Ts : Meera Vs Bhavani!! Last Part *updated* 'Vidya kiski Hai'

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

nice start waiting for the update

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
I always wanted you to write ffs reading your long comments, finally you wrote surprising me,
Bhavani meera confrontation was superb. What dialogues. Your way of addressing meera beainless item...psycho..so funny. Meera over hearing about ricky and Bhavani scared of meera..vidya running behind her to stop it made me laugh. Now meera gopi confrontation. Waiting eagerly

Aww really

I started writing way before

But on other couple, but as u don't follow that show I dint send u d link

I had many short stories on gohem but.m too lazy to pen it down

M.glad u liked this.parr

Hope u.like next part too

Thanks for commenting

It really feels the work is Appreciating

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: faby16
Fantastic update.. can't wait for next part..update soon

Thank u for d.comment

Will update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Anondo.R
Good one Hiya. Keep it up 😊

Thank u dear😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Manzz
😃 😃 Hiya, My Pleasure 😃 😃

😃 😃 😳 😳 😃 😃 😳 Yes Dear, I Did ! ! 😉 😆 😳 😃 Good ! ! 😳 😃 😉 😆

😃 😳 😃 😃 😃

Will update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: lavishaS
nice start waiting for the update

Thank u for comment

Will update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: saloni27
hiya chk ur scrap

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: saloni27
unresed at pg-1

Toh Barobar😛

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: saloni27
reswa
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unres
hiyuu this is too short yrr only one scn bsss
abb isspe mein kya bolu
vidya bhavani is a kind of scn which i fast forward in the epi yaha yo hai hi vahiii 🥱
but i must say beautifully written
vidya bhavani dialogues bang on 👏 just amazing
vidya openly challenged her to tell the truth to meera bcz she knew she didnt hd guts!
so meera listened their convo
bina kuch kahe sune she reached mb meera nd her impulsive rxn nd yeh kaha sign krna h itni jaldi konse papers bnva layi yeh
i guess honge koi legal docs abt vidya being her sis...
nd ek mint
ahem hving snacks???
yaha pe ahem zinda h??
so many questions
😆
chl u should now updt
waitingwa!!