OS(on Holi) - LastPart Pg8- Thank you Note Pg 12

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Tahira

@tamzin43

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

i,m hungry for more 😍😍 well done 👏👏

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ankita_raji

@ankita_raji

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

tht was amazing...thanks for including raji as well...loved their scene...plzz update soon!!!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Shruti. This is the most fantastic OS and it goes without saying that I can't wait to read more. My favorite it the photo collage, what an idea, it is so symbolic and romantic too. The sindoor scene is the one that I hope they give us on Holi.

This year I really looking forward to Holi.

@VM anytime, it was nice watching it again.

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Beautifully written Shruti.. I cant wait to read more !!

Loved the VM as well.. Thank You !! 😊

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Dhabu89

@Dhabu89

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Thank you so much Shrut for this much needed OS. It was beautifully written. Looking forward to the next part 😃 I love the way Ahem did the photos and how he applied sin door...lala land again😍 Please update soon...I'll be waiting😊

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sweety

@sweetsugar

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

awww! very beautifully written shruti , loved his way of surprising her .

She staggered and moved a step back freezing there itself when i read this i was like has he coloured her face while she was asleep ..😆 but his surprise was soo heartfelt and beautiful