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Thanks a million ton for appreciating PART FOUR. Am overwhelemed to the response from you guys, for the OS. Thanks again. 😊
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PART FIVE
Noon had passed away, the ladies were resting in their respective rooms. Anita was strolling up and down, thinking about the morning incidence, she spoke to herself "Ahem cant gift anything to Gopi. Why will he give gift her anything?? Noways, this isnt possible at all. Ahem cant gift anything to Gopi (pause) This Gopi must be lying. But, if Gopi was lying then why didnt Ahem stopped her there itself (pause) Anita, ho wcould he stop her?? His entire family was there at the breakfast and you know it very well, he can never hurt his family and especially his mom, he loves his mom very much. (pause) but, he should start voicing his thoughts, otherwise people will keep taking undue advatage of his silence. Poor soul has to grow the trauma almost daily, but (pause) dont worry Ahem, very soon you'l be bailed out of this trauma, I'l fix up everything, just have patience. (sighs and irritatingly continues) This Rashi, I wonder what she thinks of herself (pause) last night, she didnt allow me to spend time with Ahem and dropped like an uninvited guest between me and Ahem, how mannerless (pause) even on the breakfast table in the morning, she irritated Ahem soo much with her foolish talks.. poor Ahem..." There was a knock on her door, opening the door she is surprised to see HeKo.

Anita, welcomes the duo inside and requests them to settle down. Initially, there is a silence between them, breaking the silence Anita says "aunty, you had some work??" "we wanted to talk to you" said Koki "jii.. say" Anita responded. hetal took the charge and lovingly said "beta, we know you have through so much in your life (pause) But, beta this life at times we have to leave a few things behind and walk ahead in life" "aunty, what are you saying about?? i cant understand anything at all.." anita said confusingly "we're saying this because we have decided something for your benefit" Koki said "and what is that aunty??" Anita's heart was thumbing hard, "Anita (pause) I and mota bhabhi were planning to call panditji home, he has few marriage propsals for you" Koki said. Anita stood still and spoke nothing, absorbing every word which Koki said, her heart had stopped beating in hearing about the marriage proposals and tears brimmed her eyes because thoughts of losing Ahem were scaring her, Koki continued to say "Anita, dont worry we wont force you to get married, the pandit will be getting a few pictures of the boys who have put forth the marriage proposal for you (pause) if you like anyone of them, then we'l call them here to meet you.. Unless and until you dont agree for the marriage, we wont take any talks further with the family.. Trust me.." "yes anita beta, Koki is very right (pause) Afterall, the life is yours and its only you who'l have the authority to deal with it, the way you want too and ultimately, the decision is yours (pats Anitas cheek) beta, please give it a thought" saying this HeKo leave the room.

Anita, remained unmoved in her room, absorbing every word which Heko spoke to her. After awhile, her trance of thoughts was broken and she again spoke to herself "How I can get married to anyone else, apart from Ahem?? (pause) I know, Ahems mom very well, she wont spare me w/o getting married.. (sighs) I have to stop this marriage scenario by hook or crook.. but how?? (pause) hetal aunty said that the final decision will be mine, but Ahems mom will definately pressurise me to get married.. Oh God!! please bail out of this.. i cant stand anyone apart from Ahem to be my betterhalf.. we're just perfect for each other.. Il have to do something about it.. and that too very soon." "Anita" Rashi called her out, interrupting her thoughts and walked in "Anita, you look stressed?? what happened??" Rashi enquires "No.. Nothing.. (sighs) what are you doing here??" "wohh, the evening snacks are ready, come down for tea" Anita nodded her head and left the room, onm the other hand, Rashi realsied that something was fishy, with these thoughts Rashi too comes down.
GoShi and Anita were sitting in the dinning area. Gopi's cell beeped, "Gopi, you have received a message" Rashi said, "Rashiben, please see who it is.. my hands are filled with flour" Rashi agrees and opens the text and smiles to see a text from Ahem to Gopi, which said Good Evening, Gopi , she noticed Anita who was lost in her own thoughts, Rashi said "Gopi, jeeju texted you (hearing this Anitas thoughts were broken and pays a keen attention) he is saying sorry, as he couldnt call you in the whole as he had few important meetings with the clients (pause) what should i ans him back??" Anita was started roasting in jealousy. Gopi was confused to what Rashi said and merely said "Rashiben, text him its ok.. there is nothing to be sorry about" Rashi smiled and texted Good Evevning to you too, Ahemji.

Reading Anita's expression Rashi said "you know Anita, since the time Gopi had met with the accident (pause) jeeju calls her up to keep a check on her 3times i a day.. one, when he reaches office.. second, post lunh and thrid, before leaving from the office" "how do you know it Rashi??(pause) i dont think so, you're working with any telephone company to know the deatils" Anita said annoyingly "i know that am not working with any telephonic company (pause) and i know it, because initially Gopi didnt have a cell phone, it was recently jeeju gifted her the cell phone and anyways I and Gopi are sisters and she doesnt hide anything for me" and smiles half heartedly to Anita and so does Anita.

