FF: The Roulette of Envy (Part 12) pg.33/Dec. 7 - Page 23

thanks for update.going to read it.

Wow girl...!! U r absolutely on a roll !! Loved the Update ... If u r asking for options I feel Agni should to make ahem and mahua jealous praise gopi and her virtues , her behavious constantly and have her chatting with him happily ... Ahem will go nuts ... Maha will try and match up in her own way and it can all lead o a big confession of love from ahem and then opefully rememberence of the holi Miy maybe gopi and mahua can meet as become friends ... Another reason for ahem jealousy ... Agni and gopi going out together to meet mahua ...!! Tk care

Just lovely and 2 updates one after the another. You made my day, please continue, waiting eagerly for next part

U r a great Writter , loved it😛

lovely. gohem fighting n raji were awesome. 😊u describe the scene very well. keep going dear...👏 n hope u update the next part soon.

Wonderful FF Rachana😊 Loved all the character of your FF good rashi is positive.Liked agni character most and gopi is more vocal not too shy.

man things sure dont seem to be going well for the two
but then till they sort out everyhting they wont be getting any better too
god these two are just so frustrating sometimes

Originally posted by: gauri72

thanks for update.going to read it.

just read it.lovely fight at party.😉enjoyed it.

for suggestion I m too bad at twists like Ekta.My mil calling me so going, bye.

Thanks, Gauri! I think I'll continue the party scene in Part 12 as well. 😉

Originally posted by: poonamahem

Wow girl...!! U r absolutely on a roll !! Loved the Update ... If u r asking for options I feel Agni should to make ahem and mahua jealous praise gopi and her virtues , her behavious constantly and have her chatting with him happily ... Ahem will go nuts ... Maha will try and match up in her own way and it can all lead o a big confession of love from ahem and then opefully rememberence of the holi Miy maybe gopi and mahua can meet as become friends ... Another reason for ahem jealousy ... Agni and gopi going out together to meet mahua ...!! Tk care

I have to be on a roll, now that you know I'm off from school! 😆 Thank you for the suggestion. I will keep it in my mind. And Ahem already remembers Holi, Poonam. Remember, they were at the mandir to celebrate Rashi's pregnancy and some chandan powder flew and he remembered it. He just hasn't told Gopi that he knows. That's why he made his move on her. 😳And got R-E-J-E-C-T-E-D! 😆 I will make Gopi and Mahua meet though. They have to meet. 😃

Originally posted by: poonamahem

Wow girl...!! U r absolutely on a roll !! Loved the Update ... If u r asking for options I feel Agni should to make ahem and mahua jealous praise gopi and her virtues , her behavious constantly and have her chatting with him happily ... Ahem will go nuts ... Maha will try and match up in her own way and it can all lead o a big confession of love from ahem and then opefully rememberence of the holi Miy maybe gopi and mahua can meet as become friends ... Another reason for ahem jealousy ... Agni and gopi going out together to meet mahua ...!! Tk care

Awww, thank you! I will update it soon.

Originally posted by: nilani19

U r a great Writter , loved it😛

Thank you so much!!! 😳

Originally posted by: Savi_S

lovely. gohem fighting n raji were awesome. 😊u describe the scene very well. keep going dear...👏 n hope u update the next part soon.

Thank you!!! I'm glad you're liking Raji. Unlike in SNS, in Roulette, they are the perfect couple. Serenely happy. 😳

Originally posted by: archanakarthik

Wonderful FF Rachana😊 Loved all the character of your FF good rashi is positive.Liked agni character most and gopi is more vocal not too shy.

Thank you! Like you, even I love Agni's character the most. 😃

Originally posted by: chavvi16

man things sure dont seem to be going well for the two
but then till they sort out everyhting they wont be getting any better too
god these two are just so frustrating sometimes

These two are very frustrating. I just feel I'm going in circles, but Ahem totally did this during the Anita track so it's really plausible. I wanted him to confess to Gopi, but no, he kept everything inside until he couldn't squeeze the lemon anymore. *coughs* Gopi's pregnancy came out! 😆