Vidushi TS: I Gave Him a Part of Me (PART 8) Updated March 16th - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting story line...cant wait to read further..cont soon pls.
Posted: 10 years ago
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O man its super cool...:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: BeyondDreams

Kri dude..!!!
It was awesome sissy,..

I literally have no words to actually describe it at all...
You say I have improved n u wished u improved but lemme tel u there's like no need 4 u to improve even more..!!!

You are such an amazing writer dude,.. I mean Woah.!!!

The feelings n emotions were just mind blowing yaar...
I mean I kinda knew VD knew everything but that was like a blow..

You are just ahhh...!! No words at all...!!

I wanna read more n more n more n more...
U penned it down beautifully...!

Love
Ayesha..


Hey!!! Ayeee! I miss you like heck! ... thanks... thanks thanks! I still have loads to learn yaar... and I seriously cannot express my gratitude in any way! I love ya sooo much! I misss you a lot too! love ya! Thank you againnn!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

WOWZA!!!!

Yeah, yeah, I'll unres my first comment!

*EDITED*

First thing is I loved Vardhan's role in this. His role in FITE's students' lives is Important, because he is a Teacher and one of the Best, when we see how he handles things and is always... 'Interested'. 🤣

Thanks. I always wanted VD to have an impact on Vids life. Because she needs some guidance. He helps RD, Sanyu, Parth... but he really should focus also on Vidushi. She really can use the help.

Anywho, I loved the way you incorporated him in this fiction and made this self-realization process of Vidushi more and more Interesting..😆
Hahaha! Interesting... very interesting! Thank youuu. It was a crazy idea!

His words were very well thought and well put. The way he says it also matters. And he made an exception. He never lets anyone see his soft side (even though it is a very, very, very tiny side of him), but his exceptions get to see it and experience it. And that is how he makes people feel special.. *cough cough* Ahem... Hehehhe... you get what I mean..
Yes, I love how you noticed that I watched the way he said it. That's great!

Lovely update and refreshing too..
You know I just posted something on today's episode, where I have written about Vidushi too, including the rest of the characters.. I just remembered right after reading your TS update, that wasn't Vidushi the one who went up to Maya the first day Maya came to this college as Dean? Wasn't she the one who said that she was happy that Maya was the Dean and right after hearing Maya's threat to suspend her because of her association to the Dream Team, she instantly agreed to leave it and also be a snitch on them.
Oh thanks! You're making me blush like a tomato! Thanksss sooo much! I am sort of speechless right now because your comment literally made my night!

Annie


I don't think you realize how much this means to me... Like wow. Wow. Wow. Thank you sooo much! I love the way you wrote how you felt about it. I love knowing what others think about my writing... thank you sooo much!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Param_love

Hey! Kri

Lovely, nicely and beautifully written😳👏
love it to the core❤️
keep it up👍🏼
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
love
Bushra


Thank you sooo sooo much! I love how you always find a way to comment on my works! Love ya! Thank youuu!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

Kri! Exceptional story! Please PM me when you continue? :D


Oh my gosh. Youuu! Arushiii?! Commented on my works?!!?! AHHH! That's one of the biggest compliments everrr! Thank you sooo much! Ahhh! I will scrap you when I update again! Ahhh! can't get over that you YOU commented... by the way, I am a fan of your works!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvSHQ

Amazing 👏 ... I just loved it!!


Thank youuu!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --aimy--

This is such a wonderfully written one man. Why haven't I seen this before?*cursing myself*
No words.Really really a masterpiece. 👏👏



AHHH! Don't curse yourself! You found me now! ... wow... a masterpiece? oh my gosh. I am sooo flattered and overwhelmed right now, I don't think you understand what this means to meee at all! Thank youuu Thank youuu sooo much!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: amulbaby06

for Part - 2:

lollipop...🤗 ummah!!!!!!!!!!!... such a wonderful piece... just amazing.. the way u have written her feelings, the convo betwn Vardhan sir & Vidushi... just fab & awesome... 👏 u know
lollipop u r very good in writing such... yaar seriously making her realize... the way u explained... flawless... am amazed with that, its heart touching chalo ab jaldi jaldi next part update karo... am back again so will read regularly, I know became so late, but reason tho pata hai😉

love u my sweetu sis... ummah❤️

Mickey.


JAAANEMAAANNN!!!!!!
Thank youuu so much Mickeydi! Even from your busy schedule, you made some time and read my work... thanks yaar! I love ya loooads! Thank ya Thank ya Thank ya!

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