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Days had passed since ahem had an encounter with his past, Anita her presence and thoughts had kept ahem occupied, he was lost in his own world of thoughts, her return gave me him a tough time of his life. He would remain off beat for most of the time and gopi would face all his anger, frustation and irritation, without a single word, she would quietly suffer everything. On the other hand, rashi enjoyed playing a foul game between Gohem and things between GOHem went from bad to worst. They both had been back to the initial days of their marriage. It was one day, when Ahem had taken out his anger on Gopi, hurting her immensely, all her dreams and hopes came shattering down, she could now take it no more and decided to leave the MM and the Modi family. Afetr much persuasion her MIL and Kaki granted her the permission to leave the house.

Few days, after the massive argument, Ahem realised the changes in his relatioship with Gopi. She would no longer take off his office clothes, she would no longer bring his green tea and did no work which somehow was related to him, she would get up before he would and keep herself occupied in some work or the other, she go to sleep late in the night after he had gone to sleep, so there was absolute no talk between GoHem. .He had decided to talk to her about the same, that night he was till gopi came. she entered the room and seeing ahem awake, she a little shocked but, said nothing. She took out the luggage bag from her cupboard and started packing the same, as could no longer hold back he asked why are you packing the luggage?? what do you think?? when does a human pack his/her luggage.. its only when they are going out, isnt it?? this reply from gopi, shocked ahem to the core, as he had never expected gopi to say somethimg of this kind. gopi i am soory for what i did the other day, i know i shouldnt have behaved before he could say anything further, gopi cuts him off by saying sorry!?! huhhh... this is all you have to say to all the pain, sorrow and suffering you've put me through in the 2years of the marriage.. ahem was more shocked hearing this from gopi, but only manages tio say gopii.. what happened?? why are you behaving like thiss?? pauses and continues gopiii.. am extremely sorry.. i never wanted to hurt you.. it just so happened that, i was thinking about something and you kept enquiring about she cuts him of agian by saying mr. ahem modi, i kept enquiring because i knew something was bothering you alot.. and how do expect me to behave with you?? ahenjii.. am a human too, even i have feelings.. just beacuse i keep forgiving people for their mistakes it doesnt mean that am not hurt... first of you all hurt a person and then come up and just a sorry and think that the things will be fine and everything will be back to normal?? its always possible.. so mr. ahem modi, am leaving this house... ahem was standing all dumbstruck and couldnt say anything, gopi continues with her packing. Afetr she is done, she gives over him and hands a few things saying ahemjii.. this is the saree you gave on the navratri.. this is the cell phone you gave me, when i met with an accident and yeah, this rose you gave me on the VD, i wont be needing any more... yeah.. i have a few memories which am taking with me, i know with time may be il get over them.. hearing all this from gopi, ahem had lost his temper and said so you want to leave, right?? but, am not permitting yoou to go anywhere, so you're going to stay back here am not asking for your permission, am telling you what i have decided she said in a stern voice. there was a pindrop silence between the two, both said nothing. Afetr a while he said gopiii... look.. we can discuss this issue.. sit here... no ahemjii.. there is nothing left to discuss between us.. what am doing now, i should have done it long time back... maybe, the pain would have been lesser then.. she said in a stern voice. gopi, you cant leave me like this and just call off our relation okay he said in angered tone well, mr ahem modi let me remind you this relation has been called off a long time ago, have you forgotten that i had taken the marital vows we.. nooo... which i agve you, when i married youu.. and why should i saty here with you?? so that you have someone on whom you can take out all your build up anger?? and anyways, our relation has no love in it.. so why we a burdern for each other??? its way better that i leave this house... the sternness in her voice was persistent, hearing about no love in their relatioship, broke ahem's heart and he said saddly gopiii... it nothing like that, i do love youuu... i know.. i took alot off time to analyse my feelingsss.. but gopiii... i love you... i wish, ahemjiii... you would have said those words a few days ago, but now they have noe meaning in my life... you say you love me right?? but, alas!! ahemjiii.. i dont love you any moreee... hearing her say this broke ahem's heart in tousnads and thousands of peices, she hands him the divorce papers saying ahemjii.. i have signed these divorce papers... ahem again loses his anger and says if the relatioship has been called off, then why are you wearing this mangalsutra and sindoor?? because of you... because of your cowardness... beacuse you couldnt tell the entire society the truth about the relationship you shared with me... we are the so called amrried couple only in the eyes of law and the society... but, nowwe are no longer a copule in the eyes of law, beacuse o ahve given a divorce on mutual consent, without any alimony or maiteneance.. your free to live your life, the way you want to or rather the way you wanted to do... saying this gopi, walks over to the bed and switches off the light, ahem still standing there as shocked, after awhile he realised what he just saw and heard was all true. he silently prayed to kanaji saying that hope this a bad dream and tomorow, when he wakes up, things will be back to nornal. He turned to see gopi, but was fast asleep and her ahem was having the most restless night of his life.

