Sandhir OneShots - The Tension and the Spark (A Collection) - Updated

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Kashish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_
That is not a drabble.

That is a mind numbing piece of work. I hate you for writing it.

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Hehehe. And that my love I take as a high compliment. Thank you! :)

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Kashish

@Couch_Potato

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: -DamnedDrooler-
Awww it's adorable ... SanDhir n their moments the good the bad and all of it

Very well written girl

Thank you so much! SanDhir are such an explosive pair. They make it so fun to write on them!

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Arohi

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Oww! That is one amazing piece of work! :D

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Kashish

@Couch_Potato

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: arpitaa9
what a piece of art!!!!
you write amazing!!!!

Thank you! I'm soo glad you enjoyed it. :)

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Kashish

@Couch_Potato

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Dancindoll8
This is a work of art...
A masterpiece actually...
How you capture their personality and thoughts is incredible...
You capture their essence and pen it down so beautifully that I'm just in a trance..
All I want to do is read it again and again and that I shall...
Thank you and please keep writing...

Thank you dancindoll! Your comments always brighten up my day! I was a lil hesitant about how their personalities had come through in this piece but you've eased my doubts. I'm really happy to know you enjoyed it. Stay tuned. There is a new one coming up! :)

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Kashish

@Couch_Potato

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: princessaaliya
so wonderful!

Thank you! :D

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Kashish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran
😳 🤪 😲 ☺️ This is how I felt throughout the drabble... out of words... please write more...

That has to be one of the best uses of emotions if I ever did see one. Thank you! 😳😃

Next one coming right up! 😉

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Kashish

@Couch_Potato

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: BrunoMars
Kashish, it's beautiful. It is so *sighs* beautiful. I loved this
''Because it is also then that, for the first time ever, she comprehends the vulnerability of being a woman.''
You just, kinda made it complete like that. The way you went through the depths of the simple fact that she is a woman and he's a man with a complicated attraction is sooo goood!
Like I said a lot of times already; I really enjoy your work. Your style is just so very unique.
Ohw! Then the other thing I loved; the flashes of all different moments you put in there, the story's flow is amazing. Hope you write more soon.

P.s. swwy, late comment... *looks away guiltily*

Thank you soo much Menika!

Coming for you, I take it as big compliment given I have read your amazing work on them too. They are just so stereotypically man and woman aren't they though? It's almost like the battle of the sexes between them all the time isn't it. They embody their genders to the T and take so much pride in doing so even as they inherently both have traits of the other. Okay I'm rambling now. But in short, I totally get what you mean. And they make it easy to write them like this actually.

I have the next part coming right up. I hope you like it *fingers crossed* and don't feel guilty. I'm just so glad you commented! Also I'm waiting on the next part from you too! 😉

Edited by Couch_Potato - 11 years ago