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KwitKatts

@KwitKatts

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Okay! I'm a silent reader here and had actually decided to only like and never comment!! But this OS deserves a response!!

Its great! Like really great! and by great I dont mean the story [which is really cute😳] but the attempt with this topic! Hats off👏... No matter how much we say that we have progressed [and call ourselves "modern"], this cycle [in most cases] puts girls in embarassing situations and guys too just prefer to avoid it altogether! So yeah this OS is great...

Keep writing... 😊

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DreamAchiever9

@DreamAchiever9

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

How I could i miss such an awesome OS... may be I had exam that time...
Thanx for sending the PM for this... I am blushing ...*eeks* ... loved it...

u hv penned this subject beautifully...good work..

Edited by TheKanwalKaur - 10 years ago

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Karishma Sewani

@AnIndianWriter

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

OMG! It was so adorable! You really brought this concept so beautifully! Randhir taking care of her, also with his huge ego, is a great thing! He cooked gobi Ki sabzi, oh my goodness! That's so cute! Lovely yaar! Thanks for pm'ing! Love you, keep writing! :) <3

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

You're a genius!

👏👏

This is obviously a normal thing for us, but bichaara Randhir xD

I died when he was trying to be smug as he asked about her "tummy" ache

That was hilarious! lol

"you didn't use a condom" DAMN... this girl got guuuts 😆

But seriously.. lucky him. it is non-existent for them. so not fair. where are human rights here?

we bleed for a week and no one comes to our rescue :/

😆

Awwh he cooked for her (: So sweet

The sweet MCP <3

I love how he keeps calling it a sickness/illness despite her arguing against it :P

He actually googled it !!! 😳 Aise "dost" kaha milte hai? Mujhe bhi chahiye!

And they watched KKHH?? OMG! Though not a fan of that movie, I can imagine how cute that would be!

Love how he denied it being a date, yet she knew <3 :) That was beautiful

Shit she leaked... daaamn scary. A girl's worst fear!!

But you. The great Saffi. Itna embarrassing situation ko bhi cute bana diya

Kudos to you!

I swear that was one beautiful OS

So funny in it's own unique way

MCP is too caring to just let her be

Loooved it <3 <3

Thanks for the PM girl 😳 🤗

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Gunjan

@shona25

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

this was so cute😊

randhir was so worried when yoyo told him abt sanyukta

and then sanyukta's embarrasment😆😆

randhir taking care of sanyukta was so cute😊😊

u wrote a cute & amazing os on such a topic

loved it😊

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aarti002

@aarti002

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Omg wat a brilliant piece of work..u r a superb writer dear...n moreover u hve a ability to make silent readers lyk me comment

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Kri

@kri1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Hey! I realized that I didn't comment on this before! I loved it... sorry I can't do my usual reviews anymore because of school starting... but the characterization matches them perfectly! I can only hope this sort of happens with them! AWH AWH AWH! So cute! I love the song you guys chose! It was just beautiful! MUAH!