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-GayabCat-

@-GayabCat-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Xarina

Does that mean that I got you out of semi retirement? Cool!!!!

Aye aye matey
6 mnths retirement on ffs ss os is good. Wish I stayed retired more on this forum. There better ppl writers than me

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Omg ahems give as good as he got was genius. Rip roaring funny dialogue , again ahem was to funny with the grandchild remark. Well written , I really loved it , I wanna see this happen in serial tomm , y do I have a sneaky feeling he won't try to pacify his mom like he normally does . Thank you adaa for great entertaining piece .

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

You decided to kill everyone by making them cheer ahem in this match. It was superb. I loved that ahem gave it back and honeymoon also? Wow. Do write more.

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SriB

@SriB

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Adaa,superbly great OS. We know this is never gonna happen in the show but I enjoyed it immensely just imagining if this would happen. Wow.

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gohem123

@gohem123

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Adaa, that was hilarious...Ahem speaking all these to his mommy...😆
Am desperately waiting for parag's genes to do wonders and to see gohem SR... 😉

And tejas..entry...I wish you could write that part too..(another OS maybe)

Thanks for the lovely story...

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maddy311

@maddy311

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Nice OS adaa. Would love to see this kind of conversation between koki and ahem😃

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Nilu Dasuni

@Nilu.Dasuni

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Nice os ayesha! Love the story very much 😊

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@Arnisha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

nice OS Adaa ahem shuld def stand up to koki in the show n i hpe he does sum day...

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Pallavi Sarkar

@pallavisarkar

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

gr8t awesome👏👏

loved ahems dialogs

i love ur ff , os

i have read them before

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priya

@priyaraghav

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

loved the way ahem replied to kaagdi... Bt we all know this can't happen in the show, but I wish jaldi ahem ji gopi ji ki side lein aur apni MOM ko bye bye bol dein...
LOLZZZ

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