SS: Change Of Life Ch11(Final Chapter) updated on pg 19

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Hai Frndz😊 This is the first time I am writing something😉 This is the Short story which will have some 5-6 chapter. It completly focus on GoHem's Life after leap. I hope everyone likes it. Please do share ur views about this story
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Change of Life

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Chapter 1

"It is the carelessness of Gopi!!" yelled Kokila. Everybody rooted in their spot, Ahem and Gopi was totally in shock. Kokila continued " Hereafter there is no palce for you in this house. This will be the punishment for you for what you did". Saying that she dragged Gopi to the door. Gopi was in no state to explain what happened. Only thought in her mind was " Her Maaji doubted her!!". She just looked at her Maaji. She is full of anger and pain in loosing her beloved grandchild Meera!!. Gopi thought the only way is to leave the house immeadiately. She saw her Ahemji. He was in no state to say any words. He has the second shock. First the lose of their angel Meera and now his Mom is blaming his wife for the horrible happening. He know his Gopi but now he was unable to explain this to his Mom. So he just sat dumbfonded in the shock of happenings. With the last glance at the house Gopi has left...

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After 8 years

In Bhopal

The clock has stricked at 4. Gopi came out of her thoughts. How much she tried she can't stop herself from thinking about the last day in her home. She till now can't belive that her Maaji has suspected her. She saw the clock "oh god I need to rush now". She got up from her cabin in the staffroom and rushed to the class 3. Every child went to home only She is sitting all alone. "Today I am dead" thought Gopi. "Niharika" Gopi called her with very excusing tone.

Niharika, second daughter of Gopi and Ahem, just turned angrily and looked at her mother then turned back again.

"Niha I am so sorry beta, Mamma was busy with some work so I was just five minutes late" pleased Gopi.

"But Mom it is 5 minutes how can you forget about me. No Mom, I will not come with you".

She was just like her father not only in anger and stubborness but in every behaviour', Gopi thought.

"Beta please I am sooo sorryyy. Here after mamma will not do like this promise Niha! Please come to home" Gopi coaxed her little daughter.

" But with one condition, will you accept Mom?" questioned the little one.

"Ok beta. Bolo"

. " The condition is today you have to make my favourite Malai Kofta for dinner, you have made it long back so I need today itself, will you make it Mom" exclaimed Niha.

Gopi smiled at her innocence. "sure Niha, anything for my little angel".

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In ModiBhavan

"Tolu, Molu where did you went? Just returend from school where did they went" Rashi was searching the house and when she entered the kitchen she saw the two naughty boys just taking the ladoos she made and hiding it in their snack box. "What you are doing?" Rashi angrily asked them.

Atfirst they were shocked but turned towards their mother with naughty smile. "Mummy we were just taking ladoo for ourself" replied Tolu.

"But you both may have asked me na? I have given you. But why you are talking it secretly? What will other think about this in other places also" Rashi asked them calmly.

"Hare Mummy! You doesn't know anything. It will be very thrill and excited if we do something small without the knowledge of others. You haven't experienced that in your life Mummy?" questioned Molu with the lot of excitement in his voice.

Rashi was shocked and dumbfoned "Hey Bhagvan they are just like me" "But beta it is wrong..."

They heared the sound of CallingBell . "Hey Papa came!!!!!" they two just escaped from their mom and proceeded towards the Hall. With no other way Rashi too left with them. Jigar and Ahem had returened from office.

"PAAPAAA !!!!!!! Jai shree Krishna", they rushed towards their father.

"Jai Shree Krishna My sweet sons" replied Jigar.

"Jai Shree Krishna Kaka" they turned towards Ahem.

"Jai Shrishna Beta" replied Ahem with smile.

He was about to go to his room, but the stern voice stopped him "Ahem" .

Without turning back he just replied "yes Mom" without any emotion.

"Ahem just sit with us and have your snack and tea" asked Kokila.

"No Mom I don't need it now, and also I have very important work I don't want anybody to disturb me till dinner and I will have my dinner at 9.30" without even waiting for the reply he went towards his room.

Kokila looking at her son intensively. "One inncident has changed my son's life as hell, but I was not wrong either, it was all Gopi's carelessness, " Kokila tought.

Ahem entered into his room and went straingt towards the side table and took the picture of his Gopi and Meera. His eyes were pooled by looking at them. He thaught of the inncident 8 years ago

*****Flashback*******

Ahem sat at the same spot. It was 15 minute till Gopi left the house. He looked at his family every one was in hard state to speak something. He broked the silence

"Saasuma! Can you please go to Raajpal Nagar, Gopi went there can you please go to her and make her comfortable I will come to her after sometime" almost pleaded to Madhu.

"Ji Jamaiji"Madhu replied him and went to home.

It was after 10 minutes he received the call from his Saasur.

"Ha Bapuji Bolo., Is Gopi alright?" Ahem asked without letting Jayantbhai to speak

"Jamaiji..."

