Chehra..Face.. GoHem GoGi TS Last part pg5

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Chehra..Face.. Part 1

When Nazim left SNS and there was no hope about his return to the show I was sad when Ahem got killed off.I wished they had replaced Nazim through plastic surgery or something instead of killing Ahem and bringing a new husband for Gopi..Because I could'nt imagine anyone else opposite Gopi other than Ahem.As a replacement for Ahem I could imagine only Karan Tacker.Karan Tacker Devoleena is my dream pair and my sweet readers had accepted Karan Tacker Devoleena as a jodi in my previous SNS works Ye dooriyaan and Youth stars.Katrinasalman took a bold step by introducing plastic surgery and changing Ahem's face with Gurpreet in her FF Undying faith.That too gave me more confidence and inspiration to pen down this Two Shots.

During Dharam Meera's wedding Ahem did'nt reach and Gopi was cut up with it.
Gopi:Ahemji is so irresponsible.How can he come late for his daughter's wedding?

Suddenly her phone rang.She saw Ahem's number on the screen.She picked up the phone.
G:Ahemji...I don't want to talk to you.You are not even attending your daughter's wedding.
"Hello...I am not Ahem.Ahem met with an accident.We took him to the hospital".
Gopi was shocked.She was shattered.She screamed:Ahemji..
All were shocked.
Kokila:What happened Gopi bahu?
G:Maaji..Ahemji met with an accident.

All were shocked.


They reached the hospital.
Kokila pleaded the doctor:Please save my son.
Gopi:Hey Kanhaji..please save Ahemji.
Doctor:We are trying our best.

After some hours..
Doctor came:He is out of danger now.
All were happy.
Kokila:Thanks to Krishna Bhagwan.
Gopi:Thank you Kanhaji.
Dr:But..
K:But...what doctor?
Dr:His face is ruined completely.We need to do plastic surgery.
They became upset.
K:Do that doctor.Don't worry about money.
Dr:But..his face may change after surgery.
They became upset.
G:It's ok doctor.I just need my Ahemji back.
Dr:Ok.

Ahem's plastic surgery was done.One day the doctor removed his bandage from the face.His new face was revealed.Meera,Vidya,Kokila and Gopi were upset seeing Ahem with a new face.But relieved themselves as they got him back alive.
Ahem became emotional:Mom..Gopi..Meera..Vidya...
They all hugged him emotionally.
Suddenly Ahem looked at the near by mirror by mistake.He was shocked to see his reflection on the mirror..He looked at the mirror again.He touched his face.
Ahem:How come my face is different on the mirror?Am I dreaming?
All were upset.
Gopi:No Ahemji...this is reality.
Ahem:Means?

G:Your face had disfigured during the accident and the doctor did plastic surgery.So your face got changed.

The shocked Ahem screamed:No...
Gopi embraced Ahem and shed tears.
Ahem cried:What is this Gopi? Why did this happen to me?

Gopi caressed him:Ahemji..control your emotions.
Kokila shed tears:Don't make fuss like kids Ahem dikhra.Thank God that your face is fine now.
Gopi cupped Ahem's face in her hands:Look Ahemji..don't give importance to your face.Your personality is more important which has not changed yet.Your face does'nt matter to us.We love you for your heart.
Meera :Yes dad.Still we love you the same.
Vidya:However your face is..you are still our father.Right?

G:Yes Ahemji.Please don't be upset.
Gopi wiped his tears.
G:Have food.
Gopi fed him food.Ahem looked at her deeply.

After some days Ahem got discharged from the hospital.
Gopi thought:Ahemji is still upset over his face change.I should do something to cheer him up.
She decorated the terrace with lights and candles.Later Ahem entered and was surprised to see lights and glowing candles.
Gopi:Ahemji..I feel very happy to see your smile.

Ahem held her hand:Yes Gopi.I just loved it.Thank you so much for doing this for me.
G:Always for you Ahemji.
They shared a romantic eye lock.
Gopi:Ahemji..shall we have your favourite candle light dinner?
Ahem smiled:Yes Gopi.
They had candle light dinner by feeding each other romantically.

Ganesh visarjan was happening...
The whole place was crowded.Gopi and Kokila was on the way back from the temple.They saw a man holding a big Ganesh Idol.Slowly his face became clear.They were shocked to see his face.
Gopi's lips shivered:Ahemji?Then who is at home?It means he is fake.He is not our Ahemji.
Koki:Gopi bahu?
G:Maaji..we need to reach Ahemji.
Gopi ran to catch Ahem.Kokila followed her.But in the crowd they could'nt trace him.Gopi cried:Maaji...

They reached Modi Mansion.Ahem came toward them with a smile.Suddenly Gopi slapped him.All were shocked.
G:Who are you?
Ahem:What are you asking Gopi?I am your Ahem.
Gopi slapped him again.
Gopi's eyes were filled with anger and pain:Are you not ashamed to lie again?You are not Ahemji.You are fake.How well you planned a drama to come to our family?What is your intention?

Ahem:Gopi..I don't know what you are saying?Mom...you please make Gopi understand that I am her Ahem.
G:Stop it.We saw the real Ahemji.Your drama won't work anymore.
Ahem was shocked.
Ahem:Can't you identify me mom?
Kokila became emotional looking at his eyes.
K:Gopi Bahu...we were present during Ahem's operation.How can we conclude that it's not our Ahem?
G:Maaji..during the operation we were there.But we did'nt see Ahemji's face.That means the man who was admitted as Ahemji was not Ahemji.We saw our Ahemji.Right?
K:But what is he is only Ahem's humshakal?My mind says that this is our Ahem.His eyes are calling me 'mom'.
G:No Maaji.I am sure that he is the real Ahemji.This is not Ahemji.He is a perfect actor who speaks lies through his eyes.That's why you too got fooled.
Kokila became upset.
Gopi stared at Ahem:Get out.You don't have no place on this house.This belongs to Ahemji...not you.


