SS: Meera's first Holi Part 3 pg 8 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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😆i am late again to read and comment on ur SS, deepika. But i really adore ur GoMeeHem to the core. they are so so sweet and cute. love part 2 so much. hope u continue soon, dear.👏 ❤️ u are awesome⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow wow wow, what a update "THANKS" you are awesome writer must say.👍🏼👏👏👏 I was early wating for next part, please post as soon as posible.😃Special thank's for pm,a big hug to you dear...🤗😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: KALG_Bizarre

😆i am late again to read and comment on ur SS, deepika. But i really adore ur GoMeeHem to the core. they are so so sweet and cute. love part 2 so much. hope u continue soon, dear.👏❤️u are awesome⭐️


Aww thank u dear will try to update soon, i got few other things to do I'm reopening a FB page for my creations hopefully that goes well then maybe on Friday will write the nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shweta2111

Wow wow wow, what a update "THANKS" you are awesome writer must say.👏 I was early wating for next part, please post as soon as posible.😃Special thank's for pm,a big hug to you dear...🤗😳


Thank u Shweta the current track and the show is going 🤢 but will use my imagination for the nxt update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res... will you a comment later good night
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow deepika...awesome update...
wish we could get romance of couples like this onscreen too...also Meehem scene which you have put😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hetp

wow deepika...awesome update...

wish we could get romance of couples like this onscreen too...also Meehem scene which you have put😛

Thank u dear the last part shall be up Friday or sometime during the wkend
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ANJ4

Res... will you a comment later good night

Hope you comment soon as the last part will be up some time on Friday
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi all the last part... Enjoy😊

Part 3

Gopi walked back into the room with Meera in her arms. She put Meera in her crib so that she will go back to sleep. To help Meera sleep she sang and Meera went off to bed. Gopi smiled looking at her daughter. She turned to look at Ahem and Ahem was just looking at Meera with smile on his face. Gopi went on to tease him but he failed to notice anything and this made Gopi upset. She kissed him on the top of his right hand and there was no reaction from him. She did the same with the other hand and still nothing. She even did both hands and still nothing. Gopi was starting to feel ignored. She was at the peak of getting angry. She left one last kiss and then she gave up.

Ahem was enjoying the attention that he was getting from Gopi and he was not reacting because he wanted the attention and the love from Gopi but he did not want Gopi to get angry.

"Gopi, don't stop" Ahem blurted out. Gopi was playing with Meera's toy. "Gopi", he grabs both of his hands so she was not able to play with the toy. "Gopi, please look at me", Ahem said. Gopi was still upset had her head bunt down and looking fondly at the toy she was going to budge. Ahem then left his hands from Gopi's hold and used them to lift Gopi's head so that she was now looking at him. He left on hand to hold on to Gopi's right hand while the other was lifting her head. He could see in her eyes that she was upset but there was something there that he could not read.

Gopi could not be upset with Ahem for long; she was to having a hard time. Gopi out of a sudden blasted out laughing. Ahem was wondering what was wrong with Gopi. First she was upset now she is laughing. Ahem thought this is one thing that he fails to understand. He understood the heart but not how the mind works. " Ahemji", Gopi said. "I'm sorry I was just teasing you I was not upset I was playing with you", Gopi said. She then kissed him on the top of his right hand. She looked up and said, "Ahemji I am sorry" Ahem was upset he thought that he actually caused pain to Gopi he was not going to withdraw from this until he got something from Gopi and exactly where he wanted. Gopi slowly plated kisses up his arm she slowly went up towards his shoulder, moved a part of his kurta to plated some wet kisses on his shoulder she teased him by caressing the kiss a little longer so he was left with a red mark. She slowly left his shoulder and went up his neck playing teasing him with little kisses. Gopi took a break looked into Ahem's eyes and then she continued. Gopi then went to his ear and she went in closer to Ahem so now her forehead was touching Ahem's forehead.

She gave a quick kiss on the nose then on his lips. Ahem then grabbed Gopi and slightly pull her towards him that she fell on top of him. "Mrs Gopi Ahem Modi you are making me crazy tonight I will show just how much I love you. The boundaries of my love will beyond the limits. Don't worry about Meera she will sleep with Mom tonight", Ahem said. Ahem kissed her once more and Gopi went into the kiss a little deeper that her hand gave a tight squeeze to Ahem's hand. Gopi got up slightly, "Ahemji I love you" she said. "I love you too Gopi" Ahem said. He continued, "I am glad that you are part of my life you and Meera have made my life complete." Ahem then gave a quick kiss and helped Gopi get up and then he got up and hugged her saying that he should go and see what the festivities are like outside, gave a glance to Gopi and grin displaying that they will continue later.

Just then Meera got up and Gopi took Meera with her changed her and Gopi herself made sure she look alright and then they left to celebrate the rest of Holi together.

The End.

Their night together is left to your imagination.. sorry if this a bad ending its just I have become busy with making creations.

Edited by Deepikz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Deepz its not bad ending very romantic one that we can't imagine in SNS
but iam upset it end soon 😛
very nice romantice so sweet of both Gohem

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