FF: Teri Ore.. Updated Part ten on pg21 (21/5)

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ddlj

@ddlj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Vinder90
wonderful update;

i would lo0ve to see Koki's raection to this, Ahem has lost the first priority which was Work and now Gopi is his first priority, total opposite of what Koki wants:

if koki had her way she has nothing against gohem coming closer, all she doesnt really want is romance LOl (just kidding, i cant seem to get the Gopi Koki scene, where Gopi gives koki that tough vachan)

hello.. thanks for the comments 😊

but i am confused.. which tough vachan are you meaning?

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Vinder90

@Vinder90

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ddlj

hello.. thanks for the comments 😊
but i am confused.. which tough vachan are you meaning?

oh sorry its where Gopi tells koki that she will never involve Ahem in house work(esp, Raji reuinion helping out), she will make sure that Ahem becomes as he was before, Gopi also says she will keep distance from Ahem... so on so on, (this was when Koki stopped Ahem from going to work, and Gopi had to act as the sacrifice to let Ahem go back to work)

Edited by Vinder90 - 13 years ago

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gmjudv

@gmjudv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

nice OS. Thanks for taking the time.

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varshu27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

great update prithi...love that ahem realises gopi is his top priority...cant wait for more...

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SriB

@SriB

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Simply wonderful update. Please continue soon.

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Good update.

So it was a dream after all.

He finally spoken what was in his mind. Sometimes the opponent voice can bring out the best in you as it had done so for him, telling her that she is priority.

Update soon.

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Rachna

@Chaccha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Do continue on please! 😳 And yes, make the boy pine. For every tear Gopi has shed and her every shattered dream, the boy has to pay equally. 😈

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JJ15

@JJ15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Hey!

That was fun to read! I loved the imaginary Ahemji, giving out little surprises and realisations one at a time. That twist was a good one. I agree, you shouldn't let Ahemji have everything so easily! Lets make him sweat first! 😆

Looking forward to the next update.😉

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ddlj

@ddlj

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

hello.. i have been a bit busy today, so havent been able to finish the next chapter, will update as soon as possible though..

thank you again for the wonderful comments and encouragement.,..

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navyab

@navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Liked the part ddlj...enjoyed it...Ahem's concern, giving her his jacket ...& being awed by her way of doing things & then telling her she is his 1st concern & knowing that his wife will be worried !!!

Agree with you Ahem cant get everything so easily 😉😛😆 !!! But poorguy he is trying so hard to please his wife 😉 !!