SanDhir OS ...IF ONLY (based on 15th May precap) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is so beautifully written and a very cute os.u dont deserve the punch This punch should be given to parth.
U have potrayed randhir's emotions very well and the confession part of sanyukta is superb.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsme OS yar amazing i love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjipankaj

This is so beautifully written and a very cute os.u dont deserve the punch This punch should be given to parth.

U have potrayed randhir's emotions very well and the confession part of sanyukta is superb.


heyy...M glad u liked it😊
I had always wanted that mistakenly Parth hits RD,n Sanyu cares for him then...I used that idea here in this story...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Craziness123

Such a cute os...
Love it sooo much...
Keep writing...

Love
Ayesha...


heya...
Thnx for liking it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Piya, that was fabulous. Awww the way he lifted her on his shoulder, kidnapper kahin ka. Ice cream part was too cute. Gimme one chance and I'll break that loser Parth's every bone for hitting Randhir. Keep writing. Lots of love xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautifully penned👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Piya, that was fabulous. Awww the way he lifted her on his shoulder, kidnapper kahin ka. Ice cream part was too cute. Gimme one chance and I'll break that loser Parth's every bone for hitting Randhir. Keep writing. Lots of love xxx


heya mariya...Thank ye...m glad u liked it😳
well yeah RD kidnapped Sanyu to take her on an icecream date😛... it sounds stupid n childish at times,but it does brings smile on our face😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preetika-Sinha

Re$!!

Unre$$!!

đŸ„łYour back again!!

Yipeeys!!

I love one thing bout you ... And it is that you always always give us some hope ... After crap episodes...!! 😆

Thanks a lot for this..,,

Though they lwys manage to dissapoint us, you never do!!

Thanks piya.., once again!

This was beautiful!

I know CVS se hamari khushi Dekhi nahi jati!
But jab tak tum ho ... Tb tak koi dar nahi! 😳

Write more!!
And keep writing os s based on precaps!!😃


heya preetikaa😃
baba re inni tareef mat karo yaar😛
M glad u liked this OS...😃
yeah CVs r disappointing a lot nowdays,but our creativity is has no limits...atleast fictions me hi sahi,hum wo to imagine kar sakte hain,jo hume pasand ho😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey..!!
Amazing os..😃
One thing i really loved was how parth got confused in the end when sanyu was tending to randhir.
Aaya tha bada Sanyu ko bachane but he doesnt know sanyu ka hero koi aur hai..
he is not needed..😆

Keep writing..and thnx for the pm..

Anuradha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: manalee

beautifully penned👏👏



Thanxx Manalee😊

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