SanDhir TS 'A Walk To Remember' UPDATED Last Part - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Ress
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Unres...

A walk to remember...
You pictured it quite well as to how Parth tried handling the situation but failed to..
And also, that how Randhir threatened him not to harm Sanyu and her family in any possible way..

His eyes depict his real self and you portrayed quite really well..
How he had tears in his eyes, which turned blood shot and then the fury..

The way sanyu shouted at him blaming him to be reason for all that was happening with her...
Everything sounded so apt...

Very finely written..!! 👏👏

And ya, this update was indeed a short one..😆😆
But I know you'll compensate for it in the next update..😉😉

Good job mane..!!!👏👏

Love ya

P.S. I know I've my other comments for you res as well. Hopefully, I'll unres them today..!!! 😃😃
Sorry, what a lazy friend you've got..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: kirtiarora111

Ress

________________________________________________________________
Unres...

A walk to remember...
You pictured it quite well as to how Parth tried handling the situation but failed to..
And also, that how Randhir threatened him not to harm Sanyu and her family in any possible way..

His eyes depict his real self and you portrayed quite really well..
How he had tears in his eyes, which turned blood shot and then the fury..

The way sanyu shouted at him blaming him to be reason for all that was happening with her...
Everything sounded so apt...

Very finely written..!! 👏👏

And ya, this update was indeed a short one..😆😆
But I know you'll compensate for it in the next update..😉😉

Good job mane..!!!👏👏

Love ya

P.S. I know I've my other comments for you res as well. Hopefully, I'll unres them today..!!! 😃😃
Sorry, what a lazy friend you've got..😆😆

I hope i do justice to the Title of the story...Itz a biigg responsiblity on my shoulders...
M glad u liked the update Kriti!!!😳

Love ya

P.S.- its ok babie,take ur time to unres,bas jab unres ho jaye to mujhe bata diyo!!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Piya1702


Arre i wrote it a 3am,n that too after the tedious task of washing clothes...Kapde dhote dhote ye idea aaya tha dimag me😆

bohot thak gai thi,to sochi subah uthne ke baad sanko PM karungi...sorry😭

welll do tell hows it???


Piyu darling ,,..
U don't need to ask that ,, do you ??🥱

OFC IT WAS AMAZING!!!!!
Subah se me guessing ki agey kya hoga!!!

Curiosity se jaan nikli jaa rahi hai !!

Update ASAP!!!!
N PM !😡😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
wow beautiful start
love the title of the TS
sounds quite interesting
loved the first part
interesting
can't wait to see what happens next
please update soon
please PM me when you have updated, would love to read further on, thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
great...will it really happen on the show ever?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Amazing 😃
Just loved it...Update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Piya1702

I hope i do justice to the Title of the story...Itz a biigg responsiblity on my shoulders...
M glad u liked the update Kriti!!!😳

Love ya

P.S.- its ok babie,take ur time to unres,bas jab unres ho jaye to mujhe bata diyo!!!😉

I'm sure you'll do complete justice with this one..!! After all, you're Piya..😉😉
And ya, I'll comment on your ff after unres my comment...😆😆
It's complicated...🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
part 2 asap please !!! loved this idea :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
chotu update di!
but it was nice...n awesome
will they jump off the wall at this hour?...welll sandhir can do anything..lol

cont soon
thnk for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: TINASINGHPS

chotu update di!

but it was nice...n awesome
will they jump off the wall at this hour?...welll sandhir can do anything..lol

cont soon
thnk for pm

will be updateing today😊

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