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Posted: 12 years ago
A terrific update Delsi!

Whilst relationships with his mum and the family are coming together, the evil force of Rashi is still persisting. Looking forward to Rashi's punishment in the next update.

It was so interesting to read of Gopi's attempt to encourage Anita to listen to what Ahem has to say. My curiosity is raised too.

The story is developing very well. Keep the updates coming.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swasthi

A terrific update Delsi!


Whilst relationships with his mum and the family are coming together, the evil force of Rashi is still persisting. Looking forward to Rashi's punishment in the next update.

It was so interesting to read of Gopi's attempt to encourage Anita to listen to what Ahem has to say. My curiosity is raised too.

The story is developing very well. Keep the updates coming.

Thanks swasthi a families happiness is fulfilled the child smile its true hear too,
Gopi's attempt is a wifely duty and the love they show for each other
you ill surely enjoy the Rashi's punishment part
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Posted: 12 years ago
A great part😛
looking forword more parts😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nilani19

A great part😛
looking forword more parts😛

Thanks nilani
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Posted: 12 years ago
delsi..its superb! eagerly waiting for precap! 😊 i would love to see what anita says! thanks for the pm yaar! its brilliant
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MADHU.BARUN

delsi..its superb! eagerly waiting for precap! 😊 i would love to see what anita says! thanks for the pm yaar! its brilliant

Thanks Madhu for loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for all your wonderful comments hear is next update
part 17:

In the evening Ahem finish his pending work decided to go home and rest for a while he got collect Rohan from school, when they reached home Gopi was engrossed fully in preparing the design that she din't notice Ahem and Rohan, Ahem slightly smile before he could distract her Rohan's voice break her she slightly turned to see Ahem and Rohan waiting for her to give them her attention, Gopi give them a bright smile and close all her work and proceed to look after her son and her husband.

At night Gopi putting Rohan into sleep Gopi decided to do some work until then Ahemji return from discussion from the study room she proceed to take necessary things before she could reach for it a had grab her from behind, she realize it was Ahemji, (Ahem came from the study room to see Gopi reaching for the files he smile himself, he is happy to give this work to Gopi) Gopi I given you these work coz you should not feel bored in daytime while myself and Rohan not around you but now you ignore me and going to have your work ah, Ahem nutshell near her ears making her to fly butterflies in her stomach.

Ahemji iam not besides I can't ignore you I taught to finish little bit before you come, she turned and hold her ears, automatically Ahem's heart started to melt, he remove her hands from her ears and move towards the bed make her sit on the edge carefully not disturbing Rohan's sleep, Gopi I need to give you something close your eyes, Gopi closed her eyes with puzzle smile to herself to see Ahem with playing mood, Ahem went to pick the thing he brought from the mall, he came back and put the chain on her neck, Gopi realize the something going around her neck, before Ahem could ask her to open her eyes, she touched the chain.

Ahemji I told its not imp………… before she could say anything Ahem place his index finger on her mouth to make her shut, I know it's really not important to you now but form now onwards it's not remembers of your mother but me, he make her to touch the chain again then she realize something hearten shape, Ahem hold the pendent of the chain it's a two embedded hearts with "R" enclosed by it, no one can't notice the letter inside the letter inside it, this is the symbol of mine and Rohan's love towards you, in whatever situation you should not remove it, if that happens then you ill lost….. no Ahemji I won't remove it at any cost I promise, saying so she place her head on his chest closed her eyes to thank her kanaji.

In the morning Ahem anxiously waiting for Anita, he is little bit scared how Anita going to react for the truth he pray to Kanaji to make her understand, before he could think further Anita arrived there on seeing her he become more worried he can't able to meet her eyes for few minutes there is a complete silence neither of them don't know how to proceed, Ahem took a deep breath started, before he could say anything "Ahem why didn't you marry me, you know that you can't love me you have a wife and a child then why", Anita plz I know iam wrong what I did is totally unfair but believe me and hear me what iam trying to say.

