Ode to Anita

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Ashwin Maharaj

@ShaunSA

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Posted: 13 years ago

There was a girl called Anita

With a face that made you wanna beat her

So she set Aham alight

To see him burning bright

But alas our Gopi did cheat her!

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Ashwin Maharaj

@ShaunSA

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Posted: 13 years ago

Yeah I know it's a bad effort but it's Monday morning and my brain is dead! 😳

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Nilu Dasuni

@Nilu.Dasuni

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Posted: 13 years ago

no its good poem

but what happened to ur BRAIN suddenly...did anita attack

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Ashwin Maharaj

@ShaunSA

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nilu.Dasuni
no its good poem

but what happened to ur BRAIN suddenly...did anita attack

I kinda erm... over-used it this weekend 😳 😆

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A2ZVictory

@A2ZVictory

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Posted: 13 years ago

I found this poem on the net and I feel its really apt for Anita, though the writer is a male. It befits Anita too we..

A Vampire's Tale
Standing alone in the shadows
Restless leaves blowing gently at my feet
Under the pale moon's light, a fair-haired beauty comes on by
Unaware my presence ...

Ok now my version:

Standing alone in the shadows of MM

Restless silk sarees blowing gently at my feet.

Under the pale moon light, a tall dark hunk comes on by

Unaware of my presence.

Edited by A2ZV - 13 years ago

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Nilu Dasuni

@Nilu.Dasuni

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ShaunSA

I kinda erm... over-used it this weekend😳😆

oh!!!

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-Nafisa-

@-Nafisa-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ShaunSA
There was a girl called Anita

With a face that made you wanna beat her

So she set Aham alight

To see him burning bright

But alas our Gopi did cheat her!

Hilarious Shaun, like she had Aham as the target to set ablaze...so he could burn hotter for her. 😳