'FOREVR' A SanDhir OS - Page 2

Your OS is making me cry too much that it is clouding my eyes and my phone is becoming wet. You have your comment. The tears are the comments from mine

The way of story telling is fabulous...nicely written and made me emotional

Love can be platonic! You don't always need to be with that person in order to love; at times their memories are enough... This was your OS for me! The sacrfice, the pain, yet that undying love for each-other

Your way of narrating the story is just amazing!!!!!! you talented girl!!!!

The minute you narrated that Parth wasn't happy with Sanyukta, I had the worst feeling in my tummy.. I was like Nooo!!!! This can't happen!!!!!

And then, wait for it... It happened!!!!! Her wedding to Sameer!!!! Oh God! I was about to throw a tantrum in the most silent place ever... The library... The struggle was just real!

The little snippets of flashbacks were just amazing! Adding immensly to the OS!

And THAT ending!!!! Baaam!! "We stop ageing when we were apart" (cant rmbr exact words, sowwy).. The feeels!!!!! What a love!!!! Something that you read in a Mills-n-Boom books... Perfecttt (Madhuri Istyle!)

I can't get over how beauitful this OS is!!! You are one heck of a writer duhling!

Pari

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is simply great arpita... i just love ua writing skill n ua the reason of me joining IF, ua such an inspiration...😊😊😊
lots of love... keep writing such beautiful os

Res!!!
---unres--
Appy!!!!!
I loved it!!!!!!!
Uh noe generally my comments are novel sized, but this the first time I duuno wot to say...uh made me cry en smile at the same time is all I can say!!!
It was ethereal!!!!
One more OS pleaseee????
Love ya
Samaira

Arpita sach mein rula diya tune...


Ek pal ke liye laga ek khoobsurat sa sapna tut gaya ho


Clap for u dear...awesome writing

Arpitha di!!!!!!!!!!

awesome.. Love it.. THAnks for pm..

Arpita this was just so beautiful. Amazing story n i just loved it n u made me cry!