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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: dheera_1



Lets just say nina...if today...u had asked to be Britin's pm...your wish would have been granted 😛😉... i am posting part 3 in like 5 mins...though i wanted..to finish story in part 3 itself bbut that would require my considerable time and devotion...which i currently dont have... so i wanted to post it next week...bt writing dheera has become and addiction for me...and i do write a para or so daily...so i have divided the story in more no of parts..and i am posting part 3 which is considerably shorter...but...atleast then it wd be frequent

thank you darling. Can I ask to win the lottery instead then??? 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 3

AFTER ONE WEEK : Cut to hospital

Nurse: Doctor Doctor come fast...look at the stats of highway accident patient...his vitals are going down...brain activity is 0...but there is pulse and heart beat ...I don't understand he is already in comma...now what is he dying?

Doctor : I don't know..its a rare unprecedented case...it usually happens when patient is going towards brain death...and well some says it happens...in case of astral projection or near death experience...i.e to say in simple terms when your body is alive but soul leave to wanders...but it cant travel for much time...all this happens in short time otherwise brain can be permanently damaged...

Nurse : oh...so we don't know what it is for sure..ehat do we do now?

Doctor : keep under observation on life support for 24 hrs...if there is no improvement till then.. I am afraid the guy will be brain dead forever. You know what... I some how feels..this guy has lost the will to live...its as if he is not trying at all...i wonder if he has a family or not...poor guy !!

Dharam suddenly felt as if his body was moving towards light..he felt light as air...is that it...??. Is this ambe maa's final calling to him...he would never see meera...no he wanted to beg to be left with her meera...but then it dawned on him...maybe this whats better for all of them... Meera would finally marry some of her age...and could become a mother...shravan would finally stop hating him for leaving his mother...and he...he would not have to see meera's agony and longings for a child... Yes this was right...with that thought...he stopped fighting for his life...within seconds he was floating in air... He could see his on body lying on the hospital bed... Wait...he could see his own body lying there breathing??? What was happening...where was god...yama...?? Swarg -narak whatever?? Why was he still here... was he dead ?? was he alive...he didn't know...just then he felt a strong pull...he was been drag...as iron to magnet ...and in seconds... he landed..infront of the Suryavanshi house

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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW...WILL DHARAM BE LIKE THIS. OR IS HE GONNA
LEAVE US ALL TEARY?...ONLY TIME WILL TELL...And OH..WELL PART 4 AS WELL😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dheera_1


WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW...WILL
DHARAM BE LIKE THIS. OR IS HE GONNA

LEAVE US ALL TEARY?...ONLY TIME WILL TELL...And OH..WELL PART 4 AS WELL😆😆



Nahin don't let him die but let him realise how much Meera loves him and can't live without him when he sees her suffering.

Thanks For the update!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ninag



Nahin don't let him die but let him realise how much Meera loves him and can't live without him when he sees her suffering.

Thanks For the update!



bas itna hi..🤢?? how did u like it...?? did u see this coming
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: dheera_1



bas itna hi..🤢?? how did u like it...?? did u see this coming

I definitely did not see his astral travel! You know I love it! You don't even need to ask 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Super - Duper Awesome
Amazing Update
Loved It
Post Next Part Super Soon
Thanks for the PM


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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: ninag

I definitely did not see his astral travel! You know I love it! You don't even need to ask 😆



WEll its always nicer to hear it still 😳😛😉... u see.. authors practically live for 5 mins of appreciation 😆😆
jokes apart : glad u like it..will try to write next part soon👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
wow. tum toh choti si update mein hi toofan khara kar diya. now till next part we will not tired to wondering aage kya hoga? omg no he can't die. must say u describe scene beautifully, very easy to imagine the scene in mind and relate to. but I m pretty sure dharam will not die. u will not do that. bas assignment se break mile toh jaldi se next part likh lo. man mein excitement ka fuara foot rahi hai. can't wait.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 3

AFTER ONE WEEK : Cut to hospital

Nurse: Doctor Doctor come fast...look at the stats of highway accident patient...his vitals are going down...brain activity is 0...but there is pulse and heart beat ...I don't understand he is already in comma...now what is he dying?

Doctor : I don't know..its a rare unprecedented case...it usually happens when patient is going towards brain death...and well some says it happens...in case of astral projection or near death experience...i.e to say in simple terms when your body is alive but soul leave to wanders...but it cant travel for much time...all this happens in short time otherwise brain can be permanently damaged...

Nurse : oh...so we don't know what it is for sure..ehat do we do now?

Doctor : keep under observation on life support for 24 hrs...if there is no improvement till then.. I am afraid the guy will be brain dead forever. You know what... I some how feels..this guy has lost the will to live...its as if he is not trying at all...i wonder if he has a family or not...poor guy !!

Dharam suddenly felt as if his body was moving towards light..he felt light as air...is that it...??. Is this ambe maa's final calling to him...he would never see meera...no he wanted to beg to be left with her meera...but then it dawned on him...maybe this whats better for all of them... Meera would finally marry some of her age...and could become a mother...shravan would finally stop hating him for leaving his mother...and he...he would not have to see meera's agony and longings for a child... Yes this was right...with that thought...he stopped fighting for his life...within seconds he was floating in air... He could see his on body lying on the hospital bed... Wait...he could see his own body lying there breathing??? What was happening...where was god...yama...?? Swarg -narak whatever?? Why was he still here... was he dead ?? was he alive...he didn't know...just then he felt a strong pull...he was been drag...as iron to magnet ...and in seconds... he landed..infront of the Suryavanshi house



Wow!! That was awesome. Definitely did not see that twist coming. I could imagine the whole scene in front of my eyes. I'm sure Dharam will pull through this all once he sees how much his Meera is suffering without him. Eagerly waiting for part 4!!😊

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