"Ha Bapuji.. What Happened? Is Gopi Alright? I will come there"

"But Jamaiji Gopi was not here "

"What???????"

"Ji I have searched in the house and also in nearby Mandir but she was not here "

"K Bapuji... you don't worry I will find her"

Saying so he cut the call and went downstairs."Jigar Please the come with me and take the car keys"

"Ahem were are you going what happened"

"Mom I have no time to explain I need to go I will say you later" saying this he went outside.

"Bhai! What happened ?? Anything wrong"

"Jigar ! Gopi did not reach Rajpal Nagar, She was nowhere to find, we need to search her"

"Kya?? Bhai Please don't worry? Nothing will happen to Bhabi. We will find her. Bhai first we can seach her in Mandir, I know she will go to Mandir come on bhai lets go"

"Jigar we need to search her in different direction you go in one I will go in another k?

"tk Bhai"

Ahem has searched her in each and every mandir in Rajkot. But there is no sign of Gopi. He called Jigar and asked about Gopi but there is no positive response. He suddenly remebers the spot to which he took Gopi on her birthday to cry her heart out. He went there in search of her. But all went in vain. He just stand there and cried louder "GOPIII MEERAAA please come to meee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ahem was in tears. It has been eight years but till he couldn't trace his Gopi. He tried his best to search Gopi even asked dedective to do, but everything has failed. From that day he stopped living his life. He was just like machine who was working in office. In home he will just think about his two angels,Gopi and Meera, and nothing else. He even did not talk with his mom prperly. The only time he smile was when he talk to Tolu,Molu and Pappu . They are younger cousins of Meera. "But now Meera may have younger brother or sister" he thought. He came to know this after four days when Gopi left.

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He was looking at the things which Gopi has left. He saw the picture which Gopi showed to him on the picnic spot. A father mother and their 2 Kids. He thought " What was Gopi trying to say throuh this??" He remenbers her surprise to him and the family on Meera's doll wedding "The cute little khanaji" and then her shy looks of her on breakfast and also delaying to say the surprise and then when she asked how he feels about her surprise during lunch. "that means?? Oh God Gopi is Pregnant again?? I have lost my pregnant wife??"

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"Yes She was pregnant at the time and I lost her" Ahem cried siltently. "God Please make me too meet Gopi Soon" His mobile rang.

"Hello Ahem Modi Here"

"Yes Mr Modi I am Rajesh Kapadiya"

"Ha Mr Kapadiya Whats Matter?"

"Mr Modi I have already told about the construction of school buildings all over the country by our company. I have decided to give the contract to Modi Constructions."

"What really Thank you so much Mr Kapadiya"

"You are welcome Mr.Modi. I was impressed eith the way your company performing past years. By the by our first project starts from Bhopal. There we need to build the building for an school"

"Bhopal??"

"Yes Mr Modi, For that you need to visit there. Can you come there on Friday?"

"Friday? Only four days more,Any way I will come Mr Kapadiya"

"Ok Mr Modi we can discuss later Good Night"

"Good Night"

Ahem relaxed" this weekend I can go away from family and get concentrate on work"

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That the first chapter is over.. next week i shall post the second chapter...

so how is this chapter? Shall I continue??

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Chapter 2 : Page 3

Chapter 3: Page 5

Chapter 4: Page 7

Chapter 5: Page 8

Chapter 6: Page 9

Chapter 7: Page 11

Chapter 8: Page 12

Chapter 9: Page 14

Chapter 10: Page 16

Chapter 11: Page 19

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DEEPZzzz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Anu did not know u can write ...Really good start anu.. sry for the late in editing ...
Edited by Deepzpadukone - 11 years ago
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Great job, dear. Ur first attempt is a major success.
What i love about ur SS is that it's very different from mine. I made Gopi second daughter to get her personality and Meera to get Ahem personality. Hehe...You are very detail in explaining every scenes whereas i didn't explain the scene much... we have different style in writing.
Do update soon
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Originally posted by: Deepzpadukone

Anu did not know u can write ...
Res..

even i too did not know Deepz😉
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Originally posted by: nalini89

its awesome please continue

Thanks for ur compliment... surely i will continue😊
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Originally posted by: Sunnyahem

Very good...pls continue

Thank u😊 sure I will😊
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Originally posted by: KALG_Bizarre

Great job, dear. Ur first attempt is a major success.
What i love about ur SS is that it's very different from mine. I made Gopi second daughter to get her personality and Meera to get Ahem personality. Hehe...You are very detail in explaining every scenes whereas i didn't explain the scene much... we have different style in writing.
Do update soon


Thank u so much... yeah we are different in our writing😊 I am waiting for ur next update😉
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Superb⭐️...nice start love it..
Please cont the story is very beautiful...
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Wonderful!! Loved it!! Please do continue'! 👏
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Originally posted by: cvdprasad

Superb⭐️...nice start love it..

Please cont the story is very beautiful...

Thank u ...
I will post it within next week...

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