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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: xPalkix

Thanks Sonu. By the way, am I the only who is reading the ff with that horrible dhum dhum dhana nana dhum dhum music they play on the show whenever something dramatic happens? I can't control it😆

no change it to Dharam back ground music or the Gaura one that goes dhika ta ta. Lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
nina palki this is going great 😃 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: ninag

no change it to Dharam back ground music or the Gaura one that goes dhika ta ta. Lol


🤣

It's also difficult to write Dharam's lines in English. And Zaina and Sonu, you two also write the ff. it's fun.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
I was just talking to my sisters friend who also watches Saathiya and she likes Dheera. But she doesn't think this storyline will last :/
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: xPalkix

I was just talking to my sisters friend who also watches Saathiya and she likes Dheera. But she doesn't think this storyline will last :/

well I'm gonna stay in Dheera dream land until we know otherwise. I think the fact he lifted her up is a romantic gesture or am I just clutching at straws??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
well I'm gonna stay in Dheera dream land until we know otherwise. I think the fact he lifted her up is a romantic gesture or am I just clutching at straws??
That's what I'm doing. If they drag this track all to end in tragedy for us then I'm not gonna lie, I will shed some tears 😭😆😭

You're not clutching at straws, that's a pretty romantic moment actually.
I'll continue the ff tomorrow if no one else does it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: xPalkix


🤣

It's also difficult to write Dharam's lines in English. And Zaina and Sonu, you two also write the ff. it's fun.

Yup yup will continue it with dharam ishtyle dialogues too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: overactor


Yup yup will continue it with dharam ishtyle dialogues too

well I can't wait to read the next part who ever writes it! I'm off to work now but if it's not written by the time I return I will write it. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Part 2 of the fan fiction:
Meera was getting ready for the day as many people were going to come to see her and Vidya today. She knew what the hot topic of conversation was going to be today but she didn't care. She knew Vidya would and it made her feel better to know that. It was Vidya's turn to feel the same humiliation she had gone through in the Modi house.
A door banged and soon after, Dharam entered out of the bathroom, vigorously rubbing a short towel on his damp hair. She refused to share space with him in front of the mirror so he stayed behind her and continued to dry his hair with the towel. Dharam heard her mutter something under her breath.
"Ay chokri, if you can't keep that mouth closed then talk freely. No one is going to eat you here."
Meera stayed silent, she did not want to engage in a conversation with him. She was trying to adjust the glass bangles through her wrist but it was doing no good. In that moment, the soft patting sound of the towel stopped followed by a pregnant pause whereby a sudden sense of being watched, washed over her. His sharp eyes were observing the reflection of his wife on the mirror, he was getting used to the girl's uncanny nature and although, he was relieved to not have to listen to her nonsense, this strange silence slightly bothered him at the same time. He noticed her eyes steal a glance towards his and then crash immediately after they collided with his.
"I'm not wearing this.", she expressed in frustration and chucked the bangles on the wall. Dharam's peace was short lived as he strode towards the wall to retrieve the broken strands of the bangles. They were his mother's and his temper boiled to know this girl had not thought twice before chucking them like a child.
"What do you think of yourself! This are not some toys for you to play with, they were my mother's bangles which she had treasured for this long!"
"So what? What can I do if they don't fit me? Besides, it's not my style, you should be happy that I am even wearing this saree for you and your mum."
"Don't talk to me like that! Don't forget this is my house!"
"That doesn't mean I will stay put like a furniture. If you think you're going to pressure me then think again Mr Dharam because I am not here to listen to anyone's orders. Don't forget, I can reveal this little secret of ours to everyone if I felt like it."

Dharam's temper was still simmering but he decided to press it down because he couldn't have the secret exposed. Their plan had just begun, it couldn't end so soon. Meera smirked, knowing she had hit his weak spot but Dharam wasn't the one to stay silent either. There were more bangles on top of the dresser so he grabbed her hand and thrust them through her wrists. Meera tried to wrestle her way free but it wasn't working, he was adamant on getting them through at any cost.
"Ouch!", she cried as one of the bangles broke and pierced her skin. Drops of blood oozed out and so did her tears. Dharam let the bangles crash on the ground and froze seeing her cry. For the first time in his life, he felt guilt settle in him. It wasn't so much the blood or even the tears that made him stop because he had seen more blood and tears throughout his life but the sight of Meera like that unsettled him. It was an alien like feeling.
Without thinking, he took her hand and sucked at the cut wound to take the pain away.
*Cue for romantic music* 😆
Edited by xPalkix - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my god that's amazing! Love it!

Their eyes met as he sucked at her wrist. For a split second he felt a strange sensation he had never felt before but he was surprised at this feeling and quickly let go of her wrist. "tidy this mess up" he muttered half embarrassed at his actions. He couldn't believe what he had just done. I will send the servant with a bandage for you". He turned and hobbled out of the room in shock. Meera stood with her mouth agape. What the hell had just happened? She was even more shocked that she had enjoyed Dharam being so intimate with her. She gently touched her wrist thinking his lips had just been there!

Soon they were in the car on the way to the mall. Meera had managed to sneak out without bumping into Gaura or Vidhya. They sat in an uncomfortable silence. Meera kept on glancing at Dharams hand as he changed gears but was too scared to look at him. Dharam sat staring steadfastly at the road. After a few minutes Dharam put the radio on to kill the silence. "Dheere dheere meri zindagi main ana" both squirmed with embarrassment. Dharam turned it off. He sighed then spoke. "How's your wrist?" "Fine". "Did you eat breakfast?" "No". Dharam pulled over at a roadside Dhaba. Meera was disgusted. "You expect me to eat here?"



I'm writing this at work lol

Loving the bangle and radio cliches cvs take note. You are welcome to copy this! It won't be copy right infringement! 😆 Now we need a few scenes of Meera tripping up, Dharam catching her and then eye lock. Yes please!!
Edited by ninag - 9 years ago

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