Dheera FF Cheenikum - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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A Fantastic start

the cooking scene was lovely
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Awesome update, loved it.
The cooking part and the convo between Dharam and the cook was awesome.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
At the end of the day, Dharam is on the way to his house. He is rehearsing how to tell sorry to Meera. He keeps resersing till he reaches his place. Panna comes near him & makes the guestures.


Panna's dad: We had been to one more cancer specialist
Dharam: What did he say?
Father: He told to continue chemotherapy.
After he went in, Dharam said to Panna, "Hi sexy."
Panna: For what you have been saying sorry? Have you been practicing to tell me sorry?
Dharam: Why to you?
Panna: You are not meeting me nowadays. Have you lost interest?
Dharam: Shall we hae a drink? Come with me.
Both go inside & have drinks.
Dharam: So tell me. How is life?
Panna: Not nice.
Dharam: why?
Panna: My dad does not allow me to see "A" movies. He says that when I become big, I can see that.
Dharam: So what is the problem
Panna: You won't understand that. Before becoming A, I will go up. Then how will I watch A movies?
Dharam: So what is the problem? A movies dvd is here. We will watch that.
Panna: Do you watch them?
Dharam: Yes, I do watch them.


Garua: He watches cartoons. Did you go to the gym?
Dharam: I'm expanding my business & she tells me to go to gym. What kind of mother she is! Want to see my muscles.
Panna touches it & said, "It is good. But what is the sorry story?"
Dharam: No story
Meanwhile, at the restaurant, the cooks are making fun of each other. Dharam comes to the restaurant rehearsing, "I'm sorry."
Meera comes near the restaurant.


Dharam: London rains are unpredictable. That is why I always carry umbrella.Shall we go in? Do I have to give you an invitation card to come inside the umbrella?
Meera: But you are gong to the other direction.
Dharam: Yes but I don't loke to see the face of that lamp post. So I am going in other direction.
Meera gets into the umbrella.
Dharam: There are many good things to be seen in London like malls, museums etc. Then why did you waste your time in making zafrani pulav?
Meera: I was hurt because of yor ego.
Dharam: If i had an ego, I would not have called you to have coffee at my restaurant. Both go to the restaurant to have coffee.


The cooks are gossipping that, "We have never heard sorry from our boss's mouth."
Dharam is thinking, "Say sorry now."
Dharam: Nowadays, there are so many people from London wh come to have Indian dishes.
Meera: The air fares have gone down. So there are more tourists.
The waiter gives coffee. Dharam said, "Thank you."
Meera takes the sugar cube & adds it to her coffee.
Dharam: Sugar ruins the entire thing.
Meera: i like sugar.It ruins the taste of zafrani pulav. Not coffee.
Dharam: Which hotel do you stay?
Meera:I'm not staying in a hotel. I'm staying with my friend Shalini. That day she had come to your hotel.
Dharam: That is why you move in this area.
Meera: One more reason is that I like to get insulted again & again.
Dharam is still struggling to say sorry. All the cooks are watching from the top.
Dharam: Where do you live?
Meera: Delhi. I'm staying with my dad. I lost my mother.
Dharam: Now I understand that you have come to London to forget your sorrows as you lost your mom.
Meera: she died 23 years ago.
Dharam: It seems that you've got sorrows.
Meera: what sorrow?
Dharam: I shouldn't be asking you asit is your personal matter.
He then gives her the spoon to look at her face & said,"Tears are about to roll out of your eyes. I mean to ask you about the tragedy with your boyfriend or broken relationship or something?"
Meera: That might be there but I have not yet married. even if there is a broken relationship, he would have been here. i've come here for the official purpose. I'm working in a software company & they have posted me here.
Dharam: ego is not good for women.
Meera: Is it fine if you have it?
Dharam: If I had an ego, I wouldn't have gven that to the one who has become a part & parcel of my life.
He gives her the umbrella & said,"It s raining outside.
Both go out.
Dharam: Party is good. It always rains in London. If I give the umbrella to the customer, they have to come here to give it back.
The song plays
Cheni kum hain cheeni kum hain thodi thodi tujh main hain kum hain kum kum.
One of the cooks said, "Giving an umbrella means the person's world has started."

Dharam goes home & meets Panna.
Panna: dvd's?
Dharam: I will get it tomorrow.
Panna: Where is the umbrella?
Gaura is watching the boxng match on TV admires the boxer's muscles.
Dharam: Did you have your food?
Gaura: Yes, I had. I cant wait for long.
Dharam:Good that you had.If you are alive, I'm also alive.
The cooks see Meera coming to the restaurant. After having her dish, she returns the umbrella to Dharam.

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Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Dharam again n sees meera
But can't bring himself to say sorry
Can't wait to see what happens next
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Nice Part.😊
Dharam and Meera Part was so Nice.😊
The Whole Conversations were so Nice.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dharam practising to say sorry to meera was cute.but he cudnt say sorry.Will he say sorry?dharam panna relation is so cute.conversation regarding watching adult movie is funny.gaura wants dharam to have muscles.so funny.dheera conversation was lovely.so did meera have heart break?waiting for the next dheera meeting.I really appreciate your efforts to make edits which suit the story.lovely edits
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n nice update, well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the PMs. Good updates 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow wonderful update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story...👏👏...awesome cs...⭐️⭐️⭐️...thank u 4 pm...😃...

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