Rashi&Jigar=Raji - SS - part 1 by Sana.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello, so this is my first fan fiction on india forums. So I would just like to say all my fan fictions are written by me. If you want to post my story anywhere please tell me I won't say no. My favourite jodi on starplus use to be arshi but after arshi leaving its now Raji and that's Rashi and Jigar from Saathiya.
I love writing stories. So my stories are mainly going to be on Raji but I will make some on Arshi and some other jodi's as well. I would love it if you all would comment on what you really think of it, your opinions matter whether its harsh or not. 😊


Raji SS - We were destined to be together - part 1.

I made this because I think of Saathiya it only focuses on Gohem and not Raji so I made a SS on Raji

Characters-

All the characters are the same except in this Rashi is good and she loves Gopi like her own sister.

Marayadi Khanna - evil and Jigar's girlfriend.

Meera - Gohem's daughter and is five years old.


Part 1-

Rashi sat down in her red sari and make up. She waited 5 years to see Jigar. After he left her to do some deal in London for 5 years. After all this time he's back. The door bell rang and she open the door and saw Jigar holding a girls hand..

Hetal - Jigar!! *hugs him*

Kokila - Jigar, whose this girl?

Jigar - kaki..I mean to tell you..erm..she's my girlfriend and I want to marry her..

Rashi - What?! Jigarji, what are you saying?

Ahem - Jigar? What's this?

Jigar - Well listen, this is Marayadi but I call her Mara. I met her in London and fell in love with her..I love her. Am sorry Rashi but its over, you move on, you'll find a better guy them me..

Hetal - Jigar..what? You just came back and your telling this us now? It's not going to happen! Rashi has been waiting 5 years for you!

Jigar - Maa but I don't love her!

Rashi faints...

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Rashi wakes up..

Rashi - Jigar?..

Gopi - Nahi Rashi behen, its me Gopi..

Rashi - *hugs Gopi and cries* Gopi tell me I am having a bad dream, Jigarji does love me and he doesn't want to leave me for Mara..

Gopi - Rashi behen..don't cry..please!

Mara - Rashi..I think you should stop crying. Jigar is mine. He loves me and if you really love him then you'll care about his happiness and let him be with who he loves and that's me!

Gopi - Marayadiji..please leave.

Mara - So your Gopi bhabi.. Am Mara, your sister in law.

Rashi - *gets up and goes downstairs*
Maa, Jigarji..I am ready to divorce him.

Kokila - Rashi..what are you saying?

Rashi - he doesn't love me..I love him but if I really love him then I would care for his happiness and his happiness is Marayadi...I will pack my stuff and leave.

Hetal - Rashi..stop! Were not letting him marry or be with Marayadi..

Rashi - Maa let him..please for me. I would be happier and so will Jigarji..

Kokila - I have a idea for 6 months, Rashi and Jigar will stay together and see what happens..

Marayadi - auntyji..what shall I do? I have no where to live..

Jigar - I will only go with your condition Kaki if Mara gets to stay here..

Kokila - fine.

Everyone leaves.

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Hetal's room.

Chirag - What's happened to our Jigar? Its like sending him to London was a bad idea..

Hetal - it was..I feel bad for Rashi and that Marayadi..doesn't have no sense!

Meera - Dadi, papa said you have to come eat!

Chirag - Hai beta..you go were coming..

Meera - okay bye! *runs*

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Eating table-

Jigar - Mara..eat as much as you want and try everything..

Gopi - Meera sweetheart don't chuck your water...

Meera - Nahi Mumma, I won't..*chucks her water on Mara* ooppss! Sorry Mara aunty!

Mara - You stupid idiot! My 979 pound dress! This is expensive, you dumb child..you ha-

Rashi - Stop it Marayadi! She's a kid, she didn't mean it! Stop shouting at her and using foul words! Stupid idiot you called her? Your a bigger one!

Jigar - RASHI!! *grabs her hand and drags her to a room and locks it* you don't speak to Mara like that!!

Rashi - Jigarji you saw her talking to Meera rudely!

Jigar - I don't care, it was Meera's fault!

Rashi - Jigarji what happened to you? Why have you changed?

Jigar - time changes people..*stared into each others eyes*

Jigar (in his head) - she's beautiful..should I leave her?...

What do you think? Is it good? Rubbish? Not interesting? Needs improvements? Your opinions matter to me, thanks for taking the time to read my SS.


~sana


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Posted: 12 years ago
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⭐️ Beautiful start to the story ... Loving the rashi in this😳 and wow jigar is having second thoughts do continue soon
Edited by Deepikz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Sana welcome to SnS forum.. Hope u have a gr8 time here 😃

fabulous start dear... I like ur concept especially Rashi but why Jigar turn nagitive 😕 anyways good going.. Next update soon 😊
Edited by -GiNa- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai welcome to SNS forum
read your first part its nice
i love to read ss and ff write a lot
but iam little bit sad at the first part itself you show Jigar in negative
hope this wont his true character in this story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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welcome to dis forum am a huge fan of Raji 😃
wow beautiful start loved it, it is really interesting
Jigar is really mean Aaargh dnt like mara girl but
plzzz update soon n do pm me
Edited by rucha123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rucha123

welcome to dis forum am a huge fan of Raji 😃

wow beautiful start loved it, it is really interesting
Jigar is really mean Aaargh dnt like mara girl but
plzzz update soon n do pm me


Thank you so very much😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: delsi

Hai welcome to SNS forum

read your first part its nice
i love to read ss and ff write a lot
but iam little bit sad at the first part itself you show Jigar in negative
hope this wont his true character in this story.


Nope Jigar will soon turn positive and thanks 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dear..the story is super. Pl do continue and would love to read more. Very happy that rashi is positive and aww sje supported meera. Love it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: -GiNa-

Hi Sana welcome to SnS forum.. Hope u have a gr8 time here 😃

fabulous start dear... I like ur concept especially Rashi but why Jigar turn nagitive 😕 anyways good going.. Next update soon 😊


Thanks and he will turn positive soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: scarlet167

Welcome to the forum dear..the story is super. Pl do continue and would love to read more. Very happy that rashi is positive and aww sje supported meera. Love it.


Thanks😊

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