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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1

Dedicated to jasminerahul who wants an SS about Jaggi turning as Ahem.

Gopi has been living in Ahem's memories and is quite depressed of losing him. She is not aware of how he left. She has been under Dr. Krishna's treatment. Meera and Vidya are worried about Gopi. Kokila wanted Gopi to marry Dr. Krishna but the entire family opposed. Meera said, "My dad is the best. No one can take his place."

Gopi: I love only Ahem. His memories are enough for me.
Chirag suggests Kokila to send her abroad for a change. Meera and Vidya decide to accompany her. Gopi agrees to go to New Zealand on Kokila's insistence.


Gopi, Meera and Vidya go to New Zealand and stay at Jigna's place who is Kokila's sister. Meera & Vidya too are as depressed as Gopi, thinking about their father. They meet Jigna's daughter Neeta.


Neeta tries every possible way to cheer Gopi, Meera and Vidya but fails. She gives up.
Jigna: You've got to try. They should get over this tragedy. If Gopi breaks down, who will take care of her daughters though they are grown up and married.
Neeta gets an idea.
Neeta: Yes, tomorrow is orchestra. Why not take them for a surprise?
Jigna: Yes, that is the good idea.
Neeta: But how to convince them?
Jigna: You know they are Lord Krishna's devottee. They won't refuse.
Neeta goes to them and said, "Today evening is orchestra. There is going to be a song about Lord Krishna."
Gopi: I'm upset with Him as he took away my husband.
Neeta: So what! that is not the end of the world. Everyone has to go someday or the other. We are no one to question him.
Neeta then goes to Meera and said,"I know you have a taste of RAP music and Disco. If you come, you will feel the change."
Meera: Fine.
Vidya too agrees.
They went to Gopi.
Vidya: I know how you feel. We too miss our dad. If not for yourself, please come for dad at least.
Gopi agrees.

Gopi, Meera and Vidya go to the orchestra which started with Lord Krishna's bhajan. After the end of the bhajan, it started with music. They see Ahem's lookalike singing on the stage. He sings the song.


Ek pal ka jeena phir to hai jana
Tohfa kya le ke jaiye dil ye batana
Khali haath aaye the hum khali haath jayenge
Bas pyar ke do meethe bol jhil milayenge
To hans kyun ki duniya ko hai hasana
Aye mere dil tu gaye ja
A aye aa a aaye aa

Gopi remembers the day Ahem was cheering for her after she got a bad dream in which he said, "Shall I sing a song to cheer you? If I sing, everyone will laugh."
Oh aankho me dilbar ka sapna bhi hai ha koi sapna bhi hai
Oh duniya me tera koi apna bhi hai han koi apna bhi hai
Ek chehra khas hai jo dil ke paas hai
Hotho pe pyas hai ek milne ki aas hai
Dilbaro ka magar kaha koi thikana
Aye mere dil tu gaye ja
A aye aa a aaye aa

Gopi is shocked. She wonders "Is my Ahem alive? If yes, how come he is singing so well? He was not so good at singing."
Oh jiwan khushiyo ka ek jhoka sa hai
Ha koi jhokha sa hai
Oh aur ye jhonka ek dhokha sa hai ha koi dhokha sa hai
Ye kaisi hai khushi jal jal ke jo bujhi
Bhujh bhujh ke jo jali milke bhi na mili
Dosto par kisi haal me na ghabrana aye mere dil tu gaye ja
A aye aa a aaye aa

Meera and Vidya are also taken aback.

Ek pal ka jeena phir to hai jana
Tohfa kya le ke jaiye dil ye batana
Khali haath aaye the hum khali haath jayenge
Bas pyar ke do meethe bol jhil milayenge
To hans kyun ki duniya ko hai hasana
Aye mere dil tu gaye ja
A aye aa a aaye aa

At the end of the program, Neeta, Gopi, Meera & Vidya see Jaggi face to face. Jaggi gets attracted to Gopi but Gopi leaves the place with her daughters. However Neeta & Jaggi have the conversation.

Jaggi: Who is this lady?
Neeta: She is my Aunt's DIL. The other two are her daughters.
Jaggi: That is strange. But she looks very young. She does not look like mother of 2 daughters.
Neeta: Yes, she is gifted.
Jaggi: I want to meet her. Can you please help me?
Neeta: Sure.

