FF: The Roulette of Envy (Part 12) pg.33/Dec. 7 - Page 15

Two updates for the price of one.😃 Lovely Rach. I am so loving this story. Well done. Btw. Have you seen bride and prejudice? It is really funny.

Vvv nice !!!! Can we read more Agni and gopi plsss !!! Let's make Ahemji jealous as hell !!!!

Originally posted by: Xarina

Two updates for the price of one.😃 Lovely Rach. I am so loving this story. Well done. Btw. Have you seen bride and prejudice? It is really funny.

I have...thank god my momma hasnt put any of us on the market...yet!😆😆😆

Great update👏. Thanks Rachna. You are a fabulous storyteller.

Originally posted by: ruchisahay

Great update👏. Thanks Rachna. You are a fabulous storyteller.

Want more 😃

Awww...Ruchi thank you! I hope you're feeling better now and that the baby is doing great! 😳

Originally posted by: swasthi

Superb update.

Very interesting schematic plan of their positions. It adds a visual dimension to words.

It has to be the silent love that exist in Ahem for Gopi to finally get her to safety and to be her protector.

Angi sure knows how to overcome tough situations. His awkward approach was well timed.

Looking forward to the next update soon.

Swasthi,
Are you talking about Part 7? I updated it with Part 8 today. I actually had a blast making that diagram. When I was writing it, I had no idea about where it was all happening. It wasn't until I made the "map" that it all fell into place. I'm glad you liked it. As for Agni, I can't say much. He just makes me want to sing "Mere Sapno Ke Rajkumar" in my besur and betaal voice. 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: white.band

ooo dame funny... i liked de sketch a lot...omg it was a cool trick on anita...agni is smart...deni want gohem also?😆

any way nyc..i was laughing lyk hell🤣

It made me laugh as well. 😆 Thank you!

Originally posted by: avi_12

hey read all ur updates at once well dat was before a day or two bt posting nw... they r al fabulous i luved the storyline in evrywy...best part ws ur diagram😆 n anita being kicked out part...i m really looking forward for nxt update...do update quickly n if possible n if u are pm ing oders den plz pm me too...

Thank you for reading Avi! I had to do away with her because I have to move Gohem's story forward. I couldn't do that with her always lingering around Ahem. 😃

Originally posted by: svtsns

Amazing update with anita leaving mm n that diagram. Eagerly waiting for ur next update with raji n gohem moments.

Savi, thank you! The churail is gone, giving me more time to add a bit of romance into the story. 😳