FF:New Bonding Part 10 pg 12 - 20/06 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update, hope Ahem dikra deals with Anita in the same way. Will be waiting for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good update, sweet and simple and straight to the point! Just hope Anita understands what Ahem is saying to her...
Look forward to the next part 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Great part, good Ahem was firm and clarified Anita's misconceptions. Please update soon.
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Loved how ahem cleared it with anita. Continue soon.
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This is great, please do continue.👏
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excellent update...ahem set anitha straight...waiting to see what happens next...
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Superb update.

This would have made a super scene on the show but it was not meant to be so.

Looking forward to the next update.
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Nice Updatee Cant wait too read the next part!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank You everybody for your lovely part. I am guessing i should continue this, so working on the next part.
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My Apologies for being so late...have exams and studying..soo

Part 8

Ahem is upstairs in his room. He is kind of upset actually. He cannot believe that Anita had the audacity to talk such about Gopi and his relationship. Yes, he knew that they marriage was just a name. But slowing and gradually things were falling into place.He knew he was liking Gopi, God,he basically just admitted it and he knew Gopi like him too.He just hoped Gopi would go back to her reserve self and be quiet again.God what is wrong with me,I myself told Gopi I liked her the other way.

Gopi is on her way upstairs with green tea. She is thinking,Did I over react about this whole situation?I really don't know what is wrong with me..suppose Ahemji thinks I am a psycho?Oh God..I cant believe I acted like that. Now what will I do,just give the tea and run.

So Gopi comes in the room.She sees Ahem seated looking at a file. Gopi enter.Ahemji your green tea. She is about to go and Ahem stops her. Gopi aren't you going to ask me what I told Anita. Gopi: no, I don't need too, I guess you talked whatever you had to Ahemji, plus I think I over reacted anyways, sorry about my behavior Ahemji and before Ahem could say anything Gopi was out thr room. Leaving an extreme confused Ahem.

On the other hand, Anita had made up her own conclusions. She came up with the conclusion that Ahem was brainwashed by Gopi. She thinks Gopi to be cunning with an innocent face.

Ahem is in his room. He throws the file on the bed.Now what is wrong with her. I cleared everything with Anita,yet stills she cares little about what I said. Oh god, you could never understand women.

Ahem I so confused that he doesn't understand anything.

Gopi now, is in the terrace. She is a little shocked with her behavior and also confused about her self. She is thinking,why did I react like that at the park and now?Im I being too possessive?Is this feeling correct?Why..I don't even know if Ahemji likes me or not. I know I love him and would do anything for him but does he?

On the other hand, Ahem is thinking,before it gets too late. I will have to tell Gopi my feelings about her, I know truly that I love her and her only, I don't know about Anita,was it even love? Or a college break?Or a college trend,I really don't know!!

Anita comes to the terrace where Gopi is as she had seen Gopi going there.. She tells Gopi..Gopi I am so sorry I can see your relationship with Ahem. Why don't you just get it Ahem doesn't like you! He never did and never will. I know him better than you and I have a strong feeling you are the one who pushed rubbish in his head.

Gopi goes upto her, ANitaben, why would I throw rubbish in my won husband's head?In the first place why are you throwing your anger at me like that?Who do you feel you are talking to?Oh no Gopi,relax,possessiveness is winning againIGNORE …Listen Anitaben, Ahem is my husband,and we are made together in heaven, I don't know what your problem is,but you cannot come to your own conclusions and another thing, I would never like to disrespect a guest, so I hope you don't give me a chance to disrespect you Anitaben, You stay like a guest you remain like a guest.You better take out your man-thief ideas out of your head, or I will show you how a guest should be treated,Oh kanaji what is happening to me,why am I feeling so possessive?

Before Anita had a chance to say anything, Kokila shouts for Gopi and Gopi leaves.

Ahem is in his room,with his business head thinking about how to state his feelings to Gopi.

Hope you enjoyed this part.Since you all told me to continue, I continued , so changed it to a FF.

I am sorry the update is rather short. After june 7th I am free as exams are ending then, so updates would be regular then.

Just a little spoiler here, in my FF Ahem will remember what happened on Holi,to know how..continue reading..lol

Please give me your suggestions and comments will be appreciated..

Back to studying..HopeYou enjoyed reading

Edited by _naksh_raz - 13 years ago

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