Sandhir OS: Jab Tak Hai Jaan!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: anyania
A well written one. Write sum more.

Thank You hun!

I shall try 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: rajdeep_goldie
wow...i totally loved it as always i loved all ur works but this was the best among all of them...write some moreee like thiss... love u dear thnxxx for the pm..👏.😉

One says write happy, the other says write sad😆😆... Kaise yeh confusion yeah😆😆

OHHH!!!! Thank You sooo much duhling!!! It meant a lot🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: forevermine
Ohmyeffinggod...!!
Do u noe u nailed it babes...each lines...each flashback is written to prefection...!!! The way you wrote the entire thing...!!
The love story common yet so different in its time...!!
The way you described randhirs sorrows...oh so beautiful...
I hardly cry on sad stories and I have becum accustomed to it...!! Being a sadist and shit...nt this hurt my heart...there was this unexplainable ache...
And for that hats off...
I thoroughly enjoyed it and no amount of my words r gonna tell you how much!!
The pain of a typical ranjasthani family I donno but hv seen a Frnd suffer...so hv a fair enough idea...!!
Sanyuktas sacrifice juzz to save randhirs life...
A love so selflessly portrayed that I was in awee...!!
Gosh do write more such stories...!!
This was wonderfully written!!! <3
Regards
Safrena

Naaaw!!!!! thank you sooo much Safrena!!!!!!🤗

I like sad stories as well... They hold a special place in my heart😳

Hmm! I have heard abt really strict Rajasthani families as well... so I thought to include this😳

Am glad you like this OS!!!!

Thank You sooo much🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Prachijainn
Pari!!!!!!!!
Fantastic!!!👏👏👏
Kya aaj sabne decide kara hai ki sab aaj hume rulaayenge???😭😭
I still had tears in my eyes 😭😭
Fabulous work Pari!!! 👏👏👏

Thank You sooo much!!!

I am sorry for making you cry babes😳

here have a hug🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: SwetaRocking
Pari! What a Big Fat Liar You Are Ha?😲
Puh-Leeez! Cut Out That Modesty! You are a A- For Awesome Writer!!😳

Very, Very Beautiful! You Nailed The Theme.❤️

I am OFFICIALLY your A.C. now

I am not a liar yaar!!! Where did I die to you huh???😆😆

Thank you sooo much hun! I don't know about the "awesome" bit 😆😆

Naaaw!!!!! Thank You❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran
🤔 My first reaction after reading the title... My reaction throughout... 😭 My reaction at the end...
Kya yaar, you made me cry. It was such a beautiful one shot. I am a fan of happy endings but this was really good. Heart wrenching but still good.

*reads 1st reaction*

*reads 2nd reaction* 😵

*reads 3rd reaction* 🤗 (as in to make you stop crying)

I am sorry for making you cry yaar😳... I like happy endings too, but I just like writing sad stories😆😆

Thank You sooo much for reading 🤗

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Naaaw!!!!! thank you sooo much Safrena!!!!!!🤗
I like sad stories as well... They hold a special place in my heart😳
Hmm! I have heard abt really strict Rajasthani families as well... so I thought to include this😳
Am glad you like this OS!!!!

Thank You sooo much🤗

Ur welcome... Hahhaha I guess we r the same in this case...!!! Well wads ur name??

Hahhaa u gotta write more...

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Gargi

@Gargi.swaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Wow!!it was effing emotional. .u just nailed it girl!!U almost made ME cry,n trust me,it isn't something that happens too often! !I hardly cry n it takes a great deal to make me do it!!👏

Randhir's emotions were penned so beautifully, I could feel his pain through n through...u r a real prodigious writer😃I'm just too over-whelmed to express any of my actual thoughts right now..I guess u'll have to make do with whatever crap I've managed to write as a comment😳