Anita wipe her tears tell me Ahem what you want to say, "Ahem started to tell her the past of his life starting from airport incident till his confession to Gopi, not only the past but his heart", till the entire conversation he din't meet her eyes after finishing the story developed his love for Rohan, again there is a complete silence btw them Anita is the first one to break the silence "Ahem I feel sorry for Gopi, kinjal and Rohan, you are doing right thing, you know I came here not only for Gopi asked me but to hold your collor and to give me the answer but after hearing your past iam totally confused I don't know what to do", "Anita I know its really heard to believe that but you should, you should take the decision Anita", "ya Ahem I know, but before I could take any decision I need time to think for myself and my future too, so I think I should leave India and my parents for few days to think of myself", "Anita you can take time to think but that's not meant that you should leave India and your parents", "no Ahem iam leaving not only because of that but also my parents, you don't know what is happening in my house they all need money and his daughter should be in wealthy family but they don't think what is in your nor mines heart, that's why so plz don't stop me iam going to US by tomorrow, Ahem don't worry I need to be alone for some time before think of anything else if I don't see you this ill be my decision for some time I need to be alone from all you for few days" saying so she left the place leaving Ahem to deal with more guilty.

He is distracted by Jigar's call asking for him the design he rush to MM, Gopi came out from washroom she is shock to see the whole tea spilled on the chart, she rush to see the entire thing is spoiled Gopi started to cry this what Ahem see her crying with the chart in her hand "Gopi what happen to this" after seeing Ahem she started to cry more Ahe…mji.. woh…woh… I don't …. Know Ahem left the place without realizing Rohan calling him.

In MM office

Chirag scold Ahem for his irresponsibility and handing over the projects to Gopi, he accused for believing her, he told that this ill happen so I myself give this to our own designer thank god I dint believe you fully, Ahem feel ashamed don't know what to do and left the place.

In MM

Gopi feel bad for Ahem that coz of her he is getting into trouble always she is distracted by Meethi calling Gopi "Babhi informed that lunch is ready asking to have lunch and give to Rohan too" Gopi wipe her tears and started to search Rohan she saw him coming towards the rooms she notice the oil can in his hand "Rohan what is this why are you caring this in your hand" Mummy woh my cycle I put… ok now come we can have lunch, when they come down straits they hear Rashi sound, they rush to see Rashi lying on floor Kokila and hetal help her to get up.

They saw oil on the floor "oil how come oil spilled hear" puzzled Kokila "Mota Babhi you take her to room I ill call the doctor and inform Jigar" When all are left the place Gopi become suspicious on Rohan before she could ask him Doctor arrived she followed him to Rashi's room stand by the door way mean while jihem arrived Rashi keeps on screaming while doctor checking her Gopi moved from that place went to see Rohan.

Gopi came to see Rohan who is sitting quietly, once seeing Gopi Rohan went near her but Gopi ignore him and went to arrange bed, Rohan try several time to make a casual talk but every time she ignore him. "Gopi what happen to you why are you not talking to Rohan" Gopi glance Rohan "Nothing like that Ahemji, iam just…"without finishing her sentence she went out of room Ahem confused by her behavior, other side Rohan worried coz Mummy is not talking to him, but he is sure she ill definitely feed him at dinner and he could talk to her.

Later in dinner time as usual all were sitting in dining table Gohem in kitchen, Gopi fill the plates for Rohan and Ahem, "Gopi what about you", "Papa Mummy ill feed me and have her dinner too, han na Mummy", Gopi shook her head in negative, iam little bit tired you yourself have your dinner saying so Gopi started to leave the place "Mummy iam so sorry for doing that to Kakai plz forgive me Mummy" all the family including Ahem shock to hear Rohan confession Ahem came towards Rohan what are you talking about ha", "papa woh… woh… Kakiji…I only spilled oil on the floor to make her fall", "WHAT, you Rohan have you gone mad", "no papa kakiji only spoiled the design that mummy draw that why I did so… iam so sorry" saying so he started to cry and ran into the room Gohem too followed him to the room, went in to see him sitting on the bed and crying, Gopi came forward and touch his shoulder "Munna" before she could tell anything Rohan hug her and started to cry his heart out. "Mummy iam so sorry for doing that plz forgive me mummy plz" Rohan pleading Gopi to forgive him, "Munna iam too sorry, Munna its very bad to hurt others even though they might done wrong, iam sorry for upset with you" "Rohan hear afterwards you should not do like this ok" Rohan shook his head.

