SanDhir OS: Compulsive Toppers - Page 4

Originally posted by: forevermine

<font color="#666666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">hey!!
Ohmyeffinggod!!</font>

<font color="#666666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">this is one such OS i deeply luved the tot behind it...!!
it kinds seems llike sumthin randhir may do!!!</font>

<font color="#666666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and so realistic...!! i could see it happening in the show..!!
so beautifully written yaar!!!</font>

<font color="#666666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">the flow of the tale was simply WOW!!!
utterly a beautiful story... i wish it would happen in the show..!!</font>

<font color="#666666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">the title is another thing whch grabbed my attention "compulsive Toppers" couldnt agree more with it..!!</font>

<font color="#666666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">and u justified ur beautiful title..!!</font>

<font color="#666666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">ur such a awesome writter..very few are able to actual portray the scene with such reality keepin in mind the theme..the character...the entire Sadda Haq concept!!!</font>

<font color="#666666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">do write more... its such a pleasure reading it!!!</font>

<font color="#666666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">wads ur name?</font>

<font color="#666666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">regards</font>

<font color="#666666" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">safrena</font>

Thank you safrena. This is the most amazing comment.

Loved the way u appreciated the title and concept.
It encourages me to come up withmore.
I'll surely write more often. Especially after dream team tasks starts. And they wont be lovey dovey too.
Thanks from the core of my heart.

Originally posted by: CavingIn

I have only one single question? Why don't you write more often😳

You are one of the very few writers I know who have got a great hang of concept and language both. I always tell you , you are brilliant with concepts.

If you had written this in a lovey dovey angle, it would have been good but then you would have ruined the characters for most people here I guess, Because what they are now, is a unique thing.

An obsession to remain at the top has bound two people together. Rather a strange but one that may one day well lead to a really strong bond (if the CV's don't ruin things, which is too much to hope for, so yep I am not). Easy love stories have a charm of their own but love stories with mystery , which begin at quiet an unusual angle , well they just seem all the more tempting. SanDhir are that to each other , tempting , alluring. They are both attracted and repelled.

Ithoroughlyenjoyed reading this one and I will torture and stalk you if you don't write more often. 🤗

Love you jaan.❤️

C'mon jan.. Kisi aur ko pata ho na ho. You know na job lag ne ke baad meri watt lag rahi hai..
Waise this obsession to be on top is something I have gone through. Not at engineering level but at school level.
Infact I dont understand how people pass let alone top. We work day and night still it's difficult to score an A.
Anyways i'm enjoying SanDhir's OCD. Hehehe.
Btw, an easy love story on SanDhir for Valentine's dedicated to u as a token of apology.

Originally posted by: soumeesg

That sure could have happened...cz something like that, if does happen...randhirs big fat ego wont let him sit still...n he would actually go n get sanyu even frm her wedding!!😆

Exactly. For Randhir Sanyu's marriage is important but more important is his position as rank 1. For. That he can get her even from her wedding. But I love this egoist jerk Randhir.

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Hey Tich, this is superb!
I so wanted something like this is Show.
Gosh, Why cant i forget ths ' dont mess with me ' word. LOL!
OCD haan! 😉!
Awesome Shot. Keep writing more.

Hehehe thank you. Even I cant get past this 'dont mess with me'. Yeah. OCD of rank 1.
Thanks again for feedback.

wow

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

wow

this was superb

totally loved it

Sweet os..😊

That was awesome really loved it

excellent plot and beautifully penned buddy😊😊would love to read more of your works,do pm me😊😊