My first OS - Rang Dala - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love it!!!

Ahem was amazing but Kokila was magnificent!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Never imagined Koki winking 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you all for reading my first OS and for commenting on it. I was in a hurry to get it out before Holi. I am glad you all liked it. I have never written anything like this before, so wasn't sure how it will turn out. Thanks for your encouragement.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS and finally we got to see a positive interruption
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kamjal

Nice OS and finally we got to see a positive interruption

Thanks Kamjal. And after one interruption, Kokila made sure there were no more😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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As a first story Aris that was beautifully written. It was enjoyable reading about a fun loving Ahem and a well in tuned Kokila.
I look forward to reading more stories from you in the future.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I would love this to happen
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: swasthi

As a first story Aris that was beautifully written. It was enjoyable reading about a fun loving Ahem and a well in tuned Kokila.

I look forward to reading more stories from you in the future.

Thank you Swasthi. My writing is kind of rustic, nothing like yours. I read your OS on the morning after Holi. Wonderful. Hopefuly, I wil be able to write more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Traxy101

I would love this to happen

Yes, me too. I hope the CV's have something even better in store for us next week.

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