FF: Teri Ore.. Updated Part ten on pg21 (21/5)

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Superb update.

Here she is with him, wanting to comfort him. He is completely broken inside.

Update soon.

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doc4ever

@doc4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Beautiful! ⭐️ Update soon! 😃

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#113

how long is soon??😭 will u write raji in nxt update???

Edited by rashi.krishna - 13 years ago

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Eva456

@Eva456

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Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Oh wow Prithi,u really nailed it!u have me completely hooked to it.An awesome update:) update soon

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Savi_S

@Savi_S

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

Amazing part prithi. Ahem and gopi playing with children lovely and ahem get to know about holi day. Wow. Eagerly waiting for next part.

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Vinder90

@Vinder90

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

absolutely wonderful update. loved it. . .

This is the only place where my hopes of SD remembrance come to life, otherwise I have long lost any faith in CVs to catch up on that part again

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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

wonderful part 😉 !!! Well I love Gaurav for getting Ahem & Gopi to shed inhibitions & just play 😛 !!! Ahem was wonderful in teasing Gopi 😆

Well Ahem now knows the truth & he is hurt more than Gopi is...well who else can calm him than his Gopi...will Ahem be able to share that he now knows what is troubling her heart & how miserable he feels for having let her down !!!

Waiting for the next part 😊 !!!

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yhm_craze

@yhm_craze

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

that was a lovely update!👏...wish we would get to see something like this on the show!

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chenling

@chenling

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

I've finally had a chance to read all this..wow...I love it, I love how you captured both Ahem and Gopi's emotions/struggles. I love this!!!!!!!! Can't wait until you update!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Prithi, Excellent updates, I caught up with all the parts and I moved by Ahem's thoughts and actions, but this last part was very emotional for both Ahem and Gopi.

At least now he can set things straight.

Looking forward to the next part.

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