RAJI GOHEM FF:BETRAYAL(Part 15 Pg 53 ) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: jiyakapoor

Great job rucha starting is just awesome ... I really like jigar's character plz update soon

thanks jiya glad u lyked his character
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first update is awesome waiting to know further.
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Rucha well done dear 👏 love first part 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: gohemforever

first update is awesome waiting to know further.



thank u so much glad u lyked it 😃 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -GiNa-

Rucha well done dear 👏 love first part 👍🏼
looking forword next 😊

thank u soo much really happy u lyked it 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dia.sharma

Wow beautiful ff just love Jigars character

update soon 😊


Thank you me too luv Jigars character 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part2
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Jigar came out the washroom
got dressed and went downstairs for his breakfast.

whilst he was eating his phone rang, Ahems name appeared on the screen Jigar quickly picked the phone and said
Jigar: Wag1 bro wats up
Ahem: Dude guess what a dank girl has come to college todaii shes new she's bloody fit bro, but bro she's not your type
Jigar: Oh really (munching his toast)
Ahem: yh shes wearing a salwar kameez but she is fit bro the whole college is talkin bout her bro hurry up and get your ass here!!
Jigar: Heh bro chillax am on my way.

Jigar finished his toast and got up to go when Hetal said
Hetal: Jigar are you going college
Jigar: what...obviously Mom where else will i go this early hmm
jigar walked away when he reached the door he shouted out
Jigar: hehe Mom dont stay awake todaii for me cuz defo im ganna be late bye Mom
he said that and walked out the house into his car and drove off

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hope u lyked it 😃
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Edited by rucha123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rucha just to good dear 👏 love the update

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start do continue and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's awesome rucha great start eagerly waiting to know what is waiting for leads in your story.😊

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