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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am bored again n seeing as its going to be my future track what better way than this


Rashi finally got her way, the family were splitting up. Rashi says to Jigar ji why do we have to leave? this is our house as well,why cant kaki n there family leave this is not right i think we should go to court for our rights Rashi we are leaving thats it no use in arguing mummy n papa are getting ready.

They all come down, kokila is now angry n looks at rashi in a evil way, chirag n hetal say to baa when they find a place they will let her know, kokila has tears in her eyes she is about to say something but parag holds her hand, then kokila has a flashback whereas kokila says jigar will be told the truth if the two families split up.
Kokila shouts ONE MINUTE mota bhai mota bhabi you have forgotten aham ka babas vachan he said that if the family splits then jigar has the right to know the truth, right then hetal n chirag look at each, n they look at kokila, hetal starts to cry nahi kokila he will break, kokila replies and what you are not breaking my heart now by taking him away he is not suppose to leave modi mansion n kokila looks at baa ji baa, n baa agrees.
Mota bhabi i was devastated when everyone decided this but eventually i agreed as i knew he will still be here in modi pavan but i will not have my child taken from me a second time round not by you or rashi. Hetals says kokila nahi plse nahi, why mota bhabi why not that was the agreement so why not, jigar looks at kaki i know kaki already, kokila looks at him shocked so does hetal, kakiji i have always known , rashi looks at him know what jigar ji, kokila looks at her jigar cant leave mm because its his right to be here, you want to leave you all can but jigar stays here, rashi looks at her n gives her a dirty look. Hetal looks at kokila why are you doing this? first the constant harassment of rashi then you made a issue of the puja, then when jigar went to work with fever you did not make such a deal of it.
kokila looks at hetal mota bhabi with respect i did not make a big deal of the puja as i told you if you wanted to get the priest yourself then why not let me know instead we faced the embarrassment of the colony, Baa say that is right hetal why didnt you tell kokila that you had invited the preist as well, Hetal looks at Baa because rashi said that kokila may have have forgotten so hence that is why so kokila looks at hetal what else did rashi say shall i tell you mota bhabi word for word kokila repeats everything that rashi says n did hetal looks at rashi in disgust again she has been duped, then kokila says the day of when jigar was ill , aham asked rashi to tell jigar to come but rashi told him that he was sick he told her to tell jigar to rest as he would take care of it so he left, as for him taking rickshaw under normal circumstances it would be fine, then i send him kridgree to the office, hetal looks at kokila you sent him kridgree but rashi said she did, so then kokila repeats everything to hetal again, this time hetal puts her hands on her head what have i done. kokila plse forgive me hetal starts to cry.
Jigar looks at kokila n goes to hug her kaki, jigar you cannot leave me i cant let you leave me, Rashi looking round wondering what is happening my kalakari not working how do i get out of this?
Chirag looks at hetal after what kokila has done for us you, how can you think like this hetal? tell me hetal how could you? a mother hands over her child to you who could not have any, how could you have forgotten than hetal, Rashi had you fooled i mean all of us again being fooled by this girl no more..
rashi looks at jigar, jigar ji what are you all talking about? i dont understand , jigar looks at Rashi my real mother is kaki ji, Rashi shouts out kargari never she cant be your mother never rashi starts to cry i want to have my rights, jigar looks at her what rights rashi i want the same rights as gopi n aham jiju jigar looks at her that cant happen rashi because i am the younger brother.
Rashi we will be leaving but to take you back to where you came from? Chirag looks at jigar here give these keys to kinjal she can move from rajpal nagar to the apartment we have to remember what happened last time so kokila baa n myself came up with this solution that kinjal n dhawal ji gets their own home without intereference from those two.
kokila goes up to hetal n puts her hands together mota bhabi plse forgive me if i have hurt or disregarded you in anyway but plse dont leave we have such a loving home plse. Both hug n hetals asks forgiveness from all.
Rashi n her mother enjoying each others company in cm Kinjal found out she won the lottery threated to have urmilla sent to jail kinjal even took away the equipement so she used that to work out everyday n then she started personal training course .

Back to happy modi family 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
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res!

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wow suk!! have no words!! beautiful OS!!!! enjoyed it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is exactly what we all want. perfect os for the perfect mood we are in.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was really good , now let's hope the cvs can' think like you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb !!! Well Done!👍🏼...
loved it 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice!!!hope CVs take a note!

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That was a wonderful OS. I just found this. I am happy I read this. It was beautiful. Rashi is kicked out and the family is back together...I love happy endings. Until the next track of course. Thank you for writing this wonderful story. It was just amazing...superb...fantastic...mind blowing...intense...heart warming...perfect ending to Rashi...everything in there but the kitchen sink😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderfully written. I am intrigued. 👏👏👏👏👏

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