'ENEMIES....NOT ANYMORE!' a SanDhir OS

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unisha

@unishaz

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..

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Himani Aggarwal

@anki08

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Hey arpitaa,it was awesum...

u hv jst penned it down so perfectly..

A night full of despair and a morning full of hope...

one thng i wud like to mention here is tht wt sets this os apart frm other fictions nd analysis is dt hw u hv focused on one particular facet of their persona-innocence ,,hw they r still so naive whn it cms to emotions...

really luvd it...

i fell in luv wid randhir all over again..

wish this scene someday cms in serial too.m sure if it does,,param nd harshi vl nail it.

lvly yar...

wud luv to,,,infact ,,hope to read more frm u

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mindumplingss

@mindumplingss

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Perfect...
Beautifully written... The hurt Randhir and consoling Sanyu.. i could feel Randhir's pain while reading..beautiful

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Harshu.

@Awesome-blossom

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Awesome 👍🏼
sandhir no more enemies !!!

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rabia297

@rabia297

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

osmmm...bit emotional...

bt superbbb...tremendous...when uh mention...they hug...i mean when sanyukta rushed to hug randhir...superbbb...that moment took my heart...!!
as olwazzz uh rock!!