My first OS - Rang Dala

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Nazma

@NazmaJ

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Love it!!!

Ahem was amazing but Kokila was magnificent!!!

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Vidisha

@Veni-Vidi-Vici

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Never imagined Koki winking 😉

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aris22l

@aris22l

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Thank you all for reading my first OS and for commenting on it. I was in a hurry to get it out before Holi. I am glad you all liked it. I have never written anything like this before, so wasn't sure how it will turn out. Thanks for your encouragement.

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Jammona

@Jammona

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Nice OS and finally we got to see a positive interruption

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aris22l

@aris22l

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: kamjal
Nice OS and finally we got to see a positive interruption

Thanks Kamjal. And after one interruption, Kokila made sure there were no more😉

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

As a first story Aris that was beautifully written. It was enjoyable reading about a fun loving Ahem and a well in tuned Kokila.

I look forward to reading more stories from you in the future.

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Traxy101

@Traxy101

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

I would love this to happen

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aris22l

@aris22l

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: swasthi
As a first story Aris that was beautifully written. It was enjoyable reading about a fun loving Ahem and a well in tuned Kokila.

I look forward to reading more stories from you in the future.

Thank you Swasthi. My writing is kind of rustic, nothing like yours. I read your OS on the morning after Holi. Wonderful. Hopefuly, I wil be able to write more.