Jigar-Jee, main aap se pyar karti hu

Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

Scenario : Rashi is out of the house. Jigar's and Rashi's relationship has worsened to the extent that Rashi could no longer bear to be in the house and face Jigar's obvious hatred. She has grown to love him so much.

Here she has seen him in public and to her horror she saw a gun aimed straight for her husband.

'JIGARJEEE!!!' screamed a familiar voice.

Before Jigar could actually turn around fully to see who it was, a gunshot was heard and a body fell onto the ground with a dull thud right in front of him.

Jigar's heart stooped when he realised that the victim was his very own wife, Rashi.
He could not think anymore, he was to frantic to think, blood was staining his wife's pallu at her hip.

He screamed for an ambulance, for help, anything. A kind passerby helped him put the injured Rashi into a car and off they were to the hospital. Too worried for his wife he did not even wait for his Aham Bhai who had apparently ran after the the attacker.

In the car Rashi's head was spinning, the pain on her hip was excruciating. If anything, she was just glad that the bullet did not hurt her Jigar-jee. Here she was in the car nustled against him, looking at him worried like this told he did care, he still cared. If this was going to be her last moments on Earth, she was glad it was in the arms of the man she came to love, the only man she loved despite the circumstances in which they were married, despite his indifference towards her for the past few months and maybe, just maybe he still loved her a little or else why has he worked himself up into such a frenzy. She needed to look at him, to tell him that she loved him with all her heary, in case it was really her time to die.

The pain was unbearable but she shifted herself only to have Jigar hold her closer and shout louder at the poor driver who must be regretting on his kind act considering how much noise Jigar was making.

'Jigar-Jee,' croaked Rashi.

'Rashi bas ponch rahe hai, please meri Jaan himmat na haro,' Jigar pleaded, a mixture of tears and sweat streaming down his face.

Rashi was so relieved in spite of herself. 'Meri Jaan'?! His Jaan? She was still his Jaan?! Oh how she wished she would live now. But she still needed to tell him.

'Main aap se boht pyar karti hu, boht zyada,' stuttered Rashi in pain before she fell unconscious on Jigar's shoulder.

Should I continue?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeah plz do continue u have written it so beautifully tht i wanna read more plz make sure its a longer 1 than dis i really appreciate ur work tht uve done a nice treat to read
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yess please continue!! 😃

i really wanted sth like this to happen but i wanted Jigar to get hurt cause you know this has happened before where Rashi got hurt and Jigar lost that anger for her thus this time i wanted that Jigar should be badly injured or sth and that too bcaz of Urmilla. So that Rashi understands that how low her mother can get!!!😡 and also so that she can understand that how much she loves Jigar that she can't bear to see him in pain 😳 😊 Alas i am horrible in writing stories and stuff
but your one is good too ⭐️

Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MrsArnavSingh

yess please continue!!😃

i really wanted sth like this to happen but i wanted Jigar to get hurt cause you know this has happened before where Rashi got hurt and Jigar lost that anger for her thus this time i wanted that Jigar should be badly injured or sth and that too bcaz of Urmilla. So that Rashi understands that how low her mother can get!!!😡and also so that she can understand that how much she loves Jigar that she can't bear to see him in pain😳😊Alas i am horrible in writing stories and stuff
but your one is good too⭐️



now that would make a great story...i even have a scenario in mind
hmm, maybe i should change the story...
but thanks, its a great idea you have there 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part and plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveMJ



now that would make a great story...i even have a scenario in mind
hmm, maybe i should change the story...
but thanks, its a great idea you have there 😛



haha thank you sooo much 😃
don't change your story but i would be really really happy and glad if you can write a story on sth like these, only if you can 😳 and i am pretty sure it would make a good one plus with your awesome writing skill it would bcome more wonderful 😃 so do let me know if you can write one 😳

and once again thank you 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please continue! I liked your writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I usually don't read Raji stories. Being a fan of GoHem I despise rashi so never went across raji stories. But this one is good.. and continue soon dear

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