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Riddhi

@3RidHiipkkndak3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

hey,dis was really gr8! loved it

wud love to see dis happen!!

do write some more OS!

GREAT going!!

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Aneendita Dutta

@..Aney..

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

superrrbbb dear...!!!!luvd it 😃👍🏼

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@Ribelle

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Did you steal the plot from the CVs or what?😛I'm kidding.
Seriously! This is so apt for the show and its characters!
You are very creative!👏

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

The story is outstanding! I wish something like this really happens on the show! Keep writing! :D

And no, you were right by not bringing love into the plot. Because I think its going to take very, very long for both characters to realize that!

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

IT WAS REALLY GOOD

IF IT HAPPENS SAME IN ACTUAL SADDA HAQ IT WOULD BE SOOO MUCH FUN!!!1

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Tich

@Jin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: RibelleDelCuore
Did you steal the plot from the CVs or what?😛I'm kidding.
Seriously! This is so apt for the show and its characters!
You are very creative!👏

Hehehe. I'd be happy if cvs steal my plot. But I know they wont coz its too filmy.
Thanks for appreciations. I'm glad you could connect to it.

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kathie_berns

@kathie_berns

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

This sounds like reality... haha

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

That sure could have happened...cz something like that, if does happen...randhirs big fat ego wont let him sit still...n he would actually go n get sanyu even frm her wedding!! 😆

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

I have only one single question? Why don't you write more often😳

You are one of the very few writers I know who have got a great hang of concept and language both. I always tell you , you are brilliant with concepts.

If you had written this in a lovey dovey angle, it would have been good but then you would have ruined the characters for most people here I guess, Because what they are now, is a unique thing.

An obsession to remain at the top has bound two people together. Rather a strange but one that may one day well lead to a really strong bond (if the CV's don't ruin things, which is too much to hope for, so yep I am not). Easy love stories have a charm of their own but love stories with mystery , which begin at quiet an unusual angle , well they just seem all the more tempting. SanDhir are that to each other , tempting , alluring. They are both attracted and repelled.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one and I will torture and stalk you if you don't write more often. 🤗

Love you jaan.❤️

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Hey Tich, this is superb!
I so wanted something like this is Show.
Gosh, Why cant i forget ths ' dont mess with me ' word. LOL!
OCD haan! 😉!
Awesome Shot. Keep writing more.

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