In Raji room Rashi is lying on the bed after seeing Jigar she started to act as if it hurting so much, Rashi ill you shut up, "Jigarji what is this iam in pain and you are telling me to shut up, ha it is all coz you, you only got what you deserve" Jigarji what are you saying, rashi this punishment given by Rohan for your worst behavior, how could you stood so low, if you don't like Babhbi then separate from her don't trouble her coz of you Ahembai got scolding from you" "Jigar is telling truth Rashi (Ahem said from door way), Rashi I know you miss your father but just remain one thing if you miss your father then Gopi miss both her parents its not her fault, she is not even aware of your and your mum's present, all she know is he mama but even though he is with her she live like a orphan its not her fault its all coz your mom, hear afterwards don't do anything to Gopi" saying so he left the place.

In the morning Rashi came down stairs "Kakiji Rohan call from the other end, he came in front of her, Kakiji iam sorry for hurting plz forgive me Rohan said with pleading eyes Rashi still not convinced started to move while Hetal stooped her Rashi see how sweetly he is asking for forgiveness give him a chance Rashi I think he realize his mistake, Rashi look at her mother-in-law who has completely changed said "ok I forgive you don't do this ok" Rohan shook his head before going he turned to Rashi "Kaki you too don't do like this na" before Rashi could react Rohan run towards his room which makes Hetal laugh.

Hetal came to the kitchen with huge smile on her face "Mota Babhi what happen you look so happy", "its nothing Kokila iam just thinking of that sweet child how sweet intelligent he is, Gopi brought up Rohan very well even at this age he know what is right and wrong take a perfect decision and the love he is showing for his parents, he is willing to do whatever that makes his parents happy", "Ha Mota Babhi on that way we should apprise it, not only that I can see change in Ahem too , when Gopi and Rohan is around I can see him in a different way when myself din't see him with so affectionate"

Later while all are having breakfast door bell rings when Mani open the door its Anita's bro and Father standing at the door they came in shouting for Ahem Chirag and Parag arrive at great him "stop it your act Mr.Modi and call your beloved so n "What happen" on seeing Ahem and Gopi together in MM their anger rose oh sending my sister to hell you all are happily living together ah" , "Listen to me I can't understand what are speaking" , "you won't understand Mr.Modi coz of your son my daughter leave us and when to US its all coz of him", Chirag turned towards Ahem "Ahem what he is saying" "Kaka Anita told that she need to be alone for sometime so he went to US" and you allowed her question Anita's father, listen if I don't get my daughter back then I won't live you people "Ahem count your days Iam not going to leave you" saying so both of them left the place leaving total family in worry.

Thats all for this part hear afterwards iam not going to gine precap coz the stroy going to take many turns from now onwords there ill be many twist and turns in the upcoming update plz read and comment it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Delsi😃

Loved how Rohan stood up for his mom😆 Rashi is as bad as ever, ruining other's hardwork and giving her own reasons for it😡 It is nice to see that Rohan has the maturity to see that he is wrong. He apologized while Rashi did not. Shows the difference does it not?😊

Liked how you have sent Anita to US to think things over. Her family seem to be a bunch of jerks but do give her a happy ending Delsi😳 It was not her fault completely and I think Ahem knows it too😊

It is sad that GOpi's designs never saw light.. Pity.. Would have loved to see Chirag beg for more of her designs instead of shouting at Ahem. All in good time I suppose😊 Nice Update Delsi⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
just a awesome update!!!
waiting for next part already!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update Deeps
Love the encounter between Gopi Ahem and Roshan ... but its a little sad that her designs did not see the light but i have feeling that you may bring this again maybe in the future.. loved the bit where Rohan stood up for his mom.. nice ... but Rashi wat to say on her she is still Rashi... Anyways nice update Deeps

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