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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello again people! Zoya di and me, are completely overwhelmed by the wonderful response xP I didn't do anything xP I wrote rubbish, Di did the magic xP But anyway, we are back again with a chapter one! Hopefully you'll all like it :)

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~Hum Tum~
Chapter One






And the door gets locked. Great. Two strangers , locked up in a room filled with books. Just Books. What else could go wrong. But Sanyukta's Bhagwan ji was on a roll today. He smiled at the two strangers knowing very well what the future held for them.

And suddenly , the lights and fans went off.

"Wow! This is ridiculous! Getting locked up that to with a stupid GIRL wasn't enough for me! Damn this powercut!" Randhir mentally cursed Sanyukta.

"Oh no! Aab kya Karen? How am I supposed to get out of here?" she thought. She walked towards the door and banged her fists. "Is anybody there? Please darwaza kholo! Please help!" she yelled. Randhir was frustrated.

"It's 12:56 am at night! Everyone is sleeping! Miss Damsel in Distress!" he yelled.

"I knew it! It was your plan to lock me up here!" she yelled , pointing her finger at him and poking his chest.

"Oh hello? Apna dimaag kya ghar bhul ke aayi ho? If I have had such a plan , why would I lock up myself with you? And please , your not my type!" he had this smug smile on his face which irritated the day lights out of Sanyukta.

She stomped her foot on the ground and headed towards the table. She carefully took her model out and placed it on the table. She sat on the chair and huffed.

"Wow! I can't believe this! There's powercut in the college but the little fuse inside your head has started working!" he taunted her.

"Listen Mr. Jo-Bhi-Tumhara-Naam-Ho ,I don't need your advice okay!" she said , pointing the screwdriver at him.

"Excuse me! If that silly brain of yours is telling you to kill me with this weapon of yours..." he pointed at the screwdriver , "then please , spare yourself! I don't think you would like to have a criminal record at this age right?" he smirked.

"Who the hell are you? George Bush?" she rolled her eyes.

"Yeah! Kuch waisa hi samajh lo...except the fact that I have black hair and he doesn't!" Randhir cocked his brow and closed his eyes in frustration.

"Fine , if your George Bush then I am Barack Obama!" she stomped on Randhir's foot and walked away.

Randhir started to laugh out loud.

"Please , Obama ka insult maat karo!" he laughed.

But Sanyukta was in her own world. She went up to the window , opened it and with the help of the little moonlight she was getting , she continued to work on her project again.

"Did she just ignore me?" Randhir was irked.

He went up to the table near the window and saw how engrossed she was in her work.

The room was really hot. He slowly opened the buttons of his shirts. Sanyukta noticed what he was doing with wide eyes.

"What are you doing?" she stuttered.

Randhir understood what she meant. He smirked. "Listen Miss Blabber queen , tumhare itne bhi ache din nahi aaye aur mere itne bhi bure din nahi aaye okay! So stop all your fantasies which are going on in your head!" he whispered as he intentionally leaned into her. She backed away.

Randhir looked out of the window when he noticed Sanyukta checking him out every now and then. He grinned. "Enjoying the view?" he asked. As if in a trance , she said "Yes!" but quickly understood her mistake and shook her head. "No..i mean , no!" she looked everywhere but at him. He let out a laugh.

"Tum larkiyon kin a yehi problem hai!" he smirked.

Sanyukta shot up. "What do you mean?" she asked. "Yehi ki , you girls just check out handsome guys like me! I know mai bohut handsome hoon but please , as I said , your not of my standards!" he winked. Sanyukta rolled her eyes. "Hadh hai! Yeh aapne aap ko samajh ta kya hai!" she thought.

