Poem: Without You (An attempt) 1st time!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just a short attempt of Gopi and Ahem's separation turn moil (Do share your opinion👍🏼)

Without You :)

My life would be empty without you,
All those years of being far apart, was unbearable
But now that we are back as one, as a family
Promise me you'll never leave me!

We've missed so many moments together,
Missed those days...
But now that we are one again,
Let's make some more memories...
Whatever obstacle comes our way,
fight together as one, we shall as one, as one family...
You and me...us together as one!
You won't be alone in this,
I'll be with you by your side..and so will our kids...

No matter what happens. I'll stay...
But If you leave me,
I will miss you. Miss you so much that I'd go insane
My life would be nothing without you,
You are my entirety,
Without you my life will be the same leaden, tedious and dreary...
So don't leave and stay with me...Because I am nothing without you.

"When I close my eyes I dream of you, when I wake up I Long to hold you in my arms, any time apart between us has only made me yearn for you. All those years of being apart had been unbearable, but now that we are one, promise me you'll never leave my side" And I will never leave yours!


A short poem attempt :) Hope you like it and do share your thoughts and your opinions guys!


Thanks!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice poem. 😊 Gopi & Ahem hardly spent time with each other except for few moments. That is the reason why I dont want their separation track.😭 Instead, the separation track should be for the waste characters.
Edited by sharoon3210 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful poem, you write really well 👏⭐️ I don't want separation too 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How to convey our message to the CV's about the separation track?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely poem..
nice attempt...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: basuanasuya

Wonderful poem, you write really well 👏⭐️ I don't want separation too 😭


Thank you dear!! 😳. Agree with you! another separation would be unbearable to handle, like its always Gopi and Ahem. The first separation was more than enough for us viewers. We hardly see them together and having their moment.😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharoon3210

How to convey our message to the CV's about the separation track?


We could use twitter and request them I guess or write to them maybe. :) But not totally sure.
Edited by sophiewonzer14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

lovely poem..
nice attempt...
👏


Thank you dear! :)😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharoon3210

Nice poem. 😊 Gopi & Ahem hardly spent time with each other except for few moments. That is the reason why I dont want their separation track.😭 Instead, the separation track should be for the waste characters.


Thank you dear! And that's true, they have not had their own moments together (well not much anyway, very little infact) As of separation, it may happen or it may not.. just remaining optimistic that they don't introduce this track.😊
Edited by sophiewonzer14 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sophiewonzer14


Thank you dear! :)😃

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