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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi frnz this is my first FF on bagyavidaata forum and india forum too

hope you guys like it

the story starts after next day of vb marriage

scene 1

all the family sit at the table for their breakfast . everybody was in sad mood coz of vinay's marriage decesion . at the moment vinay's friend came their coz now they got news that vinay finally accept bindya as his wife they were happy and ask vinay for party . vinay was quite and some relaxed feeling now and after watching every one's face in family (sad faces) he decided to throw party at his farm somewhere near their house . bindya too hearing all this and got nervous (as last party behaviour of vinay was disgusting).vinay look at bindya and said to whole family if they wish they can come and join them

scene 2

bindya's sister(poonam) came to met bindya coz they got news that vinay accepted bindya . bindya gave news to them of night party and tell poonam about her nervousness too.so poonam tell her to be with her during party so that she relaxed and not panic while party.

scene 3

vimlesh baiya came back home and they are happy to know that vinay accept bindya and go to congrats vinay

they saw pun pun waali there who was trying to convience vinay to not throw party and also convience other family member but vimlesh support vinay that he is right and he should throw party at night and this party vimlesh will help her too.

pun pun waali was dying to hear all this unexpected thing and also now want to go at party to destroy the whole fun of party along with the family so trying to convience every one after her lots of talking except daadi every one ready to go at party only for vinay's happiness as they don't want that bindya could not get closer to bindya while party.

party time

imagine a nice party hall

bindya wearing blue and white saaree combo and vinay wearing white jacket with his jean0.vimlesh baiya and poonam also joined them and arrange whole party together

scene 4

as every body was now at party the party was going well

pun pun waali was full of agression wiyh her plan to destroy the fun

couple dance was announced by the host . vinay ask bindya for couple dance as his friend's conviencing him. and vimlesh baiya too ask poonam for dance(shocking)

vb jodi and vimlesh and poonam were dancing and spot light was following them

background music

(kaheen na kaheen toh hogi woh

duniya jahaan tu mere saath hai

.........................................................

jaane tu ya jaane na)

vinay was about to turn after dance that suddenly hiss cell phone fall down that bindya saw and pick up to return him

pun pun waali was staring both of them while dancing just after the dance she called her waeter for first step of her plan

so when bindya was going to return vinay's cell waeter drop drink on her cloths and say sorry(she said ok with disturbance)

she got a call on vinay's cell but after waeter incident she couldn't find vinay and also trying to communicate with family member's but pun pun waali always show her aggresion and family member too don't want to talk with her

bindya was nervous and go out of party for sometime

hope u ppl like it

for pun pun waali plan w8 for next

do comments for encouraging me

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx dear... It was really Good... Plz continue soon... :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woah dear its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😍superbso so vinay is having party😛 plz continue it soon😛😉 & if u can send pm when u update it😳 if u don't have any problem😳

"Shilpa ka Innocent style, Karan ki Dimple wali smile,
Shilpa ka Chidna, Karan ki ladyi,
Shilpa ka Aloo ka Pratha bana, karan ka Payal pehna,
Shilpa ka Saree pehna, Karan ka Lonavala dance karna,
Shilpa ka Ruthna, Karan ka Mana,
Shilpa ka Confess karna, Karan ka Race karna,
Shilpa ka Shrmana, Karan ka Oye Hoye kehna,
OLD DMG Yaad ana, KASH ko MISS karna."




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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Munza

Thanx dear... It was really Good... Plz continue soon... :)

thanxx yaar for encouraging😊

i will continue🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesomely done... at lease now I have a fan fiction to read on VinDia.

Simply good and please continue "ASAP"

Love
Mickey P

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mp_Desigirl

Awesomely done... at lease now I have a fan fiction to read on VinDia.

Simply good and please continue "ASAP"

Love
Mickey P

thank you sooooooooo much yar

your comment really means a lot to me

i will definately continue🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏
i really loved ur ff,congrats............waiting 4 d new part........really its very sweet ff.........& now m also intrested in this story too,thank you..........do continue soon
all d best
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariyam91

👏
i really loved ur ff,congrats............waiting 4 d new part........really its very sweet ff.........& now m also intrested in this story too,thank you..........do continue soon
all d best

hey mariyam you know well i always love🤗 your everything .its really very sweet of you coming here on conviencing of mine. hope you love it😊

thanks is not enough⭐️

love you a lot

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: parminderkaur

thank you sooooooooo much yar

your comment really means a lot to me

i will definately continue🤗🤗🤗



I know how it feels...

Love
Mickey P

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Pam!!d FF is really cool!!luvd it!!👍🏼

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