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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
🤣🤣🤣

Sravu,

Its been a long time since I've read an ff... and to stumble across this one in particular, is such a treat! Lol. I absolutely love Bindiya's attitude! She's so cheeky and sly underneath that timidness. Her interaction with Vinay his 🤣 and 😳 at the same time! I love the tone... I'll always be looking forward to your updates!! And lay down on the kanjoosi yaar...😉 For this ff, 🤗

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
wow... its nice to know that bindiya is like any other girl in todays old... not so goodie...

i love the way you write...

i will be waiting for the update... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Thanks Neetz and Munza!! Glad you guys liked it...the next part is kind of short, but I promise to update soon :D

Part 3


Vinay knew something was up with his wife. She had been acting weird all day. Before yesterday, he wouldn't have given it a second thought. But today, it was different. She was being deliberately cryptic in her conversation. And that should alarm him, because until yesterday, they had no conversations. As he was leaving their room, she had quietly told him to stay back for a few minutes because she had something important to tell him. Normally, that wouldn't mean a thing to him because he could care less what was important to her. But today, well, she was being cryptic. Hasn't he already mentioned that?
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Bindiya watched with a smile, as her husband warily turned around and looked back at her.

"What about?" he asked, hesitantly.

She smiled widely, "It's about yesterday...about that...look you were asking about."

He frowned, "Right. It's none of my business." And with that, he reached for the door once again.

"I beg to differ. I think it is very much your business."

He sighed, exasperated, "Well...then why don't you go ahead and tell me what it's all about?"

She gestured towards the chair near the dresser with her head, "I think you should probably sit down."

He sighed again, pretending to be annoyed, and did as she said, "Alright."

She smiled widely, again. That smile. Just two days of that smile and he already wanted to strangle her. "I think I'm in love."

His eyes widened, and he looked at her warily again. He wasn't sure he could speak.

"I'm in love with your brother."

This time, he knew he couldn't speak.

She stifled the giggles that were building within her as she looked at his face. He looked like he was about to throw up. "I didn't mean for it to happen." She gazed at him through anxious eyes, her mouth turning into a pitiful frown.

She stared at him, as he continued looking at her, speechless. His face was starting to turn green. She grew concerned for a second, but continued anyway, "I just...wanted you to know. Seeing as he is your brother and my...brother-in-law."

His jaw twitched, as if just now coming out of a stupor and he blinked. He cleared his throat and tried to smile, "That was all?"

She frowned, but nodded hesitantly. He got up and left. She collapsed in a heap of giggles on the bed.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Thanx dear... Continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
wow.....just read the first three parts and they are great......i am loving this fic.......cont soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
ohhh my god!!! Bindiya telling Vinay that she fell in love with his brother, took the limelight in part 3... i was stunned 😊
Thanks for such wonderful fanfic
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17

Oh my! couldn't stop myslrf from commenting,

It was just great and like u said we are on a roll now..Bindiya Go girl!

And sravu, u are really good at it yaar..

Luv atop

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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Thanks so much guys!! Hope you all like the next part as well!

Part 4

Vinay sat the at coffee table, waiting for his wife to arrive. He had told her he wanted to speak with her, and specifically mentioned somewhere outside of the house. His wife readily agreed and they had set the time for 4:00 PM at the nearby coffee shop. He looked down at his watch for the third time. It was 4:25. Nothing to get worried about. Just twenty-five minutes late. He scowled. Twenty-five. He hated having to wait for anybody else. He sighed as the waiter arrived by his table again, asking if he'd like to have anything else. He sent him for another coffee and leaned back against the chair.

He didn't know how to take this news she sprung on him. He thought she might be lying for a second, but then she looked at him so earnestly. He shook his head. Nah. His wife was weird, but she wasn't a liar. She probably believed herself to be in love with Bimlesh.

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Bindiya walked over to the table, grinning at her husband's obvious displeasure at her tardiness. Her face quickly turned contrite as he looked up to see her approaching. She rushed forward and took the seat across from him. "I'm so sorry for being late. It's just...well, I had to walk over, so obviously it would take longer..." she trailed off, pointedly looking at the car keys he was jiggling in his hands. He stilled them, immediately feeling guilty for driving over while she had walked.

He shrugged, "That's okay. I didn't notice."

"Oh."

She watched as he called the waiter and ordered a coffee for her as well. She turned to him with a smile as the waiter retreated. "You wanted to speak about something."

He frowned, "Yes, well, I'm sure you know what it is about."

Her eyes widened innocently, "I'm sure I don't. Please tell me."

His eyes narrowed as he watched her. Could she be...?

"It's about my brother..."

"Yes, what about him?" she asked, nonchalantly.

He nodded. Right. She was lying.

"About what you said yesterday, actually."

She smiled and nodded, looking very much composed. "Mm-hm. Yes."

Yep. Lying straight through her teeth. He decided to test her out.

For the first time since their marriage, he grinned. "I have a plan."

She looked taken aback for a second, never having seen him smile. "Err. You do?"

He nodded and sat back lazily in his chair. "I do. The perfect plan."

She cleared her throat. "What for, exactly?"

"You're in love with my brother, aren't you?"

She nodded, hesitant.

He smirked, "Now, I'm assuming you mean Bimlesh. Because I'd hate to have to explain this love triangle to Shobha bhabhi."

She opened her mouth, offended. "Of course it's Bimlesh. How could you think otherwise?"

He smiled at her absurdity, "Well, in case it has missed your notice, you are married. And so I thought, maybe, you didn't consider the person's marital status to be a major obstacle."

She narrowed her eyes, "Well, I do. I'm strictly against falling in love with married men."

"Even if you happened to be married."

She scowled, "I don't see how that's important."

He spread his hands, as if giving up, "You're right. It's not important. So that's why I've decided to help you."

Her eyes narrowed suspiciously, "With...your plan?"

He nodded, "Yep."

"Which is?"

"To make my brother fall in love with you, silly."

Edited by nanshr - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
wonderful... i would say
Bindiya 2 (Party staring scene and the news she told vinay)
Vinay 1 (his offer to make Bimlesh fall in love with Bindiya)
way to go!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Sravu, where are your hands woman?!I could kiss them for such creations! Or well I guess its your brain... chal, in any case *blow kiss*

🤣🤣 I thought Bindiya was the only chaal-baaz! Uska pati toh usko bhi maat degaya! Gosh, if only Vinay had such brains in the actual serial. I think you should send some tips to the Creatives!!👏👏 This is hillarious and completely amazing⭐️ I'm stoked on how Vinay plans to execute this "plan" and Bindiya's reaction!!

Keep'em coming!!

Cheers,
dc

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