SanDhir Drabble ~ || Dubious ||

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Author's Note: This was supposed to be a part of LikeKnifes. Remember that story? Which never got ahead than chapter zero? Yeah! That one! Thanks to my and Iptisha's laziness. So, I won't be able to give time to the FanFic anymore as my college is about to start. Plus, Iptie too has 12th. Iptie proposed to keep it on hold but that would be inconvenient for me.

Though, Iptie, I give you all the rights to keep it on after your 12th.

This is dedicated to you, Devil,



Dubious

"Randhir," I gulped, clutching his hand tightly. "I don't think it's a good idea."

It had been two years of us together. The last two years of our engineering. Though, we still hadn't told either of the families about us. Now, that our engineering was going to end, Randhir decided that it was high time. We should tell our parents.

"But, you promised," he pulled me towards the big, white house, looking more like a mansion...his house. I tried pulling myself away.

I could feel the sweat on my forehead. I could the heartbeat fastening. I could feel the blood rushing in my veins.

"Yes, but...but," I stammered.

"But what, Sanyukta?" he asked, irritated.

"But your mom will never accept me," I confessed my fear. He stopped pulling me at once. I looked at his face; he was confused.

"What?" he asked shocked. I sighed.

"Look at that, Randhir," I said, pointing towards his house."That's where you live, where you belong. And, have you seen my house? The place where I belong? It's just four walls in front of your house. (Let's just assume that Sanyukta belongs to a middle class family, because that was what it was supposed to be in LikeKnifes) We are from two entirely different societies; we'd never fit in. We..."

"Shh!" he silenced me, putting his index finger on my lips. I obeyed, looking at him with teary eyes.

"Sanyukta, this is where you belong, where you live," he said, placing my hand on his heart. Then, he pointed towards my heart. "And, that is where I do"

I smiled through my tears.

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"When you love someone without hesitation, nothing can stop it. Well, let's not include the death."
M.F. Moonzajer

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By the way, it was another dream of mine. Not that anybody cares. I get creative when I sleep! 😆

Keep BeLi3Ve-ing! 😉

Loads of Love

Kriti 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
Unres
That was short and sweet
Loved it
Randhir's lines
Awesome
Edited by MAHAK1234 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
~~~~~
unres
wow Kriti...
this was soo sweet...
Loved it...
keep writing...
n yaa saw all your vms.. girl the emptiness one made me cry...
amazing...
Love
Ashka.
Edited by sandhirlover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You really need res for something so short? O_o
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Thank you, my favourite! :D
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loved it kriti..😳
that's the true love
❤️
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Originally posted by: MAHAK1234

Res

Unres
That was short and sweet
Loved it
Randhir's lines
Awesome



Thank you so much! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww... 😊
That was very cute 😊
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Originally posted by: sandhirlover

res

~~~~~
unres
wow Kriti...
this was soo sweet...
Loved it...
keep writing...
n yaa saw all your vms.. girl the emptiness one made me cry...
amazing...
Love
Ashka.



Thank you and sorry! But that VM came out as a great success. You know yesterday, I typed "Sandhir VM" On Youtube and it and Mera Pehla Pehla Pyar were on top 10! Thanks to you guys! You have been so kind ! 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prizi

Beautifully written



Thank you so much!! :D

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