A few minutes passed. Both of them sat in two different ends of the library, passing their time idly, Sanyukta kept making changes in her model and occasionaly let out a frustrated sigh which triggered Randhir's irritation.
Randhir sat studying and every once in a while sneaking a glance at the girl working on her model. She stood beside the window and the moon light, enhanced her beautiful features.
Her skin glowed and he stared dep into those grey orbs...where he could drown in forever.
Her hair was tied loosely and few strands set themselves free to bounce over her cheeks. He slowly walked towards her, admiring her beauty more with each step he took.
Sanyukta felt his presence...close to her. she looked up to find Randhir standing very close to her. She took a step backward.
He moved closer.
Another step back.
He inched closer.
Another step back and CRASH!
She felt her back touch the cold wall as the wind from the window beside her, blew harshly, making her shiver.
Randhir raised his hand to brush aside the flicks of hair, blowing over her eyes.
''Randhir..yeh tum..k..kya karahe ho?''
Randhir was brought out of his trance.He pulled his hand back almost immediately as he heard Sanyukta's stammering voice.
A soft shade of red rose across his cheeks.
''Shit! Am I blushing? God these girls! The things they do! Arghhh!'', Randhir thought, clearly embarassed.
To cover up his mistake, he was about to make a snide comment, when he suddenly noticed Sanyukta shivering. Without any further thoughts, he took of his shirt and draped it around her shoulders. Sanyukta looked up at him, surprised.
Her dep grey orbs, met with his intense blue eyes. And though Grey and Blue are a rare combination, Bhagwan Ji decided that this case was exceptional. And those two humans, staring deep into each others eyes, feeling the depth of emotions stored inside them, felt, THE spark.
They felt the spark ignite.
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Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Res :3
UNRES :D


*looks at Ari's comment below and smirks* 😎
I'm first, I'm first and I'm first
Since I'm on a commenting spree today, I unres'd aaj hi 😆
As I said before, I love libraries <3 and everything involved 😆
This MCP is sooo like the one in the show <3
Miss Damsel in Distress and Jo Bhi Tumhara Naam Ho 🤣
RIP George Bush, aapko inn logon ne Randhir ke saath compare kardiya 🤣
Love him, hate him, you just can't ignore him. Probably why Randhir was irked 😆
And we all know how handsome he is ☺️
AND BLUSH? DID RSS JUST BLUSH? 😲 Yeh kya hogaya?
Grey and Blue <3 I love that combination. The last para was amazing :D
Continue soon and inform me as always so that I can res first 😆

Love,
Ananya aka Sweet Soul Bitch xD
Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Shit.! I am second if I wasn't so engrossed in reading I would have been first 😭

anyways theres always next time 😉
Buttercup sishta. I wanna start off by saying that you've made me proud.
If the prologue was dhamaka then this was explosive.
ab toh I am even more excited n looking forward to write with you 😆
[selfish me :P]
I just love this RD and Sanyu. they are so cute. RD not so mcp. Sanyu not ready to go on war every second.
😆
You portrayed them very well.
So even godji is writing this story and excited for it. Truly exceptional case our sandhir are. I loved that part 👏 Infact I loved the whole damn thing.
RD coming near sanyu. and for a change the guy blushed instead of the girl 😆
First meet mei hi dono ka yeh haal hai. phir abhi toh puri raat baki hai. and lots more meets.
Eager to read what happens next.
Update jaldi jaldi.
Fab job both of you 👏
It was a treat to read :)
Love,
ari :)
Edited by --Ari-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Ananya and Tanya!!!!!!!!!!
The convo between Randhir and Sanyuktha was really Hilarious!!!!!!!!!
Really loved the update!!!!!!
Keep writing!
With Love Rekha!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
amazing update ...!
loved the convo / fight talk
can't wait for the next part
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
I read this 3 times. I mean, I thought I'll just see through once then RES a comment box and read dhang se later. But I got glues to it at a point of time and then I kept on reading it again and again. Tanya and Zoya darling, this is beautiful. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Awsm😛😛😛
Pl update soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Comment tomr!
It's night time for me... Mera bed pukaare!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
wow it was really awsome...thanks for the pm...update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazimg chp..loved it!!
😉 😆

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