Back home, Neeta tells Gopi, "Why did you go away after seeing Jaggi? He is a very good singer who is running a music company."

Gopi said, "He looks exactly like Ahem. Whenever I see him, it reminds me of him."
She shows Ahem's pictures to Neeta leaving her shocked.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I was asking 4 an OS on the current scenario where Jaggi turns into Ahem.But now i'm more excited 4 this story.Gopi went abroad 2 stay with Jigna.u know i miss Jigna a lot.I wish she comes back.Was surprised to see Neeta(Tanaz) as Jigna's daughter.They went 4 a music show n there Ahem's look alike Jaggi sang the rocking dance song of ik pal.wow!Is he ahem?if them like gopi thought how he sings so well?Jaggi attracted 2 gopi.wow.gohem fb was cute.perfect title 4 this story.KNPH.it reminded me of d movie KNPH.i'm thrilled 2 read d gohem version of KNPH.plz make gopi wear western clothes too.its high time that gopi needs a makeover.thanku so much 4 dedicating this 2 me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm! congrats on the OS! superb start, update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing OS Kavita loved it
Gopi upset with her kanhaji
mevi accompany gopi
they c jaggi lookalike of ahem & he sings very well
wow
continue soon
thnks 4 d pm
excited to knw hw they wil knw he is ahem
& hw on earth did he learn to sing so well😆😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start dear... Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow so beautiful ahem as jagi n danse wow gopi went abroad too n saw ahem
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Nice start to os
Gopi missing ahem so much
n now jiggi has seen her n has got attracted at first sight
looking forward to them meeting n os continuing
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely start.
Gopi is upset over ahem's demise.Gopi,meera and vidya go abroad and at a concert they meet ahem's lookalike.But in flashback it is shown that ahem doesn't sing so well,so jaggi is a mystery.Waiting for the mystery to be revealed.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely OS..
Thanks for the pm





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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 1

PART 2

Neeta: This is really unbelievable. 100% resemblance!

She goes to Jigna.
Neeta: Mom, do you know what we have seen in the concert?
Jigna is shocked: Yes, tell me.



Neeta shows Ahem's photographs to her and said, "The guy who sang in the concert exactly looks like Ahem. Jaggi interacted with me as we know each other. He wants to meet our Gopi but she does not want to meet him because of this reason."

Jigna: That is quite natural. The more she looks at him the more it would depress her. For her to meet Jaggi, she has to change her mindset. Her mindset is Ahem which she has to remove. Anyway, you go and tell him this is the thing.

Neeta goes to Jaggi and said, "I'm sorry to say but Gopi does not wish to meet you."
Jaggi: but why?
Neeta: You look exactly like her husband who is no more.
Jaggi: I can't believe it.
Neeta shows him Ahem's photographs & takes his pictures in her camera.
Neeta: I will come to you with the hard copy.
Jaggi: I will also come with you.
Neeta: Fine.
Neeta & Jaggi went to the photo studio & gets the photo developed. She then shows Ahem's & his photo.
Jaggi was shocked. He said, "Yes, he looks like me. It is a co-incidence. But I still want to meet her. Please convince her to meet me at least once. It is her wish after that."
Neeta: Fine.




Neeta goes to Gopi & said, "I can understand your feelings but if a person is no more, it is not the end of the world. Jaggi wants to meet you only once. After that, it is your wish."

Meera & Vidya comes in. Neeta said, "Good that you all came. Jaggi wants to meet her once. Please tell your mom to agree."

M & V: Mom, I think you need to meet him once. Who knows kanhaji might show us the way. If not for yourself, please do it for us & dad.

Gopi decides to meet Jaggi & face the situation.

Next day, Gopi, Meera & vidya meet Jaggi. Gopi asks him, "Why you wanted to meet me?"
Jaggi: I wanted to meet you as I have a feeling that I've seen you before but not able to recollect it. Neeta told me everything about you. I have developed feelings for you but unless you say yes to this relationship, I will wait. I'm ready to do so for my entire life. If not for anything, we can at least become good friends.



Vidya whispers n Gopi's ears saying, "He seems to be a good person. We can give him a benefit of doubt."

Meera said,"I am ready to be your friend."

Gopi accepts his friendship after getting a nod from her daughters.

PART 3


Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago

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