Chehra..Face.. GoHem GoGi TS Last part pg5

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hiya

@coolhi1988

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Aww..
thank u for dedicating this to me..
m so pleased..

loved it...
goki on mission to find Ahem..
they find him..
truth comes out.. he is jaggi...
wow gopika is his wife..
loved gogi scenes...😳
urvashi-koki comes face to face...
both shocked...

gopi regrets sending off ahem...
she asks for forgiveness...
m a bit upset here...
ahem dint realise that how gopi must have felt when he always accused her..
though i was looking forward to that scene..
but no worries..
gogi scenes made up..
i trully enjoyed it..

beautiful ending...
nice edits...
thanks 4 pm
thanks 4 dedicating...

Edited by coolhi1988 - 8 years ago

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Piyali

@.Piyali..

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Wow dear , such a mind blowing Ts , today you officially made me like Nazim -Gia , Karan-debo as a pair as well as individually , Aham understood Gopi so easily and his line that I will stay with you was sooo beautiful...I loved the past story , no one was wrong but only circumstances...Really the bhang scene and bag packing scene of GoGi where gopika made him understand was great...I loved the last line of Gopi a lot...you always rock with your writings dear , keep writing , please come up with more such beautiful Ts...Love you...be happy...😃

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--HANISA--

@--HANISA--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

awesome love jagi n gopika pics n holi scene
love it thx for this os dear

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Lovely short story... nice
thanks for the pm...

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K.AJAY MANIKANTA

@ajay227

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Ohh..ts means a short story...but sweet one also...Really felt bad for Ahem when he is thrown out...there is nthg much to comment as everything is written as in show...But loved Jaggi-Gopika scenes very much...these two together r pure magic..arent they???But DeRan r not less ...ur creations r cute...Loved d emotional scene of GoHem...Holi scenes r written beautifully!!!Thanks for d PM...

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Heatsha8176

@Heatsha8176

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Lovely ending
Gopi finally found out truth n realized her mistake
jiggi is her bil
glad to see the family uniting
all living together
n even ahem forgave gopi so quickly
not liking the idea of being away from her
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

interesting start...

I don't know this serial , but got the idea...Seeing her husband's face , she doubted the one in her house is not her Ahem...but a fraud...But what's the truth...?? Who is real and who is fake?

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arshiabigya

@arshiabigya

Explorer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

WOWOWWO SUPERB... THE WAY TRITH CAME OUT IS SUPERBLY EXPRESSED... GOPI PUNISHING HERSELF FOR DOUBTING HER AHEM IS NICE.. BUT AHEM WANTS TO BE WITH HER.. TATS SOO ROMANTIC AND CUTE.. JAGGI AND GOPI IS SOOO CUTE WITH EACH OTHER...

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

awww...such a beautiful ending...I loved the step brother twist...Jaggi and ahem are step brothers and gopi misunderstood it...I am happy that ahem had no hard feelings about it and jaggi too accepted everything...loved that he asked gopi whether she is comfortable or not like an ideal husband...cute and sweet