Poem: Without You (An attempt) 1st time! - Page 2

Originally posted by: sophiewonzer14

Just a short attempt of Gopi and Ahem's separation turn moil (Do share your opinion👍🏼)

Without You :)

My life would be empty without you,
All those years of being far apart, was unbearable
But now that we are back as one, as a family
Promise me you'll never leave me!

We've missed so many moments together,
Missed those days...
But now that we are one again,
Let's make some more memories...
Whatever obstacle comes our way,
fight together as one, we shall as one, as one family...
You and me...us together as one!
You won't be alone in this,
I'll be with you by your side..and so will our kids...

No matter what happens. I'll stay...
But If you leave me,
I will miss you. Miss you so much that I'd go insane
My life would be nothing without you,
You are my entirety,
Without you my life will be the same leaden, tedious and dreary...
So don't leave and stay with me...Because I am nothing without you.

"When I close my eyes I dream of you, when I wake up I Long to hold you in my arms, any time apart between us has only made me yearn for you. All those years of being apart had been unbearable, but now that we are one, promise me you'll never leave my side" And I will never leave yours!

A short poem attempt :) Hope you like it and do share your thoughts and your opinions guys!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: pyaaribehna

Just when Gopi is "gonnu" kill Radha and that too with "trishul" you have written such a heart rending moving poem.

I hope the cvs pay attention to this and do not separate Gopi/Ahem. It is so sad...

First of all the leap period is not confirmed. Secondly, the spoilers are giving different versions about Radha's death. Irrespective of whatever unpleasant incidents has happened with Gopi & Ahem when they were newly married plus 8 years of separation, I want them to live the rest of their lives happily.

I seriously hope that your poem will touch CV's heart & do not separate Gopi & Ahem anymore.

@Sharoon3210: Yes you are right, they have been through enough misery, and now they deserve every ounce of happiness! It's time for them to be together forever :) Let's see what Cvs end up doing, hopefully they dont butcher the whole track and change the meaning of the show.

Originally posted by: sophiewonzer14

@Sharoon3210: Yes you are right, they have been through enough misery, and now they deserve every ounce of happiness! It's time for them to be together forever :) Let's see what Cvs end up doing, hopefully they dont butcher the whole track and change the meaning of the show.

Yes, you are right.