her first test
early morning
pooja time
whole modi bhavan is awake. the atmosphere is tense. it is almost 8 and the aarti has not yet started.
hetal question's koki.
koki with her usual i m never wrong smile says"motabhabhi, today anita wanted to do aarti. so we are waiting for her"
rashi intrepts her saying" par kakiji she never gets up before 9. so do we have to wait till 9"
just then anita comes down dressed up in a traditional saree. a green saree.
the camra freezes on each reaction.
hetal: smiling
koki: irritated
gopi: jealous
aham: unaware of her, watching only his wife. (but for anita it looks as if he is admiring her)
jigar: appreciation
rashi: murderous rage
anita comes and takes the pooja thali and with confidence approaches the mandir. she closes her eyes and sings the aarti song she has practiced the whole night. inside she is bubbling with joy that he first test towards aham is a great victory.
the modi members shut their eyes tights and plug their eyes to save themselves from becoming insane.
after a few moments the horrible noise stops.
slowly everyone open their eyes.
again camera freezes on each one's reaction.
everyone are shocked
anita is super shocked. the pooja thali drops from her hand with a clang
the colors which rise stimulate the holi image in the mind of aham.
koki has a victory smile. mission 1 success
the camera turns towards the mandir
where there used to be a big radha krishna statue.
the mandir was empty.
kanaji unable to bear the torture of anita singing had simply gone hiding.

hope you like it. i will come up with more test of anita.