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Aish3003

@Aish3003

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: rsk16
really great. he will definately react like this.

Really Raunika? Gosh I so hope something similar happens... I also want some build up of frustration in him to see her distant... And then when she decides to leave or something.. He should just explode..

Please creatives!! 😊

Thanks for liking it.

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sadiltl

@sadiltl

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

@Aish

I am sandi, sandya. :)

nice OS by the way

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Ahem's confession...he has surrendered to Gopi😍

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Aish3003

@Aish3003

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sadiltl
@Aish

I am sandi, sandya. :)
nice OS by the way

Thanks sandya! 😊

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Aish3003

@Aish3003

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: feviewer
Ahem's confession...he has surrendered to Gopi😍

Thanks Vidisha!

He already has in some ways... she just doesn't know it. 😳 And he doesn't remember. 😳

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Nihira-fan

@Nihira-fan

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

wow!!that was awesome os! beautifully written as well!it was so intense and emotional...i just teared up!loved it!

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Nandita / Tina

@5cents

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Aish, FATALISTICALLY written... keeping the character of Ahem in mind!!! ..👏 I so want him to confess in anger young man mode

If it pans out the way you have written angry & emotional outburst... it will be ...Ai hai mar jawa swooning for me😳

It was simply outstanding...I'm in lallalallal land😍

Edited by 5cents - 13 years ago

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awww... *heart clench*

This OS was perfect. Absolutely perfect!

What more can I say? Thick Gopi and Emotional Cripple Ahemji, this can only happen between them. I loved it

Yuks