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Posted: 9 years ago
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btw in one place, after tandav scene when vidya was confronting meera, at last line she told-"AMI kitchen mein hu". u know Ami is a bengali word. ami is bengali version of main in hindi or I in English. so I was thinking there kanu main likhne ki jagah ami kyon likh di? it was intentionally or by default u have written the correct word in another language??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome yaar ,too good.I just loved it ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anondo.R

What have you done?😲 Awesome👏

"After one hour or so...meera makes something...which looks like 3rdcousin of dhokla..."😆

What an ending😳

Cv's should read this😉



Thanks anondo 😛
And about that dilogue...actually i am a really bad cook...whatever i make...is a third cousin of something 😆 😕 ...so...wahi se ye idea aya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mannz

This is amazing!! Loved every part of it. My favourite parts are on the roof top and then the bedroom scene at the end. Your so good at writing. Hopefully we get to see something similar to this onscreen 😊




Thank u thank u...so much mannz ji... 😊 ... i too hope we get dheera n only dheera on screen
.. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dwipanita

yaar I will steal one line from Anondo's comment-" kya banaya hai tumne yaar???" seriously it was highly romantic, highly comic, full of cute jealousy. the chote chote one liners are clear winner, those are really funny. like "dekh meera pyaar tujhe kis mor pe le ke aaya!!'( actually I was reading this line with the tone of original song and it sounds very funny), then loved the dhokla part so much, "3rd version of dhokla", "innovative version of dhokla", "Maine aapke liye dhokla jaisa kuch banaya hai". and roof wala scene also seems perfect place for confessing love. and when everyone praising last part so much, then u also know what it is. u know I always imagine scenes in mind whenever I read anything, woh story ho ya newspaper ho ya text book. so I was imagining ur ff too. and u will not believe I was getting goosebumps during last scenes. seriously my heart was beating so faster then. I was like kya hone wala hai kya hone wala hai!! honestly subah subah mood fresh kar diya. a big muaaah for ur ff. and thanks to palki actually, for her request we have got such an amazing ff.



Thank u sooo much...muaahh
U knw...wat i am so glad u get that song...pyar humein 😳 ...i was writing singing that too 😆 ...i thot pata nhi any one will notice or not 😲 ...and i imagine books too...whenever i read something...a show real starts in my mind automatically 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dwipanita

btw in one place, after tandav scene when vidya was confronting meera, at last line she told-"AMI kitchen mein hu". u know Ami is a bengali word. ami is bengali version of main in hindi or I in English. so I was thinking there kanu main likhne ki jagah ami kyon likh di? it was intentionally or by default u have written the correct word in another language??



Haha...nahi yaar yahan toh typing error hi hua hai...i did nt notice...but i know..bengali mein ami is mein...ami aschi...ami tumake bhalo bashi 😳 ...korbe na cholbe na...tumi...ekdom...etc... 😆 😆 ...these are few words i know ...told ya na i have few bengali friends 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanika_11

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">Awesome yaar ,too good.I just loved it❤️</font>


Thank u darling... 😊 ...but u didnt tell me ur fav parts /dialogue 😡 ..pls tell us what did u like the most 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dheera_1



Haha...nahi yaar yahan toh typing error hi hua hai...i did nt notice...but i know..bengali mein ami is mein...ami aschi...ami tumake bhalo bashi 😳 ...korbe na cholbe na...tumi...ekdom...etc... 😆 😆 ...these are few words i know ...told ya na i have few bengali friends 😛

arre bapre tumi toh khub valo bangla bolo
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dheera_1


Thank u darling... 😊 ...but u didnt tell me ur fav parts /dialogue 😡 ..pls tell us what did u like the most 😊

actually poora os nahi likh sakti thi na isliye 8 words mein hi describe kar diya 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lol you just had to mention my name in the pg version didn't you 😆 But I'm honoured 😳
Btw this has to be the most sanskari pg version 😆

I was going to read it at night but thought let's just see what's it about and then toh I couldn't stop. I loved the parts where she's trying to impress Dharam but fails miserably every time. Arre he isn't interested in flowers or dhoklas, he's interested in only you!
And what's up with this buzurg wala comment 😆
My favourite line was: 'durga ji can have the status of wife...but his love would be forever for me...and mine for him..' - To be honest, Durga is his wife for namesake only. Meera is both his wife and true love, in the purest and realist sense. People can separate them physically but no one can separate their love from each other 😳

And I love this Durga, she rightfully came out of the broken marriage and love how you made her walk out alone and didn't show her as some bechari.

On to the ending ☺️ I could have done with a little more pg but this was sweet 😳 I can just imagine Meera and Dharam looking into each other's eyes and then his eyes moving to her parted lips 😳😳😳

Thank you Kanu 🤗

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