It was nearing to 6pm and Ahem would be arriving any moment, with this thought Anita kept glancing at the wall clock, imaptiently because she didnt wanted to miss any oppourtunity of spending time with Ahem. GoShi noticed the impatiency of Anita and realsied what was running in her mind, Rashi signalled Gopi to relax as she was all set to backfire Anita's plan once again. Rashi almost yelled "Oh my God" "what is it Rashi?? why are you yelling like this??" asked Anita irritatingly, Rashi makes a face at her and said "wohh.. actually, kakiji had asked to get the clothes from the terrace and i forgot (pause) Gopi, please peel off the cucumber after you get done with the dough, till then il go an dget the clothes or else kakiji will screw me up" gopi, smiles and nods a yes. "Anita, comw with me and help me" Rashi said, to which Anita protested. But, Rashi kept on insisting and she even signalled Gopi to say something "Anitaben... clothes are too many, if Rashiben goes alone she'l consume alot of time and kakiji will get upset (pause) if you'l go and help her, things will get sorted soon and even you'l get a change.. you must have been bored the whole day sitting in the house", hearing Gopi say this Rashi smirked and continued "Anita, Gopi is very right (pause) and if she wasnt doing the dough i would have taken her along with me" "Rashi, you go.. am not well" Anita protested "Anitaben, then you go to the terrace, you'l have fresh air to breath and you'l feel better" Gopi said and Rashi almost felt like hugging Gopi, before Anita could protest any further, Rashi pulled her out of the chair and took Anita with her to the terrace and Gopi breathed a sigh of relief.

The door bell rang and Gopi opened the door to welcome her Ahemji, after so many days. GoHem stood their lost in each others eyes, reading the happiness which their eyes spoke, because of shyness Gopi looked away and broke the trance and Ahem walked in the house, "Ahemjii.. you go and freshen up (pause) till then il get your green tea" Gopi said lovingly and for Ahem it was nothing les then music to his ears, he nodded a yes and went to their room. On reaching his room, seeing his clothes laid down on the bed he thought am lucky to have you, Gopi.. i dont know what i would have done without you.. he took his clothes and went to the restroom. meanwhile, Gopi came to their room with his green tea, as he wasnt there so Gopi waited for him to return and within few seconds, Ahem was came out of the restroom, hearing the restroom door open, Gopi approached him with the cup of his green tea. Seeing Gopi, Ahem started to giggle a little, she was confused and asked "Ahemjii... what happened?? why are you" before, she could say anything further, Ahem silenced her by placing his finger on her lips and holding her hand, they walked towards the mirror and says "look at yourself (points to the mirror)". Gopi gets more confused and sees her image in the mirror and is surprised to see flour on her nose, she immediately lifts her hand to wipe off the flour, but Ahem holdsher hand and says "waits" and he lovingly caressing her nose, wipes off the flour from her nose, but w/o breaking the eye contact with Gopi, with this gesture Gopi blushes and smiles, with this GoHem were lost in their own world. GoHem were enjoying the proximity bewteen them, Ahem was enjoying the care and pamper which his wife showered on him and Gopi was more then happy to shower her care and pamper Ahemji, their trance was broken when meethi called Gopi, as she was needed in the kitchen. Ahem reluctantly left Gopi's hand and allowed her to go down.
Finally, dinner was done. Ahem was anxiously waiting for Gopi to return from the kitchen, he wanted to talk to her. After, getting done with the kitchen chores, Gopi went to their room and placed the water jug on the night table and went to arrange her bed and was helping Ahem with his bed on the couch, he calls her out "Gopi (sighs) i want to talk to you about something". But, before he could approach her any further there is knock on their door.
I stop here. let me know your views on this part.
Hope, you guys like it.
Thanks in advance.
Next update soon. 😊😊
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PS:- I am sorry for not having a proper GoHem romantic update. Il try my level best to somehow get a romantic GoHem update asap. Till then bear with me.
Edited by dhruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
That was awesome update dhruti. Loved each part. N thanx for cute gohem scenes.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: svtsns

That was awesome update dhruti. Loved each part. N thanx for cute gohem scenes.

yu welcome dear 😊😊
and am glad yu liked it 😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dhruti, that was a great update 😊.. finally got to read some Gohem romance after a long weekend away 😳.. Wonder what Ahem wants to ask Gopi and I bet its that deluded idiot at the door..!Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks a million tonfor appreciating PART THREE 🤗
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PART FOUR

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[DIV]<strong> The next dayhad arrived, Ahem was wakening up to theclingging sounds of bangles and payals, after so many days. But, before he was fully awake Gopi had left the room, again Ahem was seeing an empty r


nice one, finally,gopi had melted.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ab tak to Ahemjii should have developed aadat of having knock on the door whenever he tries to talk to gopi!!😆 nice update dear!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thankxxx 😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abbay

Ab tak to Ahemjii should have developed aadat of having knock on the door whenever he tries to talk to gopi!!😆 nice update dear!!!😊

hehe... trueee... i think now onwards he shud take gopi to the restroom and talk, atleast that door wont be knocked.😆
thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice. I love the romantic AHem dikra. Loved it to the core

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -neela-

Dhruti, that was a great update 😊.. finally got to read some Gohem romance after a long weekend away 😳.. Wonder what Ahem wants to ask Gopi and I bet its that deluded idiot at the door..! Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next 😉

@bold am sooo dying to see the gohem romance on the screen, but thanks to that maniac anita and the foolish competition, we wont be getting to see it 😡😡😡
am glad yu liked the update 🤗

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