Ahem became upset:Gopi..please..

G:I say get out.
Gopi pushed him out and closed the door.Kokila's heart was restless.
K:Hey..Krishna Bhagwan!Why do I feel that what is happening is not right?


The man who looks like Ahem entered his house.He got into his kitchen.There a woman was cooking.He embraced her from back.She blushed:Leave me..Maaji will see.

Tu Bin Bataye Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen
Jahan Tu Muskuraye Meri Manzil Wahin


He:No problem.Let her see.She will only be happy to see us together.

He held her closer.She blushed.
Tu Bin Bataye Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen
Jahan Tu Muskuraye Meri Manzil Wahin


He moved his lips towards her face passionately making her blush like rose flower.

Meethi Lagi, Chakh Ke Dekhi Abhi
Mishri Ki Dali, Zindagi Ho Chali
Jahan Hain Teri Baahein Mera Sahil Wahin

They were lost in the world of romance.

Tu Bin Bataye Mujhe Le Chal Kaheen
Jahan Tu Muskuraye Meri Manzil Wahin-Rang De Basanti




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Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely ts jasmine...gopi shocked...ahemsplastic surgery their confrontation with reality was fab...lovely gohem romanceit is always mine fav😛
Meevi too played fab role
Edited by Aanahat - 9 years ago
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Haaawww...Ii missed it , I wanted to be the first one...😳 but no problem , second also good but the ff , it is rocking Jasmine , Ii looked the first part ,well I loved gopi throughing ahem out , sorry but you know I have grudges against him for throwing his wife out of the house twice...WITHOUT HER MISTAKE , so I am happy...but really I liked Karan as Aham , I don't know why but I feel that you are a hugggeee fan of Karan , he is in most of your ffs...😳...but I too love him so loving this one too , I loved the name of th ff , it is all about face...but no problem with gopi's reaction , you know the reason , right...I loved the last scenes of Gia and Nazim , i never thought that I would like nazim , because of his role but I am liking him too due to your ffs...well even wished that YRKKH also had such luck as SNS but leave it...post the next part soon and also your other ffs , I also did a request for epilogue in Arshi ff , do check it out and please epilogue...please...😃
Edited by Piyaliiii - 9 years ago
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What a twist. Ahem had a plastic surgery.
Everyone accepted him with a new face.
Gohem candle light dinner was very romantic.
But When Gopi saw original face,
she refused to believe that he is Ahem.
The first one was devo's pic.
The remaining pics are of Gia.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I too do not like Ahem bcz he is the worst husband on Indian TV.YRKKH had the same luck means Karan Mehra's come back?To be frank I am not Karan Tacker's fan.I have not seen any of his shows.I chose him for my FF Pyar to hona hi tha2 through public poll.By while writing that FF I started liking him.I felt that he suits Devoleena n I cast him opposite her in Ye dooriyaan n Youth stars,now this too.I have no idea for the epilogue of When luv turns dark.So if I get ideas I will write epilogue.

Originally posted by: Piyaliii

Haaawww...Ii missed it , I wanted to be the first one...😳 but no problem , second also good but the ff , it is rocking Jasmine , Ii looked the first part ,well I loved gopi throughing ahem out , sorry but you know I have grudges against him for throwing his wife out of the house twice...WITHOUT HER MISTAKE , so I am happy...but really I liked Karan as Aham , I don't know why but I feel that you are a hugggeee fan of Karan , he is in most of your ffs...😳...but I too love him so loving this one too , I loved the name of th ff , it is all about face...but no problem with gopi's reaction , you know the reason , right...I loved the last scenes of Gia and Nazim , i never thought that I would like nazim , because of his role but I am liking him too due to your ffs...well even wished that YRKKH also had such luck as SNS but leave it...post the next part soon and also your other ffs , I also did a request for epilogue in Arshi ff , do check it out and please epilogue...please...😃

Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guess you did'nt understand the story.Gopi saw Ahem's look alike..a man with Ahem's original face.He is romancing a lady and that lady is Gia.She is not Gopi.


Originally posted by: katrinasalman

What a twist. Ahem had a plastic surgery.

Everyone accepted him with a new face.
Gohem candle light dinner was very romantic.
But When Gopi saw original face,
she refused to believe that he is Ahem.
The first one was devo's pic.
The remaining pics are of Gia.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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jasmeen whay a twist ts love it

i like karan takar n as ahem its good but i cant bear him with dev sorry but as ahem n accept with your ff to go with dev as gopi

like how you used gopi reaction on seeing another ahem

how she bluff n angry on ahem

n my most favorite part is

gina wow i was missing this both giaa innocent face her smile you brought back all old sns in front of me with their pics love it

thx for this ts
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I too do not like Ahem bcz he is the worst husband on Indian TV.YRKKH had the same luck means Karan Mehra's come back?To be frank I am not Karan Tacker's fan.I have not seen any of his shows.I chose him for my FF Pyar to hona hi tha2 through public poll.By while writing that FF I started liking him.I felt that he suits Devoleena n I cast him opposite her in Ye dooriyaan n Youth stars,now this too.I have no idea for the epilogue of When luv turns dark.So if I get ideas I will write epilogue.
Yes I was talking about Karan Mehra only , thats great , liking someone while writing on them , It happened with me too...all right , if you get an Idea , do write the epilogue...😃

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Congrats on the TS! thanks 4 da pm! wonderful update! superbly written!

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wooow... a treat to see ahem gopi back wow... superb... devo karan also c=soo cute.. and the concet s just awesome... u have added perfect pics for each scene... the way gopi cheered aham thats is terrace scene s so cute...

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