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Scarlet28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Someone has to give Kokila a piece of their mind, well it definitely isn't going to happen on the show... great OS enjoyed it very much.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

adaa i think your os will come true

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Lovely OS Ayesha ... do write more.

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-GayabCat-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: CHIKA784
RESERVED!👏

*EDITED*

Oh wow,That was great Ayesha!😃

The best bit was the re-entry of TEJAS!😳

TEJAS,Wahayyy my TEJAS!😳

I love how nowadays theres lots of OS's about TEJAS!😛

Thanks everyone!😆

Anyway coming to the point,Wow Ahem's dialogues were hillarious!😆

Loved it Ayesha!,Hope you continue to write more!🥳

🤣 i so knew u will love tejas re entrance so i brought a wee miny entrance. Glad u loved it but i seriously didnt even think it was funny at all, i just wrote what came in my head yenoe.

Aham wasnt hilarious my friend.. i hope he is like that in the show so that i can be at peace 😆

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-GayabCat-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Xarina
I am glad you got him to stand up to Kokila. Good on you. My OS is completely different to yours isn't it. Same idea but different take. X xx

Thanks Xarina

i seriously think u should post ur oneshot now too. xxx

i seriously thought aham should stand up for once, but didnt think this would turn out hilarious esp those dialogues *mirch lagi*

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-GayabCat-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: hanaGoHem
nice hope some thing ilke this happen

thanks hanagoHem

Originally posted by: varshu27
great os aada...lol at koki saying no SR🤣...loved it...

thanks Varshu. glad to make u rotfl😆

Originally posted by: amalaziz
loved it😊

thanks

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-GayabCat-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Nihira-fan
that was very nice OS!!loved it!!

Thanks Nihira 😆

Originally posted by: ever
Wonderful os loved it

thank You

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-GayabCat-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: vibz88
You decided to kill everyone by making them cheer ahem in this match. It was superb. I loved that ahem gave it back and honeymoon also? Wow. Do write more.

🤣 u cant be hillarious than this can u vibha

ah well i didnt even know what i was writing so..

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-GayabCat-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: SriB
Adaa,superbly great OS. We know this is never gonna happen in the show but I enjoyed it immensely just imagining if this would happen. Wow.

thanks Sri.. u never know if it will happen

the cvs have read this oneshot. and considering to put it in the show. we shall see tomorrow or the day after if aham burst out to koki or gopi, if it happens to be koki then my os is true wahayyy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad
OMG adaa love u yaar 🤗...
and u woke my son up... yeah i was laughing out so loud he woke up,...

this is the craziest and the most funniest OS i ever read ...

Adaa u rock😆 ...u have a funny fuse in you🤣

superb dialogs😆

D'aww love u too

oii he my son. uh ho the character is urs, original nazim is mines 🤣

u found that funny.

i found this oneshot stupid. i didnt even know what i was ranting on here.

u seriously think i have this funny fuse on me that i never reveal 😆