NEW AMBO FF:DO HUMRAHEE(UPDATED PART-7) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Well-Done Princessdoll and thanks for making their love story a little different from the actual one. Yeh hui na sahi filmy wali... ek duje ke khayalon mein gum !!! And hope the next one is extremely romantic, a very sweet precap...

And I have a question, do u want us to comment on your scene in this topic or Honeymoon topic or it doesn't matter.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh alju dear,U can comment wherever u want.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello,friendz.Sorry 4 not updating 4 three days.But here is my 4th part...........................

(Part-4)

Amrit is sitting alone in a room.He hears a knock on his door.He opens the door.He sees that it's Bebo.He smiles at her.Bebo is shocked.She asks him "what r u doing here?R u the architect?Oh what's wrong with u?Why r u not talking?"Amrit gets his sense.He again smiles n says,"Ah Bebo u r asking me so many questions so what will i do?"He asks Bebo to come in and says her 2 sit.Then he says,"Ok,first u sit here comfortably and then i will answer ur all questions."Bebo sits n tells him 2 give answers.mrit says,"Let me tell u,I'm the architect n i'm designing the house 4 u."Bebo smiles n says,"That's so nice that u r the architect."Amrit replies,"Ok now let's discuss the design."Bebo says,"OK".Amrit says,"4 the disign we have 2 go 2 the site."Bebo agrees.

Then both goes 2 the site.It's a great site.Amrit asks Bebo that,"This is the place where ur house will b.Now tell me abt ur dream house."Bebo tells that,"I don't know.i had never thought abt it."Amrit replies,"No,i think u've thought abt it but it's in ur heart n 4 telling me abt this u have 2 tell me abt ur heart."Bebo tells that,"Ok i'll tell taht what i'll like but u have 2 understand it."Amrit replies,"I'll try my best 4 understanding ur heart."They both r looking at each others eyes.They r completely lost.But a worker comes n tells Amrit that,"Sir, now we've 2star work n 4 that we want the design."Amrit-Bebo r shocked.Amrit tells that,"Ok i'll give u the design after some time now u can go."Amrit tells Bebo that,"Ok let's start from the river side."

Amrit n bebo goes 2 the river side.Bebo is very pleased 2 see the river side.A cold wind is blowing .Bebo is walking n smiling.Amrit is looking at her and he is also feeling the wind.Suddenly Bebo slips n Amrit holds her.Bebo's hair blows over Amrit's face.They both r lost in each others eyes.They both r smiling at each other.In background the La la music is going on.Amrit moves Bebo's hair from his face he senses that it's quite late.Bebo stands up n says that "OMG,I'm sorry." Amrit also says,"I'm sorry."They both r embarrassed.But they both have a small smile in their face.


Precap:Amrit n Bebo r walking in a road.Suddenly rain starts falling.Bebo is enjoying the rain but amrit is hiding from rain.Bebo holds his hand n take him in rain.

Ok,gals.That was my 4th part.Hope u all will like it.

Love u all.❤️






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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the wonderful scene dear. Good work👏👏👏.
The precap sounds interesting. AmBo in rain😳😳😳. Waiting for it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lalala... O bekhabar O beqadr...
This song jus popped into ma head after reading the scene...
Very goood !!!
Eagerly waiting for the rain... ( jo aaj tak SLB mein hui hi nai)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
Awesomeeeeeeeee......... but wat abt FUNNY STORY ON AMBO........... write soon 7th part we r waiting 4 dat also...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello,friendz.here is my part -5............................

(PART-5)

After discussing the design of river side Amrit says,"Bebo it's quite late now.We should go."Bebo agrees.Amrit gives the design 2 an engineer n says,"Keep it safe.From tomorrow we have 2 start."The man replies,"Sir,i've told workers 2 come at 8 am.We will start working from then."Amrit says,"No,we have delayed 2day's work.And 4 that we have 2 work hard 2morrow.So tell the workers 2 come at 6.30 am.I'll b here at 6 am."The man leaves.Amrit n bebo both also leaves from there.

In road AmBo r walking.Bebo is looking at Amrit n smiling.Amrit sees that.He asks bebo,"What's the matter?r u thinking something?'Bebo replies,"yes,i m thinking abt u."Amrit gets shocked n says,"What?I can't get u."Bebo smiles n says,"Oh i was thinking that u r so hard working Amrit.U r working extra time bcoz 2day the work didn't started.i'm really really sorry 4 delaying."Amrit says,"U need 2 b sorry."Bebo shocks.She asks,"wha.....what.....?"Amrit smiles n says,"Bcoz u r feeling sorry 4 that thing what u haven't done.I'm always like that.Actually i like working.But truly u r so scared."Bebo smiles.

Suddenly rain starts.Amrit goes n hides from the rain but he sees that Bebo is enjoying the rain.He sees that therte is a amazing smile in Bebo's face n it seesms that 2day's rain is different from all.Bebo sees Amrit n holds his hand n takes him in the rain.Amrit says no but Bebo tells him that,"Rain is the most beautiful thing in this world.U should love n enjoy it,OK."Amrit smiles n he also enjoy the rain.They both r enjoying the rain.In background La La music is going on.Amrit tells himself that,"Truly 2day's rain is the most special n memorable in my life."

Precap:Bebo is shivering in cold after the rain. Amrit gives her his coat. Bebo is looking at Amrit with so much love.

So gals,hope u all will like it.And a very important thing that i've uploaded the AmBo instrumental BG tune in the audio center so plz download it n enjoy the magical tune.













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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the wonderful scene dear.
AmBo in rain was something which we were hoping for long and something which we didn't get. AmBo in rain was marvelous.😳😳😳.
Good work dear.👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
#19
superb............
Thanks 4 ambo instrumental bg.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
wow truly awesome parts, the rain sequence was too cute, awww i always wanted to see something like this in the show but unfortunately. anyway thanks for the awesome parts, waiting for the next part do post it soon.

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