS- 🤣 🤣 Bhooot?? ^_^ I have read thislike 10 times already bhoot 🤣 pata nhai tujhe? 🤣 🤣

Its awesome- 🤣 aur kya kahoon 🤣 You know na 🤣 There was a time when i used to give those long comments- but now i have become very lazy 🤣 So deal with it 🤣

AND- that random gravity check- was a joke i used to crack 🤣 🤣

Dedicate ni karte toh bhi padhti moi 🤣

Well done both of u :*

Edited by angel_anisha - 11 years ago

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Samyuktha Krishnan

@samyukthakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

i so loved this.. the way you guys have penned it its mindblowing... am specchless. maybe i attained nirvana after reading this piece..

love

samyuktha😳

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wonderful OS!!!!

Love Randhir wen dey r mean yet sweet at d same time...loved it..Thanks for the scrap!!!!

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Baishali Mukherjee

@baishali1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

All I can say is...AWESOME!!!! Yaar too good!!!! I laughed my ass off in the events...the best one-

'Tumhare bacche ki maa'

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Randhir, who was busy sipping his coffee, sputtered the coffee on the waiter's face as the words hit his thick skull quite hard. The waiter felt utterly humiliated, and cursed his damned luck. The couple was getting on his nerves. "Sir, iss bar toh maine face wash se munh dhoya tha fir kyun?"

Hahahahahaha it was awesome!!!! Loved it! Then the ending couldn't get any sweeter...awesome! Pura mood light kar diya after this horrible ongoing track...thanks for the PM!!!

Baishali

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Anupriya

@anuaskif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

This was wonderful gurls... waiting to read more from you..

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@.Del.ici.ous.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Fabulous girls

awesome👏

Waiter part was sooo hilarious🤣

And the ending was so romantic

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

This is utter brilliance! You've captured both - Sanyukta & Randhir - perfectly! As a reader, I couldn't have been more engaged while reading this and as a writer (or so I like to think), I love the way you've described the scenarios, the simplicity and elegance with which you've put forth their respective thoughts. Plus, brownie points for the amazing concept!
Amazing work, you two! ❤️

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rajasree suresh

@lovemymanan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

its amazing. i just loved it.

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Sonali Shivkumar

@ChasingLiberty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

hi keya !!!

i am so so sorry !

i remember reading this so well last night .. i probably forgot to leave a comment.. usually i am on my ipad so it is difficult to type

let me tell you ! This os is A masterpiece !!!!

no kidding there .. i would die to write something like this !

the entire date was a roller coaster ride

and simply a treat to read !!

i was just laughing through out and AWWWING at the sweet moments..

i find dates and dinners really cheesy .. but you girl..you made it into an amazing piece of work.. it wasn't at all cheesy..it was fun and hilarious .. the situations were so well scripted.. gosh i am impressed..

haha the poor waiter... i literally let out a laugh reading that..

and my fav was the bathroom scene.. omg !!! <3333

i couldn't control myself there ...

and also how randhir was a little possessive when the waiter was eyeing her ... awww !!

and the phone call scene was also epic !!

and the little peck at the end and the ice cream and how he carried her back <33333 .. perfect way to end a date ...

the dinner was a disaster.. both trying to get into each other's nerves.. only they can tolerate each other. .. because they are made for each other !!! <333

okay that was lame .. but still !!

you get whAT i am trying to say.. i really had an amazing time reading it <333

keep writing ..

and sorry that i couldn't comment before..

this os deserves a lot more !!