The next day, everything seemed to be normal at MM. But, there was the silence which spoke about their grief, because it was the day, when their beloved gopi was going to leave the MM forever. Ahem came down rushing, saw everyone at dinner table and thoguht to himself that, it was d dream and behaved noramally with all. This irked Koki alot but said nothing, on the other hand, rashi's happiness kne no bounds from the fact that, finally gopi, the gawar was leaving the MM forever and she could rule the entire house on her terms and conditions. Gopi, came from the temple with her luggage and stood near the sofa seeing the Modi family for the last time. Baa sees her an calls her near the table, gopi walks up till there and baa says
betaa, re think about your decision its when baa says, ahem realises that it was no dream and was a reality and keeps looking at gopi with a shocked expression nooo... baaa... i had decided this ling tim back.. that i had to leave this housee... baaa... please dont persuade to change my decision.. i find to find a lot of courage to do thiss... Koki comes from behin d and says gopii vahuuu... i f possiblee.. please forgivee mee... it wsa because of mee, you had to go through all thiss... i wish few people could understand your importance.. and eyes ahem accussingly, and he looks down of guilt. nooo... maajiii... please stop accussing yourselff... the decision to leave the MM is all minee.. noone should be held responsible for the same... pauses maaajiii... one or the other i had to leave this houseee... and whatever happened was to destined to happennn... saying this gopi and koki hug each other, it wsa equally tigh for the two of them, to let go the other, as shared a mother-daughtre relatioship. Gopi moves towards hetal, takes her blessing and says kakijiii... please... stop cryinggg... kakijiii... forgive me, if i have ever hurted youuu.. kanajis promise i didnt do it on purpose... hetal couldnt hold back her tears and hugs gopi saying gopiii betaa, pleaseee dont leaveee... breaking the hug gopi says jai shree krishnaa... she then walks upto rashi and says rashiben.. please take care of everyonee... rashi just smiles and says nothing bhabhiii jigar calls from behind and says bhabhiii... please... dont gooo... our family is incomplete without youuu... nahiii... devarjiii... i need to gooo... pleasee... let meee gooo... before anyone could say anythign goi, walks upt o her luggage and starts walking towards the main door, before finally stpping out, she turns and sees the whole Modi family fro the last timeee & after a final bye, gopi steps out of the MM forever.. ahem had already left to their room as he was feeling all guilty and couldnt face anyone nor could he see gopi leaving the MM, he was shattered and broken, but couldnt say anything.

With this Gopi leaves the MM, Modi family, & especially ahemjiii. She settles herself in a new city, with new a beginning and new name around new people, so that noone can recognise her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I cant say , i really cant say how much i loved this OS, wow, I hav never found myselft at peace while reading any other OS than this, ... 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dhruti the os was cool!!! But I would say that I surely want separation track but nothing of this sort!!! (separation only for time being will do good to everyone)😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dhruti...awesome yaar...😊
but then I'm 😭...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gopi's re-birth...Loved it..was a breath of fresh air
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hetp

Dhruti...awesome yaar...😊
but then I'm 😭...

im the sameCry
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank yuuu 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abbay

Dhruti the os was cool!!! But I would say that I surely want separation track but nothing of this sort!!! (separation only for time being will do good to everyone)😃

thnak yuuu 😊
even i dun want this seperatio track, but this is all fictional... even i cant see GoHem judaa judaa... but ahem has to desrve some pain yaaa... he cant go scot free with his yummmiiieee looksss 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aaawwwieee... but this was my punishment to ahem, for being confused 😕😡
dun worry, il come up with some romantic OS especially fro you 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidishaa

Gopi's re-birth...Loved it..was a breath of fresh air

actually, i am little irritated with her character yaa.. i mean atleast once she should stand for herself, she needs to fight fro herself...

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