OS: She means the world to me

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ANJ4

@ANJ4

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

whaat a wonderful OS .. I wish too this would happen on the show... but no they are just going to show more of U&R.

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navyab

@navyab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

wonderful os shilpa... Ahem believed only in his gopi and none else shows how much he loves her...and realising tat thr is more to her grief shows how much he understands and reads her !!! 😉

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GiNa_kavya

@GiNa_kavya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Shilpa👏👏👏👏👏
It brought tears in my eyes when Gopi was struggling to tell the truth to him.
But happy that Ahem understood that she is hiding something else thats associated with him too.
I wish this could happen in SNS.
Please do continue to write everyday!

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jazz54321

@jazz54321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

⭐️wow..Shilpa..very very very nicee os.. 👏 a very gooodd read indeed 😊

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Nilu Dasuni

@Nilu.Dasuni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

wow! Lovely os by u shilpa!
Its great

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Not Avaliable

@Arnisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

wow great OS Shilpaben amazin...

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Scarlet28

@Scarlet28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

👏👏👏 Congrats Shilpa...this OS is not only well written but I love the way you tackle the issue of the mangoes and the way Ahem cares for her...Rupal is right, if CVs continues along your storyline it would be fantastic.

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Ashwin Maharaj

@ShaunSA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sbp1971
"Theek chai," Koki turned to Gopi and realized her vahu was scared, this made her eyes sting once again. She knew her vahu had lied only to save her and Motabhabhi's relationship and she was very proud of her vahu for this. "Gopi vahu there is no need to feel bad for this; I know you didn't make the mistake. Once again you have proved to me that you are the best choice and vahu of Modi family." She saw her vahu take a relieved breath but Gopi was unable to stop the tears. Koki wiped her tears gently and placed her hand on Gopi's head gently.

Damnit shilpa you made my eyes tear when I read this bit! I hate being sappy! 😡

But brilliant OS! Was a real pleasure to read! Loved it to bits! 👏 👏 👏

Ah if only the CV's read a tenth of the awesome quality stuff you guys put out! 😍