RECTIFYING THAT ONE MISTAKE - A SANDHIR TS!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This one is a typical CHEESY , STEREO-TYPED , F.F dedicated to sandhir...with lots of goons n ""dhishum-dhishum"" :P

kya haina .. har love story mai ye scene to banta hai ( warna how will we get to know our M.C.P.'S dedication towards our engineer madam ) ! ;)

ENJOY ... ;)

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SCENE -- parth n randhir are in their hostel room... parth is on d fone wid sanyukta... n randhir is as usual irritated due to dis,, n is punching his punching bag assuming it to be parth ... :P he cant thank his punching bag enough cuz he know's that if he din hav it... either he wouldev lost his mental balance or parth's photo wouldev been framed by now with a huge garland across it...

tomorrow is parth's birthday... n sanyukta is planning to buy parth a bagful of homemade chocolates ,, his favorite.. Which is only available in a village...


PARTH : SANYUKTA kaha na ,, wo jagah akele jane wali jagaho maise ek to bilkul b nhi hai... so just let me come or take someone,, ANYONE wid u... plzz!!

randhir ,, PRETENDING not to give attention is absorbing every word ... trying to figure what her reply is aftr hearing parth's...

SANYUKTA : NO WAYS ..,, i cant take you !! you know y m going there dont u ?? :P Parth Kashyap... dont try tu be oversmart... u will hav to wait till tomorrow fr ur gift ! :P :P

By now sanyukta n parth are the best of friends... they understand each other n spend lots of tym 2gether studying n talking... by which randhir is disgusted... naturally :)

PARTH : haha... acha baba fyn... kaustuki is going wid u .. right ??

SANYUKTA : yes sir ... ab m getting late... talk tu u later parthy ,.. love u... bye ... !
PARTH : love you too .. take care... n jaldi ana... m waiting eagerly for my GIFT ! :D

"" LOVE YOU TOO?!!? randhir is aghast ! He knows ,,correction,, , the world knows, that someone replies that only after someone says I LOVE YOU...hell it was common sense... Which meant--- did she just sAY I LOVE YOU to him ?!?! fcuk ... "

randhir had stopped punching his bag n was dumbfounded,, motionless,,... the bag hit his face which made him wince in pain ,,to which parth reacted... he was just comming tu see wat happend whn he saw his face...

He immediately knew the cause to his stillness,...

PARTH : it was just a frndly i love you !!

he said n walked out of the room calmly... On the other hand ,,,randhir had murder in his eyes!!!...

he could tolerate NO MORE !! this was d extreme! but it wasnt her fault anywaes... not d whole of it... actually none of it... dat he came to know just 5 minz back... when his mom had called...

WHAT had he done!!

he didnt even giv sanyukta a chance to utter a word... he just said rubbish n left her standing alone in the library ...

It had been 10 days since sanyukta had stopped acknowledging him...
10 days ? it felt like 10 years... Though ,, during those days he totally felt that she was at fault...but he felt hellish... He couldn't concentrate.. without insulting or being insulted by her... How could she give upon that daily ritual and instead divert oll of her glorious attention to THAT parth,,he now only started to understand...

His heart flinched when parts of the flashback started haunting his mind

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It was just 10 days back ... It was his birthday ...

SECOND PART will be available soon ... If you guys like it... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww
Awesome update...
'Tat ws jus frndly Lov u too' aa it was so funny 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gr8 post dear, lovd ua concept, jalkukda randhir n best friends sarth, wel it was nice start n plz update nxt part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm😛
Plz update soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rekha85

Preethi...Nice update...

Second Part pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Ah rekha...

I'll have to cook some story,,,

Please unress vena amoris😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DamselinDistres


Ah rekha...

I'll have to cook some story,,,

Please unress vena amoris😛



cook sooN
Yeah will unres it!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeaah !
awesome ..
beautifully described
luved it
p.s- upsate soon 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VD_rox

yeaah !

awesome ..
beautifully described
luved it
p.s- upsate soon 😆


Thanks,... I will! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ahahaha! It was a friendly ILY! Phunnie girl you are Ti! Really nice bond between Parthos and sayani! I am dying to see this kinda bond in show! Aaja hug! Do Write and keep writing! The use of :P in the story! Sucha crajie chicka you are duhlinG! Muah! "*
Love Love and more love
Iptisha!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oye. Jaldi update kar part 2. PM bhi nahi kiya. Kaisi insaan hain tu? :P
Waise, I have startedd typing. Phir mera fic bhi toh update karna tha. Thoda late ho raha hain! Maar matt dena mujhe. :D
Edited by Reminiscence - 11 years ago

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