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@anyania

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

A well written one. Write sum more.

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@rajdeep_goldie

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

wow...i totally loved it as always i loved all ur works but this was the best among all of them...write some moreee like thiss... love u dear thnxxx for the pm..👏.😉

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Ohmyeffinggod...!!

Do u noe u nailed it babes...each lines...each flashback is written to prefection...!!! The way you wrote the entire thing...!!

The love story common yet so different in its time...!!

The way you described randhirs sorrows...oh so beautiful...

I hardly cry on sad stories and I have becum accustomed to it...!! Being a sadist and shit...nt this hurt my heart...there was this unexplainable ache...

And for that hats off...

I thoroughly enjoyed it and no amount of my words r gonna tell you how much!!

The pain of a typical ranjasthani family I donno but hv seen a Frnd suffer...so hv a fair enough idea...!!

Sanyuktas sacrifice juzz to save randhirs life...

A love so selflessly portrayed that I was in awee...!!

Gosh do write more such stories...!!

This was wonderfully written!!! <3

Regards

Safrena

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Pari!!!!!!!!

Fantastic!!!👏👏👏

Kya aaj sabne decide kara hai ki sab aaj hume rulaayenge???😭😭

I still had tears in my eyes 😭😭

Fabulous work Pari!!! 👏👏👏

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Sweta Paul

@-WanderLust-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Pari! What a Big Fat Liar You Are Ha?😲

Puh-Leeez! Cut Out That Modesty! You are a A- For Awesome Writer!!😳

Very, Very Beautiful! You Nailed The Theme.❤️

I am OFFICIALLY your A.C. now

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@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: iraa_parsh
Res!!!!
Edited:
Pari!
I read the A/N in the beginning where you said its "Slightly sad". There I thought to give it a skip as I know how slight your "slightly sad" is!!xP and moreover my mood was really off at that moment. But then I couldn't resist. So I read!!
And the result is that I'm sitting with a box of tissues now!
I don't want to spoil it by explaining in detail!!
It was just "BEAUTIFUL".
I'm extremely touched and speechless!!
Love ya
Iraa

PS-I want a sweet happy ending OS today, I'm demanding. Or just a 100 words drabble!! Anything like anything!!!
Pleaseee!!!

Your comments never fail to bring a smile on my face 😃

I am sorrry... I just like writing sad stuff😃

Naaaw! Thank You sooo much for your lovely comment 🤗

A sweet-happy ending OS!? Hahaha, nice joke😆... You know how hard it is for me? I still haven't written "ishq" cos I am planning to make it a happy one🤣

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@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -DamnedDrooler-

thapad padega ... you call this shitty 😡 ...

and yes it's like not a fairy tale at the end of the day

keep writing n I will be reading 😳

*ouch* no thapad pleaseee!!!!!

Thank You sooo much duhling ❤️

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@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: TasrinS
Amazing ...
Thanks for pm.

Thank You hun!! 😃

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@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

this is my position after reading this

why this bad happen with sandhir

kun...

do something and make me smile...or else i'lll be like this only